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Greg Freeman

Sun 2nd Oct 2022 22:49

Beautiful poem, John. Overflowing with love.

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John Botterill

Sun 2nd Oct 2022 21:18

Thank you, Flyntland. That is really kind of you 😀

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Flyntland

Sun 2nd Oct 2022 15:30

Juliet " You are a lucky girl, ideed!" to have such a lovely poem written just for you by such a loving grandad.

I wish her every happiness.

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julie callaghan

Sun 2nd Oct 2022 12:56

Thanks Stephen. I felt very lucky in the end. It was a great experience.

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 2nd Oct 2022 11:40

Congratulations Julie! 'The Wife' is so jealous lol. She adores He 😄

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Flyntland

Sun 2nd Oct 2022 10:29

"It's the-rifle butt nature of all this"

just eight words that set the scene - the brutality - the mind destroying domination - the fading ability to resist.

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Flyntland

Sun 2nd Oct 2022 10:19

Thank you Stephen for your comment -
I expect you have guessed that I am very fond of my "left over birds" - their behaviour is fasinating to observe.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 2nd Oct 2022 10:06

Thank you very much, Greg. Yes, we must have hope and faith that the bullies will not win.

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Greg Freeman

Sun 2nd Oct 2022 10:04

Well done, Steve. Hope is the only word I can find these days. Hope that Ukraine will eventually win. Hope that the Russians will eventually kick Putin halfway down the road.

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julie callaghan

Sun 2nd Oct 2022 08:47

Thanks for the likes and kind comments. Definitely a day I will never forget.

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 2nd Oct 2022 02:33

Thank you so much, Stephen, I'm extremely grateful for your kind comment! 😊

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John Coopey

Sat 1st Oct 2022 23:28

Nice one, Stephen. And how about “Vaseline Alley”?

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 1st Oct 2022 18:32

I suppose 'What a feeling' is a contender, John.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 1st Oct 2022 18:29

A remarkable story, Julie.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 1st Oct 2022 18:23

'Adumbrate' was new to me, Holden, and the whole poem flows and crackles with inventiveness.

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John Botterill

Sat 1st Oct 2022 18:20

Thanks Russell. Her photo makes me think she is full of character. I can't wait to meet her😀. As you say, it will be a joy, I'm sure.
Thanks for the like, Adam.

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John Coopey

Sat 1st Oct 2022 18:02

Stephen, my original intention was to parody The Beach Boys “Good Vibrations”. But
a) the chords were too hard
b) the singing was too hard.
Alternative suggestions are most welcome.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 1st Oct 2022 17:58

I like 'inflated egos power home', Flyntland. Why anyone wants to shoot beautiful birds is beyond me.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 1st Oct 2022 17:54

I've heard of back channnels but this is ridiculous.

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Greg Freeman

Sat 1st Oct 2022 17:13

Thanks very much for your good wishes, Sharron. And good luck with your continuing monthly live poetry night at the Solar Sisters cafe in Guildford

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 1st Oct 2022 14:52

Had to change it as I was unhappy

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 1st Oct 2022 13:16

The joys that grandaughters bring never fades,
each new day enhances the memories of those previous

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John Coopey

Sat 1st Oct 2022 12:55

I shall experiment at our local pub quiz, Ray.

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Sharron Green @Rhymes_n_Roses

Sat 1st Oct 2022 12:29

It certainly was a packed house on Thursday! Thanks to Greg and Rodney for organising and all the best to Greg for the move. Looking forward to buying a copy of the anthology 🤩

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Flyntland

Sat 1st Oct 2022 11:39

My thanks to Frederick - John Coopey - Jon -Julie and to Holden for taking the time to read and pressing the like button.

Pheasants are bred in their thousands to be shot - but each and every one of them is an individual with it's own personality.
A small group of 'left over' birds gather in the comparitive safety of my garden, feeding from seed that has fallen from the bird feeders and hand outs from me. One little hen even pops her head round the door and 'chunters' for a bit extra.
If pheasant is an important part of the food chain they should be killed quickly in a more humane fashion. Escapees have a tough time trying to adapt.

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 1st Oct 2022 11:17

great story telling😃

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raypool

Sat 1st Oct 2022 11:02

Like a sort of morse code John, or is it a coarse code? An unusual idea but it could catch on with or without the chess I suspect.

Ray

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Hugh

Sat 1st Oct 2022 08:34

A heating nightmare starts today,
The 1st of October,much more to pay !!!!!

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John Coopey

Sat 1st Oct 2022 08:26

Ah, the old Grapes of Wrath, John.
And thanks for the Like, Holden.

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John Botterill

Sat 1st Oct 2022 05:03

Thanks so much, Holden, for your lovely comments. It means a lot to me. Thanks for the like Frederick. 😀
The joys of grandparent hood. A lot less work than parenting, for sure 😂
Thanks too for the like Stephen A

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 1st Oct 2022 02:10

A truly lovely poem, John, your joy is perfectly captured! 😊

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John Botterill

Fri 30th Sep 2022 23:30

I think I had anal beads once when I went fishing on a cold wet riverbank!

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Martin Elder

Fri 30th Sep 2022 23:00

Thanks Kevin, I am glad you could relate to it.

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John Coopey

Fri 30th Sep 2022 22:21

If any "good" can be wrung from this war it is that many more have realised that liberal democracy is a fragile construct and not to be taken for granted. It needs defending at all times.

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Jared Harris

Fri 30th Sep 2022 19:26

Thank you for your comment M.C.

I will definitely save some for the kitty lol ...take care man much love....

-Jared

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 30th Sep 2022 17:05

When you've pursued a working life that sees constant changes
in work patterns, then in retirement, the clock becomes irrelevant
and I am happy to know that there are the Terry Wogans of this world waiting to entertain me when I feel the need to tune into
this wider 24/7 existence that the world at large now pursues..

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 30th Sep 2022 16:55

No infection will find you out
As quick as a bout of self-doubt,
But self-pity can be witty
So keep some in the kitty!

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 30th Sep 2022 16:40

Entertaining - and very welcome for that! 👍

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Flyntland

Fri 30th Sep 2022 16:39

Than you John and MC for your welcome comments.
I agree I can think of no excuse for killing our beautiful song birds.

Cruelty is an issue here - beaters have told me that the birds try to double back and run between the beaters legs - the birds are then picked up and thrown into the air - to be shot.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 30th Sep 2022 16:33

Who knows what exit lies ahead
But hopefully, with ease and at rest - in bed! 😉

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 30th Sep 2022 16:30

I think it's worse in Italy where they line up to kill the migrating
song birds. At least pheasant and duck can be eaten!

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John Botterill

Fri 30th Sep 2022 16:15

Well put, Flyntland. Stylish poem! A savagery we could do without. 😖

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John Botterill

Fri 30th Sep 2022 13:48

Thanks Flyntland, lovely comment, and thanks, too, Graham, you are so right! 😂

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Adam Whitworth

Fri 30th Sep 2022 13:41


Hello Flyntland, I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem and took the time to comment. Thank you.

The Sapien, in goodwill, pleads in earnest with the quercus.
The landmark is allowed a response and then it is found the plea is turned back towards the human.

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raypool

Fri 30th Sep 2022 12:15

Frederick John and Holden, thanks all for your liking this one.

Many thanks Greg, I do my best!

That app sounds excellent Graham. This was another poem I rewrote completely and that idea came the second time. Thanks.

Thank you Massoud for your observations. I think you have touched on humility there, and the quest for wonder is a great one. So called reality seems to be a relative term depending on subjectivity or objectivity. Such a vast subject.

A lovely comment Stephen, thank you. I tried to make it seem personal.

Ray

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 30th Sep 2022 11:59

That’s you ruined now then John

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Red Brick Keshner

Fri 30th Sep 2022 11:04

Yes kind poet. Hope is what we live in @Flyntland

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Flyntland

Fri 30th Sep 2022 10:22

" though your perfect tiny toes are curled"
Delicious

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Flyntland

Fri 30th Sep 2022 10:05

This is one of the most beautiful poems that I have read.

I have a deep love of trees,
some years ago I planted two 12" oak seedlings on our land, They have grown well and are now higher than a house, sturdy and strong, well used by wildlife.
So thank you for this poem, it is one that I shall read often.

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Flyntland

Fri 30th Sep 2022 09:55

" genial kindnessses shall spring" we have to live in hope.

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