The simile of The Mist.

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Fine mist,

On Scottish hills

(is like the fattened paunch

of a corpulent man,) it just

rolls down

#cinquain

◄ The old man in the next bed,

Symi ►

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 1st Oct 2022 14:52

Had to change it as I was unhappy

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