Thank you for sharing, the exhausting bleak battle feels endless at times. Know it has an end and you are not alone.

Comment is about Grey (blog)

Original item by Cait Abbott

Short and sweet M.C. Ken would be tickled.

Comment is about KEN DODD (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Thanks Stu for your comparison! I checked out the lyrics - nice. Sad ending, and I think mine was trying to point out the basic pointlessness of arriving in a self important place.

Ray

Comment is about RITUAL (blog)

Original item by ray pool

I guess that's how fishes feel when they're being eaten, lol
Good job!

Comment is about I am Fish (blog)

Original item by 220August

One of the better uses for prose in poetry - succinctly
capturing the delight of snowfall and its inevitable
aftermath.

Comment is about 'Courtyard in Snow' by Tom Harding is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Not a UK habit but the deed is well caught in these lines -
with a nice "lift" in the final verse.

Comment is about 'You'll see our neighbours bathed in gold' (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

I'll them my poems about conscientious objectors. Do you think I have a chance?

Comment is about Deadline nears for competition to mark end of first world war (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

A great reprise for to mark the occasion of Doddy's own sad departure.
JC -
I think that somewhere in the Hereafter -
If Doddy heard this he'd be curled up with laughter!

Comment is about Farewell to Ken Dodd ... but tongue-twister poem lives on (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Bam! That was good...

Comment is about KEN DODD (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Font re-sized as requested Cynthia. Thanks for reading ?

Comment is about By The Impenetrable Jungle (blog)

Original item by Adam Whitworth

Oh, but I have...

Comment is about Robin Williams - Quote (blog)

Original item by Mikey V Kinsey

In response to - "there are not enough ways in the english language to explain how bare and empty I am left"

It's an overwhelming feeling, the feeling of feeling nothing.

Comment is about Grey (blog)

Original item by Cait Abbott

Tom, for me, this is outstanding, once again. The final four lines are classic you with amazing insight of the human condition, especially of writers. WOL is really privileged to have your participation.

Comment is about John Clare Poem 1 (blog)

Original item by Tom Harding

This is fabulous! Love 'a mazing absurd joke' and 'my fashions tidally follow' with tongue-in-cheek flair.

(Could you tone down the size a bit, maybe? My eyeballs are throbbing, and actually struggling to take in the words.)

Comment is about By The Impenetrable Jungle (blog)

Original item by Adam Whitworth

thanks everyone, these are lovely comments. i dont think i'm particularly easy to live with cynthia no, but i have my unique charm!!!

Comment is about he must be full by now (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Stu, you are one outstanding writer, with a throat grip like a killing wrestler. It must be difficult to have a mind so varied and so active, so probing - all the time. And then, your imagination turns words into skeins of imagery that are completely captivating.

I wonder how easy you are to live with. Even with yourself. Such intensity.

Comment is about he must be full by now (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Welcome to WOL, Jon. I was almost certain you have been on site before, but I'm obviously wrong. You will enjoy us here. A poet with a strong philosophical bent is always a huge asset to a poetry group.

Comment is about Jon (poet profile)

Original item by Jon

I really like this. Thoughtful and powerful. It's so good, will you check the second line, 'who've have forgot' to see if you might say it more clearly, because I'm not at all sure what you wanted. I think you might mean 'who have forgotten'.

Always with respect.

Comment is about Renaissance (blog)

Original item by Jon

Hugh - my sides are aching I've been laughing so much at your stuff! ???

Comment is about Pill power! (blog)

Original item by hugh

Another ardent supporter here, as you know well.

Comment is about 'Courtyard in Snow' by Tom Harding is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Colin & Pat,
Thank you for your comments as they are much appreciated.
Keith

Comment is about There is more.... (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

I love this. The repetition of certain words works really well and the images blend into each other almost as if we are standing in silently swirling snow. The white of the snow and swan and mist is neatly juxtaposed with the bloody red rose petals. Very, very good Mahika. Welcome to WoL. All the best. Colin.

Comment is about cut out my lungs (you stole my breath) (blog)

Original item by Mahika

I agree with Pat, almost hypnotic, and whichever way one chooses to look at life, there is more. This had me thinking of the lyrical style of Joni Mitchell, particularly Both Sides, Now. All the best Keith. Col.

Comment is about There is more.... (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

this is a delightful poem Tom and one that sends the reader off into the parts of the landscape that are overlooked and unseen from footpaths and byways. Often there is a reason we don't go there - nothing much to see but the 'limits of the field' - but there your man has found a quiet spot for contemplation and communing with nature. Marvellous. And well done on POTW btw. All the best. Col.

Comment is about John Clare Poem 1 (blog)

Original item by Tom Harding

this is so sad ...and is being lived out everyday in the UK...we need to liberate women from this fate!

Comment is about he must be full by now (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Thanks, Kevin. I did it once before at Donny where it was suggested I slow it down and speed it up several times to represent the several stations. That’s a bit too clever for me, though!

Comment is about NORTH YORKSHIRE MOORS RAILWAY (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Nice as a written piece, but it's your performance that brings it to life. ?

Kevin

Comment is about NORTH YORKSHIRE MOORS RAILWAY (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Very open and thought-provoking.

Comment is about When a promise was a lie (blog)

Original item by MissMarieWritesWords

Ha. I couldn't have been more wrong. I was so sure you'd go.

Cheers Kevin

Comment is about Misplaced Compassion (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Very funny

Comment is about Wayne's Pain (blog)

Original item by hugh

Thanks, MC. In fairness, it’s not much without it.

Comment is about NORTH YORKSHIRE MOORS RAILWAY (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

He took his Dad's dog some time ago.

Comment is about KEN DODD (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Your way of presenting the audio - in rhythm with the words
that describe the journey - is inspired and adds
considerably to the written content. Top decision!

Comment is about NORTH YORKSHIRE MOORS RAILWAY (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

great stuff as usual ray. reminded me of the song bill mccai by the coral.

'another day another gin his kids cant stand the sight of him'

Comment is about RITUAL (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Ho-ho! You have to possess a sublime sense of the ridiculous to come up with this!

Comment is about Wayne's Pain (blog)

Original item by hugh

Hugh/Keith - most appreciative of your comments. It may
be me but there are times when I feel there is some
orchestrated campaign to keep us in a constant state of
agitation and feel somehow responsible for everything
that is going on in the world today...perhaps a part of
the "globalisation" that is such a popular feature of news
items these days.
Cheers

Comment is about THE AGE OF WORRY (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Greg Freeman has been in touch as Stockport was still listed as being on tonight

Next meet up is now next Monday on the 19TH instead!

Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)

Original item by Stockport WoL

totally wonderful

Comment is about 'Courtyard in Snow' by Tom Harding is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

I thought so, Ray. I googled the film to confirm.
The K&WVR is also a cracking ride but I think the NYMR has the edge.

Comment is about NORTH YORKSHIRE MOORS RAILWAY (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Good to see a local-ish! chap getting some plaudits Tom. I think you have captured the "better to look at than be out in" atmosphere of this scene perfectly.

Well done on POTW

Comment is about 'Courtyard in Snow' by Tom Harding is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Yes John; I dropped myself in it there! Thinking about the film the K WR has a different scenic aspect than the open moors. All the best.

Ray

Comment is about NORTH YORKSHIRE MOORS RAILWAY (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Hi Suki
I didn't actually consider it to be a song lyric at the time but as read it again , I think you could be right. I often find that some of my pieces turn out in a similar vein. Just need to find a melody writer . Thanks for commenting much appreciated

and thanks to Anya for liking

Cheers
Martin

Comment is about she's the one (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

Brilliant Hugh. I can't make up my mind whether you've brought poetry to a new high or a new low. Keep 'em coming to help me.

Comment is about Wayne's Pain (blog)

Original item by hugh

Kevin,
thank you for your comment. I have made what I believe is the right decision and that is to let matters rest as I don´t realistically believe I can be of any positive use. Nevertheless, thanks a lot matey.
Keith

Comment is about Misplaced Compassion (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Hi Keith
You don't tell us who this guy is or what his crime was (rightly so).
You speak as though you are in a dilemma (not knowing whether or not to visit him) but I think your mind is already made up. Because of your religious beliefs and kind hearted nature, you will go. You will offer some kind of forgiveness and comfort, then you yourself will carry some of his burden.


Life is so much easier when you are like me, and have a heart of stone..

Kevin

Comment is about Misplaced Compassion (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Thank you Anya for your on feedback and saying that I have a kind soul bless you and I appreciate the feedback on this piece


Tina x

Comment is about When You've Took Away All My Will Power (blog)

Original item by Chiari Warrior Soldier

Thank you Hannah Collins and yes I do agree with your comment and I'm glad you liked this sad piece and yes this is an important statement that most will write or share but thank you for your kind words!


And I always appreciate the feedback on my writing!

Comment is about When You've Took Away All My Will Power (blog)

Original item by Chiari Warrior Soldier

Douglas and Ray - thanks guys. You're right about the smell, Ray. If they could bottle it as scent they would make a fortune. The Railway Children, though, I'm not so sure. I always thought it was the Keighley and Worth Valley.

Comment is about NORTH YORKSHIRE MOORS RAILWAY (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Hi Brian. Your'e right there, but I'd rather say that i'm not happy for him, as I don't subscribe to that way of life, so I portrayed him as more of a victim than he would consider himself. (poetic injustice).

HI David. Here is a dilemma: I invented him as both a mason and a mayor (is that possible); it seems rather logical to me, but not sure of the protocol. If he is both, his wardrobe must be sizeable. Either aspiration fits his type I reckon. Your assessment of stagnation is spot on IMO. But they wouldn't know that would they?

Thanks Martin. I laboured over details- I love the idea of semi dressing, as there is something faintly ridiculous in it, a sort of intrusion of honesty into a farce.

Cheers Suki. Glad you enjoyed that line, which was like a big interruption in the thought pattern. I know quite a few masons (a la family)and have found them pretty much self seeking with a soupcon of hypocrisy thrown in . I have tried a bit of amdram, and I know it can inflate the ego betimes.

Thanks additionally Col and Pat for the likes.

Love to all. Ray

Comment is about RITUAL (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Definitely a feel good poem John, Who could resist the hot flush of a proper steam loco, with those wide spaces! Also the line was used for the Railway Children. To think those A4s used to work out of Kings Cross on the long hauls!

I enjoyed the trip thanks. Ray

Comment is about NORTH YORKSHIRE MOORS RAILWAY (blog)

Original item by John Coopey