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she's the one

She’s the one

Who proudly called your name

Who gave you, life

She’s the one that wiped away

The snot and spittle

She’s the one when you cried stamped and screamed

Said it’s not fair

Was always there

And you knew it was safe

Because she always keeps mum

 

She is the one who is the queen of your dreams

She’s the one that ignores

The meaningless babble you sometimes

Pour out that can sound like scorn

She maybe, the one you’ve been warned about

But you won’t listen

She’s the one you don’t always understand

But always gets you

She’s the one who tells you to grow up

And you take it on the chin

She’s the one who will stick with you through thick

And through thin

She’s the one who bears your children

Puts up with all the grief

She’s the one who will gladly hold your hand

Tell you it’s alright when maybe it’s not

She’s the one who still wants

All of you in her life

 

She’s the one

That curls her toes and screams

When you pretend you’re a monster running round the room

She’s the one who likes dressing up in several layers

Who wants another story

Who wants to curl up into your arms

Particularly when she’s tired and sick

She’s the one you call your little princess

She’s the one who even now wants a hug

And will hold your hand

Walking down the street 

Even though she’s nearly as tall as you

 

She’s the curtain that never draws

Because she is the one

◄ Standing on death

Hands open ►

Comments

Big Sal

Sun 22nd Jul 2018 16:10

Top notch sentiment. Each stanza could stand in for a verse in a song. Add a little chorus into each space between the stanzas and you have yourself a ballad or dedication. The poem itself is excellent.??

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Martin Elder

Mon 2nd Apr 2018 11:06

Thanks Hugh and Andy for reading this. I am glad you liked it Hugh
I think I am getting a picture here Andy. I realise that there are number of my poems that don't always get posted that could be lyrics. As I said before to Suki what I need is a melody writer.
Cheers guys

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Andy N

Mon 2nd Apr 2018 07:51

reading this Martin, I'm with Suki here as it does has a song like flow to it.

using reputiton sometimes in a piece can either be excellent or stilted as hell i usually find. this is a very clever, well thoughtful poem.

great stuff.

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Hugh

Sat 31st Mar 2018 22:26

Clever use of she's the one.Great flow and fabulous ending,a pleasing read.Well done.

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Martin Elder

Mon 12th Mar 2018 09:22

Hi Suki
I didn't actually consider it to be a song lyric at the time but as read it again , I think you could be right. I often find that some of my pieces turn out in a similar vein. Just need to find a melody writer . Thanks for commenting much appreciated

and thanks to Anya for liking

Cheers
Martin

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suki spangles

Sun 11th Mar 2018 04:02

Hi there Martin,

Did you conceive this as a song lyric? Lovely flow to this. Nice write.

Cheers,
Suki

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