i agree rachel. in fact i hate the mobile phone so much i have never owned one. horrible things.
great poem by the way ray!
Comment is about WASHING LINE (blog)
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elPintor
Tue 26th Mar 2019 19:48
Like anyone really cares, but I don't think there is a greater annoyance than people who talk loudly and at length on cell phones in public places--and certainly no other somewhat minor annoyance that will make me any more confrontational.
That said, I don't share exactly the same sentiment regarding written disclosures--I can stop reading if or whenever I wish. Though, I still like to think that I reserve the right to protest when I feel it is due.
Everybody's got dirty laundry, Ray, as I'm sure you're wise enough to be well aware. But, none of us have the right to harass others through personal expression that would be better channeled through less public media.
..more than one analogy to be appreciated, here.
Thanks man.
Rachel
Comment is about WASHING LINE (blog)
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Excellent! Steeped in sentiment! Loved it! ?
Comment is about Simple Cloth (collaboration with The Carbon Quill) (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Tue 26th Mar 2019 19:07
Ray - it's good to see you've got a frivolous one in you. (I assume it's frivolous...hard to tell sometimes with your stuff!) Anyway, I hope you've got a few more such pieces in you before you peg out (geddit?).
Comment is about WASHING LINE (blog)
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Thanks Heart!
It was something I wanted to try out! It did take some time! And yes the picture helps a lot! But did you pick up the hidden message?
Thanks for giving it a chance! ?
Mae
Comment is about Love (blog)
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Having the picture of spinning straw into gold really changes the perspective of this poem. Very unique style we don't usually see over here. I feel like that must have taken a while. Quite brilliant.
Comment is about Love (blog)
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Thanks Jason, Dorothy and M.C, and Brian and Ray for the likes.
Cheers Kevin
Comment is about The Annual Talent Show (Down At The Feathers) (blog)
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<Deleted User> (21487)
Tue 26th Mar 2019 18:04
This must be the only poem world wide on such an unromantic subject.
I suppose this is what happens when you are forced to live the wrong way up. mmmm
I have a sneaky feeling that I would like a little lovot - I could take it for a walk - pretend its a dog - but never have to feed it.
mmmmmmmmmmmm sad.
Comment is about Consumer Electronics Show in Las Vegas (blog)
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<Deleted User> (21487)
Tue 26th Mar 2019 17:55
So beautiful - I love it
Dorothy
Comment is about YOUR BLUE EYES (blog)
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<Deleted User> (21487)
Tue 26th Mar 2019 17:36
Ray
I hope your thoughts are pure - I don't want to see anything unclean on view to the general public.
Dorothy
Comment is about WASHING LINE (blog)
Original item by ray pool
I really enjoyed The Matriarch, not least because it gave me comfort that you were still contributing (I sensed some weeks back that it was a while since I'd read any of your poems or otherwise heard from you).
Like a number of your readers, I am hooked on trees and I love the words that you have used to declare your infatuation too.
Peter T
Comment is about The Matriach (blog)
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More like adoration than love, this is often the way feelings claw their way into the light only to be blinded, through early stirrings Vautaw. I can just remember that.
Ray
Comment is about Love Lessons (blog)
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elPintor
Tue 26th Mar 2019 16:12
Hi Martin--glad to have your input. It will definitely end, hopefully sooner rather than later ;
Comment is about russian girls (blog)
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Hi Becky, I just started writing poetry again after a loooooong time off. Great to see you here! We have to go to a slam together soon! ?
Comment is about Etchy Mary (poet profile)
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Hey dk, you've given me hope
Matthews Boulevard?
I'll earn my street and work real hard
And become a true poet bard ?
Comment is about Ferlinghetti Street (blog)
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Thank you very much for your encouraging words. It's means the world to me to know that you like my work and that it moved you. I hope it just does the same for the girl I wrote it for.
???
Comment is about Jezabel, Confession from a Wonderland (blog)
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magical. one of my poems of the year so far no doubt.
Comment is about The Poem of the Week is 'The Dolphins Seemed Unfriendly' by Dominic James (article)
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What a heart-warming response to this poem. I have enjoyed looking up 'corvid' and 'passerine', two words that I once did know and have long since forgotten 'in detail', but not 'in effect'.
I did once pause at a gate to watch some fine horses far off in a big field. I was just looking, but the curious creatures sauntered right across the pasture and congregated in front of me, gently blowing their nostrils open, and clearly interested in my greetings. I didn't stay very long. But, on my departure, just a few steps down the road, I heard jingly-jangling behind me, and the gate swung open and I had four horses clopping down the paved road catching up with me. I took off at a run to get my sister who is the 'horse person' of the family, to return these huge, friendly animals back into the field. They opened the gate, not me, but I didn't know how I'd ever explain that to anybody else who might be very accusatory, such as their owners. She was/is a 'horse whizz' and she came to my rescue full speed, laughing her head off.
'You have such charisma!' she hooted. 'No, really, they were probably just bored!.'
Sisters are allowed to pat with one hand and smack with the other. I wouldn't know about brothers: I don't have any.
Comment is about Red-winged Blackbird (blog)
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Stunning, among the best I’ve read. Thank you for sharing your soul and this beautiful artwork. It moved me. I will be back to read it again and again. ?
Comment is about Jezabel, Confession from a Wonderland (blog)
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Tue 26th Mar 2019 11:07
love those lovots but...
couldn't you just get a dog?
did you go to Las Vegas?
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
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Well done, Dominic. Beautifully crafted sonnet.
Comment is about The Poem of the Week is 'The Dolphins Seemed Unfriendly' by Dominic James (article)
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I like this one Jon, it leaves me; hanging.
Comment is about Hangman (blog)
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Hi Ray,
Sorry for the delay - glad you liked the poem!
Comment is about NIGERIAN VILLAGES (blog)
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Congratulations, Dominic
Comment is about The Poem of the Week is 'The Dolphins Seemed Unfriendly' by Dominic James (article)
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Alan, I love this poem! It's amazing! Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment is about Why I Want to Own a Platypus (blog)
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Hey fancy seeing you here! Did I miss something? I've not been on this site much in the last few weeks or so, although I was pretty addicted last summer.
Comment is about Etchy Mary (poet profile)
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Thanks Brian! I've been seeking to refine my style and technique a little. We'll see where it leads.
Comment is about Lie with poetry (blog)
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Binte this verse strikes me as a recollection maybe a visitation of a loved one (your mother?) who has passed away.
Left and lost.
Tommy
Comment is about Talking To The Dead (blog)
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BLACKIE! Where ya bin? I’ve just seen your “Like”.
Comment is about ME FIRSTEST POEMS (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 25th Mar 2019 11:24
Becky- you have spent your time away wisely to judge from this excellent piece!
Comment is about Lie with poetry (blog)
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steven arthur
Mon 25th Mar 2019 11:23
Healing is a lifelong process my friend. I hope your surgery goes well, John.
Comment is about Dead Baby (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 25th Mar 2019 10:12
Bike it
You'll like it
Comment is about Two Ton of Deadly Metal (blog)
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<Deleted User> (21487)
Mon 25th Mar 2019 10:01
Direct and to the point. I agree with M.C. a wider audience would be good.
Dorothy
Comment is about Two Ton of Deadly Metal (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
How the human spirit can labour seeking some sort of solace. It
seems likely that contentment is reached by being content with one's own self. Looking in the mirror with a smile is a good way to begin
each day IMHO.
Comment is about Alone With My Loneliness (blog)
Original item by NilavroNill Shoovro
Intriguing - to set alight (satellite?) the imagination.
Comment is about Cosmic Cause (blog)
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It only goes to show - it takes talent to write about talent on show!!?
Comment is about The Annual Talent Show (Down At The Feathers) (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
Fitting words to be printed and handed to every buyer of a car - whatever their age or experience (or LACK of it).
Comment is about Two Ton of Deadly Metal (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Ah...time off in loo of reading a poem. Quite understandable in this
case. ?
Comment is about DESPERATE (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
this is a wonderful review. i cried a little.
Comment is about become something frail: Stuart Buck, Selcouth Station Press (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Yes, I can relate to this and I'm not surprised it was a redwing blackbird, I think they're Corvids aren't they? Might be wrong. But highly intelligent birds.
Loved this.
J. x
Comment is about Red-winged Blackbird (blog)
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<Deleted User> (21487)
Mon 25th Mar 2019 06:58
I do love your poems - they build a picture of irreverent chaos.
it is so good to giggle
Dorothy.
Comment is about The Annual Talent Show (Down At The Feathers) (blog)
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Brilliant! Just brilliant ?
J.
Comment is about The Annual Talent Show (Down At The Feathers) (blog)
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<Deleted User> (19708)
Mon 25th Mar 2019 03:17
<Deleted User> (19708)
Mon 25th Mar 2019 03:15
I love this! Absolutely brilliant!
Comment is about Of Gods and Pharaohs (blog)
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<Deleted User> (19708)
Mon 25th Mar 2019 03:12
Heart rending and haunting. Thank you for sharing this. I truly hope they read this and reflect. It will be remembered.
Comment is about Not Much Left to Lose Now (blog)
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elPintor
Tue 26th Mar 2019 20:22
I quite admire that, Stu. I put it off for a long while but finally gave in. Truthfully, I never wanted to be that "important" as to have to be interrupted. I mean, most conversations that happen by phone can wait, unless you're a medical professional on call or something else for which you get paid A LOT to be on standby.
Lots of pitfalls for those who value autonomy and privacy...
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