Love
Lonesome lovers loom laments; longing lost love, lust
Odes of ordinary ordeals; orchid opalescent oases
Velveteen verses voicing veiled voids; veritably vast
Eternally embroidering elated, entrancing embraces!
Comments
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Hey y'all! Check out the new version!?
Thank you Kate and Reinholtz!
Steven, on the rhyming issue... I tried? but will keep trying!
I do take suggestions though! ?
Mae
steven arthur
Wed 27th Mar 2019 12:03
those near rhymes tho. . . .?
<Deleted User> (19913)
Wed 27th Mar 2019 11:45
Wonderful Mae, delectable words
Thanks sweet Jason! ?Your support means a lot!
Mae
I love this Mae, beautiful styling, rhythm and words.
Very skillful and very poetic.
J. x
Thanks Heart!
It was something I wanted to try out! It did take some time! And yes the picture helps a lot! But did you pick up the hidden message?
Thanks for giving it a chance! ?
Mae
Having the picture of spinning straw into gold really changes the perspective of this poem. Very unique style we don't usually see over here. I feel like that must have taken a while. Quite brilliant.
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Mae Foreman
Wed 27th Mar 2019 13:54
Thanks Jon! ? Aw! ?