<Deleted User> (19708)
Mon 25th Mar 2019 03:12
Heart rending and haunting. Thank you for sharing this. I truly hope they read this and reflect. It will be remembered.
Comment is about Not Much Left to Lose Now (blog)
Original item by Heart of Lead
Was everyone in bed on Sun?
I did no comment heard (except Dorthy)
That C, Eb and G they were
Were a minor chord?
Dunno.....
Oh well, on to the next one ?
Comment is about C, Eb and G (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
There should be a lot more humour on the site. Thanks for boosting this tradition John ?
Comment is about ME FIRSTEST POEMS (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
My trouble comes in form of a conflict
'Tween what's desperate, what must I do?
Do I finish this crash-hot WOLish poem?
Or satisfy desperate rush to the loo?
Gotta rush...?
Comment is about DESPERATE (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Thank you so much dear Dorothy. ? I will go back and record it after I get over this cold/flu that has my soft voice sounding more like James Earl Jones! ?
Comment is about Love, Me (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
Thanks Dorothy, please do! Thanks for reading ?
Comment is about They were only saying their prayers... (blog)
Original item by Jeffarama!
Many thanks Dorothy and MC for you kind thoughts.
Comment is about ME FIRSTEST POEMS (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
And now you've reached the "choo...choo" stage. Well done, old mate! ?
Comment is about ME FIRSTEST POEMS (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (21487)
Sun 24th Mar 2019 17:43
Vautaw,
I really love this one, it's like snuggling into a feather duvet, each time
I read it I can hear your soft voice.
Thank You it is really lovely.
Dorothy
Comment is about Love, Me (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
<Deleted User> (21487)
Sun 24th Mar 2019 17:28
John
I totally agree with Hazel - it is so good to have a giggle
Dorothy
Comment is about ME FIRSTEST POEMS (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thanks Rachel - there was no underlying idea other than identifying with the theme, but it's good when you get thoughts about a poem that may add body to it. Glad you liked it.
Ok David, that's a thought! An intrusive mood is ok by me Rachel.
Thanks for stopping by and liking Steve, Jennifer, Jon, Whiskey, Heart of Lead and Dorothy.
Ray
Comment is about SHOAL (blog)
Original item by ray pool
<Deleted User> (21487)
Sun 24th Mar 2019 17:24
You see I am not the only one WOO HOO.
Dorothy
Comment is about C, Eb and G (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Jennifer,thanks for going back to find this. Like a transfusion of life to older works. That verse is a bit macabre I suppose!
Ray
Comment is about SKID ROW (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Merci, Jennifer. As kids after the war every toy was treasured; a piece of wood with a nail in it was a boat with a funnel. Rash I know!
Ray
Comment is about CHILDREN'S TOYS (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Thanks both Jennifer and Vautaw. I aim to please!
Ray
Comment is about SAME OLD SONG (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Rachel your work never disappoints and this is no exception. It moves along at its own pace about something that we all look forward to the ending of winter.
Marvellous
Comment is about russian girls (blog)
Original item by nunya
I have to say I am with David in this. I have collection of books spilling out all over the place and love bookshops and libraries.
A great poem Phil. I can't help that the natural rhythm of this piece lends it self well to being the lyrics of a song.
Nice one
Comment is about The bookshop (blog)
Original item by mentalelf. Philk.
Thanks guys! It felt unfinished when I posted it, but with fresh eyes, I came back to revise! One of my favorite things about WOL is the invitation to put your work out there ready or not and receive a nice reception either way❣️
Comment is about Love, Me (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
You’re very easily pleased, Hazel. But thank you all the same.?
Comment is about ME FIRSTEST POEMS (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Ashes stick to my lips. I taste them, bitter as cud.
What a brilliant belly button for such a moving poem.
Comment is about Dead Baby (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
I'm on tenterhooks!
Comment is about Fred and Bullfrog Floppit (a re-post) (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
<Deleted User> (21487)
Sun 24th Mar 2019 11:07
Thank you Jonathan for your very kind and encouraging comments, they are very much appreciated.
Dorothy
Comment is about Dorothy Webb's 'The Silent March of 2001' is Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Stuart Buck
This is one of my older poems. I've just finished one which could be seen as a sequel, so I've re-posted this now, and I'll post the sequel tomorrow.
Cheer Kevin
Comment is about Fred and Bullfrog Floppit (a re-post) (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
You have generated a nice feeling all round this Vautaw. Have not seen this side of Sheryl Crow before. A nice end. Thankyou.
Comment is about Love, Me (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
Sunday nothing major
Major going on
So thought I'd play around with this
To hone my skills upon ?
Comment is about C, Eb and G (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
I love the delivery and the rhythm of this in short bursts of words which say all that needs to be said.
Nice one John
Comment is about Dead Baby (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
This has a particularly lyric feel to it
Nice one
Comment is about Love, Me (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
I love the line 'under the colour of my melancholy ink'
wonderful
Comment is about Alone With My Loneliness (blog)
Original item by NilavroNill Shoovro
I love the whole notion of shoes speaking to each other and being in community together. An excellent piece.
Congratulations on POTW
Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is 'Shoes' by D.Knape (article)
Original item by Stuart Buck
Sun 24th Mar 2019 09:09
you are the only one who liked it.
haha
off to the dump!
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 24th Mar 2019 08:05
Good rhyming, though I suspect poetic licence for Matteo!
Comment is about Sonetto Romantico (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
Thanks Jennifer. ? You live in Tuscany? I’ll come read it to you personally! ?
Comment is about Gilded Cage (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
From one book-holding lover to another, thanks.
Comment is about The bookshop (blog)
Original item by mentalelf. Philk.
Not too bad Jacob me ol'mukker. Can't walk, in pain a lot. BUT my daughter is about to give birth and that is beyond anything. I'm sure you know. Thanks for the ointment you sent me/ It is having an ameliorative effect but not enough. I need surgery and i'm seeing the surgeon on the 28th. More I read about Colorado, the more I like it. VERY progressive for a western state. All the best now and forever to you and your family. John
Comment is about John E Marks (poet profile)
Original item by John E Marks
Dorothy - gonna have to think on yours
Stand back friend, I'm throwing it in
They've given me one pot for a bin
Got myself the biggest body I can find
No way another one will fit in...?
(God what a genius....)
Comment is about Hmm... (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
MC
(voice)
He oscillates 'tween genius and dope
Drawing others around with the hope
Of gaining some fans who will like him
Put up with him, bloody well cope ?
Comment is about Hmm... (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
The smartphone should be our slave and we their master, and not vice versa.
The trouble is they are addicting us, and we are letting them....
Comment is about Smartphones (blog)
Original item by Gagan Raj
Lilting rhyme
I like, dk
Moonlight turn off
Your light, obey ?
Comment is about MoonLight (blog)
Original item by d.knape
elPintor
Sat 23rd Mar 2019 21:32
I appreciate the gag, David..
One of my dad's favorite lines is "stop talking about me"--he obviously brought me up to appreciate fine comedy ;
(Please pardon the intrusion--it must've been the mood last night)
Comment is about SHOAL (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Knocked another one out of the park Ray! ?
Comment is about SAME OLD SONG (blog)
Original item by ray pool
elPintor
Sat 23rd Mar 2019 21:11
..glad you liked it, Jennifer. I'm not quite sure I put through exactly what I meant, but for me the biggest battle is getting something, mostly anything, down in words.
Rachel D
thanks, comment or no comment--so much passes unsaid and that's all good with me x
Comment is about capture & release (blog)
Original item by nunya
You've really excelled yourself here!!!!! Funny as usual but also very clever to have seen the poetic possibilities in something so unpoetic.Well deserved congrats. (Surely you could have found something more useful than loo paper? There would be gallons of sea water, perhaps moss and some kind of seaweed.)
Again had a good laugh, for which thanks.
Jennifer
Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is 'Shoes' by D.Knape (article)
Original item by Stuart Buck
Hi Jason! Beautiful poem, and agree your friend is lucky. So often so-called friends are not available when needed.
Jennifer
Comment is about As You Walk The Road (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Yes, I know what you mean'. Of course one can 'talk' to other living creatures. Great writing.
Jennifer
Comment is about Red-winged Blackbird (blog)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
<Deleted User> (19708)
Mon 25th Mar 2019 03:12
Heart rending and haunting. Thank you for sharing this. I truly hope they read this and reflect. It will be remembered.
Comment is about Not Much Left to Lose Now (blog)
Original item by Heart of Lead