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New to poetry. Trying to take the time to start writing more as I've found that I truly enjoy it. Hoping to get some feedback and constructive criticism.


The Light The light inside me shining, Butterflies are flying. My nerves are at their peak, The thought makes me weak. Like climbing a mountain, The reward will feel so great. The aches and pains keep shouting, "Turn back," but it's too late. All the pain is worth it. At the top is where you see, The beauty of the mountain and all it's scenery. Nature is amazing, A type of therapy. Though, the thought of it is scary, The bears lurking through the trees. You don't know what is out there, But it's worth the trip to see, For all the tribulations are nothing, Compared to what will be. I am elated for you baby, Waiting patiently.

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