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kJ Walker

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 17:16

Thank you for the likes, and kind comments.
A few people have compared my stuff to Stanley Holloway monologues, praise indeed.
This one is actually a true story, and I am still good friends with Sando, all these years later.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 17:13

Hear, hear. I did Paris on foot in the 1970s and I still know parts of it better than I have any right to.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 16:52

Thanks, M.C. Glad you enjoyed it.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 16:51

Wonderful stuff! What a great read.

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julie callaghan

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 15:56

Thank you enjoyed, would love to hear it read out.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 14:42

Takes me back to the monologues of Stanley Holloway - and I
can't say fairer than that!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 14:37

I think it was Frank Norman who coined the phrase "Nostalgia
ain't what it used to be."
But, on this evidence, I'd say: It IS...it IS!!
A delightful wander that takes us down "Quality Street"!

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julie callaghan

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 11:33

Thanks for the likes Greg, KJ and Stephen A.

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 09:29

Wonderful stuff KJ

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 09:25

Thanks to Steve, Stephen G, and Greg for the lovely comments. Hope you're all well.
And thanks, Julie, nice to see your still posting & hope you're enjoying your travels. This is the only thing I've wrote since I last posted! So, could be just a fleeting visit. But thanks for your continued support.
And thanks for the Likes, Jordyn, Aisha & Holden, appreciated as always & hope you're also well! ??

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julie callaghan

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 08:24

Thank you for the likes Holden, Nigel, Aisha and Stephen G. Thanks also for the comment.

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keith jeffries

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 08:10

Kevin,

I take my hat off to you. Another poem rich in humour and so well crafted even down to the use of a north country accent to embellish the poem itself.

Thanks for this
Keith

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Rachel Rene Wright

Mon 2nd Aug 2021 04:19

I love this poem, so many people need to read and understand the passion within it. And stop making all these damn interpretations to fit your situations.

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The Crescent Moon

Sun 1st Aug 2021 23:11

Thank you for liking my Demon Poem! ?

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st Aug 2021 21:54

Got it, Ray. Thanks for the explanation. I'm sure the neighbours know what they're doing! Best wishes to the Baroness.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st Aug 2021 21:29

Lovely, evocative poem. The last verse really caps it.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st Aug 2021 21:22

Good initiative, Julie.

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julie callaghan

Sun 1st Aug 2021 16:48

Thank you Stephen A and Holden for the likes.

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raypool

Sun 1st Aug 2021 15:58

Got that Greg - I love the Kinks stuff so full of moodliness(?) and nostalgia. Thanks

Thank you Brenda, nice to hear that.

Thanks Mark. I'm sure the streets were full of intrigue for you too. I can't resist anything from that period or earlier. My favourites include sights of London trams (Lavender Hill Mob eg). which I just remember.

Stephen, cheers for joining in and just to say the southern "edge" was no match for the likes of Tom Courtenay and Albert Finney but I found this close to Up the Junction in style and leeriness. The East End was greatly affected of course, but I remember the city equally devastated as my dad worked there.

Thank you for your like Holden.

Glad to have garnered interest in this!
Ray

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raypool

Sun 1st Aug 2021 15:50

Thanks Stephen for chasing this up. I wanted to convey that next doors' neighbours were de- liceing a bantam chicken on its back with powder. It's name (?) was Baroness Browning believe it or not. I thought the name alone would make for a bit of bathos.
I hope that clears it up (not the lice) for you!

Ray

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Steve Higgins

Sun 1st Aug 2021 13:52

Nothing stays the same. Nice work.

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julie callaghan

Sun 1st Aug 2021 12:08

Wonderful and worth the wait. I have missed reading your work. I hope all is good with you and there many more writes to come. Thank you

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Greg Freeman

Sun 1st Aug 2021 11:38

Terrific work, Stephen. Poignant and moving.

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Rasa Kabaila

Sun 1st Aug 2021 06:15

Thank you for your comment Stephen. I didn't know that you lived in Belgium but then of course, I didn't ask!

I'm sorry to hear about the floods in Belgium. Thinking of you and all of Belgium-people, animals and land. Keeping you all in my thoughts and prayers.

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julie callaghan

Sat 31st Jul 2021 22:17

Thank you for the likes folks and the lovely comment Rasa. I follow Dr Amir Khan on Twitter as he posts some lovely videos and photos. I have his permission to use these as inspiration for some of my writes along with the photo. I think this forest is somewhere in Yorkshire, England.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 31st Jul 2021 18:59

Brings to mind the tale of "The tortoise and the hare". Craft and
guile can outwit youthful prowess occasionally.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 31st Jul 2021 17:28

Many thanks for the like, Holden.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 31st Jul 2021 17:27

A beautiful, atmospheric poem, Brenda.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 31st Jul 2021 17:22

Thank you, Rasa. This is so relevant to the situation in Belgium, where we have had terrible flood damage and loss of life and yet people have not lost hope and so many have rallied round to support the victims.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 31st Jul 2021 17:02

Hi Ray. I enjoyed this but must confess to being slightly bewildered. However, I 'm prepared to go with it.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 31st Jul 2021 16:56

Thanks, Ray. Very enjoyable. It's a pretty good film, although without some of the grit of the New Wave Northern classics. I used to be taken back to the East End of London as a boy to visit relatives and I do remember how much was still bomb damaged, as you mention.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 31st Jul 2021 16:29

Ha-ha. A humorous but suspiciously realistic view of a certain
breed of workman.
The ending here is rather neat
Revenge is often very sweet!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 31st Jul 2021 16:17

An enjoyable saunter through the yesteryears that a number of us
can recall. The inclusion of those names towards the end adds to
the verisimilitude and encourages images of others to appear in
the mind's flickering projection booth.

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raypool

Sat 31st Jul 2021 12:15

Fact is we don't always catch attention, but it's always a challenge trying! Thanks for the wordplay Leon....

Ray

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Brenda Wells

Sat 31st Jul 2021 11:16

Great atmosphere, real sense of place. Thanks

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Rasa Kabaila

Sat 31st Jul 2021 10:28

This is beautiful Julie. It reminds me of 'A Midsummer Night's
Dream'. I imagine you are writing about somewhere beautiful in Europe where it rains a lot? Or am I wrong?

Thank you for sharing your poem.

Keep writing.
Best wishes,
Rasa

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Nigel Astell

Sat 31st Jul 2021 00:55

Summertime sea says
to the breeze
beyond the tree
I found this poem.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 31st Jul 2021 00:26

Thanks for your likes
Holden
Your Royal Poetess
Stephen G
and
Aisha.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 31st Jul 2021 00:21

Stephen I spend one week cutting it all back then within days my jungle returns.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 31st Jul 2021 00:15

Keith

I used to have one that lived under my shed five years ago.

Watching the night wind create shapes I thought I heard something and I did - - -

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Greg Freeman

Fri 30th Jul 2021 20:22

Enjoyed this, Ray. Reminds me of the Kinks song Dead End Street

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Fri 30th Jul 2021 19:23

Surprised to be the only liker!

I'm guessing this is based on fact but with a big dollop of poetic LICEnce (groan)

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raypool

Fri 30th Jul 2021 17:44

Thanks for looking in Leon!

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 30th Jul 2021 15:34

The paradox of freedom stays with us. The question remains:
To what extent does your version of freedom impinge on my own
understanding of the word?

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Holden Moncrieff

Fri 30th Jul 2021 00:42

Thank you, Stephen ?. You draw an apt parallel!

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 29th Jul 2021 17:45

An intriguing story, beautifully told.

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keith jeffries

Thu 29th Jul 2021 17:42

Nigel,

Your'e lucky we have a family of three at the bottom of the garden.

Keith

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 29th Jul 2021 17:40

Fascinating poem. A rather abstract notion of absolute liberty still plays a big part in French and European thinking, as seen in recent demos against vaccine passports.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 29th Jul 2021 17:30

Impressive and disturbing, Adam.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 29th Jul 2021 17:24

I have experienced something like this, Nigel, and the poem really brings it home. 'Garden overgrown' has a worryingly familiar ring to it!

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