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jennifer Malden

Wed 10th Feb 2021 17:40

Great poem! Very perceptive and unusual language - non stop love soaked fun/ the distant sunsets seemed too small to fit in his ambition- yet vast for her rendition. Really liked this. Jennifer

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Greg Freeman

Wed 10th Feb 2021 17:38

Somewhat ironically, Torquay have been drawn away to Woking in the Trophy quarter-finals. May the best team win! We're also at home to them in the National League this Saturday as well.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 10th Feb 2021 17:33

This poem is enough!
wait, wait, this poem is not enough !
I want more (of your poems)!
But luckily, there's plenty more in your blog (which I am reading)

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 10th Feb 2021 17:12

If Torquay (The Gulls) maintain their present form they should gain
promotion back to the Football League proper where they belong.
My brother-in-law lives within a shout of Plainmoor, the team's home
ground, and even at his advanced age would probably jump from
his armchair and indulge in a bit of arm-waving if that happened.
I'm sure Mr Martin will be considering that promotion for a celebratory poem.

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D Joshi

Wed 10th Feb 2021 17:10

Thank you Keith, appreciate your encouraging words.
It sure reminded me of some fond memories of sitting in a history class back in school.

Thank you Brian, 100% agree on that

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keith jeffries

Wed 10th Feb 2021 17:09

How two people can compliment each other. Good poem
Keith

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 10th Feb 2021 17:08

Fair point, but it depends what we mean by strong and weak. Many apparently "strong" people turn out to be vain and full of hot air when tested. The assessment always has to be ex-post.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 10th Feb 2021 17:03

By way of explanation: the lines shown were quoted "as seen".
I've no way of knowing their original source so I cannot discuss
that in any way, but the general meaning embodied in the word
"people" seems equally relevant, though, somehow, not quite so "pointed".

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 10th Feb 2021 16:47

The courage and determination shines through.
I hope the result will always be:
Virus vanquished, Victory Vautaw

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 10th Feb 2021 14:03

Ah Brian you misunderstood my comment and that means I wasn't clear enough. I wasn't suggesting that the original quotation should change, just adding a variant version which says something else.

If I had instead of 'but may I...' said 'but may I add a variant' this would have been clearer, and I didn't do that but I also didn't write 'but may I suggest a change'

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keith jeffries

Wed 10th Feb 2021 14:00

Thank you to all those who commented on this poem, especially D Joshi, JD., and Brian H. Also to those who expressed 'like's: Charlotte, Mona, Abdul, Julie, Aviva, Moon Girl and Kristian.

I appreciate your reading this and giving it your considered opinions.

Keith

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Wed 10th Feb 2021 13:56

Good quote MC, which should be left as it was written......not given the PC treatment.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 10th Feb 2021 13:44

Greg, don't watch Long Lost Families on the TV then!

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J.D. Bardo

Wed 10th Feb 2021 13:13

So, (people) Around and around it goes, where it stops, nobody knows.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 10th Feb 2021 12:59

Wow, very astute, but may I....

Hard times create strong people,
Strong people create easy times.
Easy times create weak people,
Weak people create hard times,

Apparently the original quote is by G. Michael Hopf from an apocalyptic novel called 'Those Who Remain' (published 2016)

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julie callaghan

Wed 10th Feb 2021 12:47

Only ever heard the child friendly version until today, your version if by far the best. Thank you

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Nicola Beckett

Wed 10th Feb 2021 12:42

Lovely xx

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Nicola Beckett

Wed 10th Feb 2021 12:41

We all feel like this xx

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keith jeffries

Wed 10th Feb 2021 12:19

Well described with the final stanza being a thought which most people dread. Good poem
Thanks
Keith

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Greg Freeman

Wed 10th Feb 2021 11:40

Thanks, Graham. It has to be said that probably due to my age I do well up in odd places - so to speak - more often these days. Last time it happened was at the barber's - my first haircut in months - last summer. At the same time I seem to have developed a condition during lockdown called Dry Eyes. All very weird.

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d.knape

Wed 10th Feb 2021 11:37

Philistines! Exactly!
Can't believe they would actually INCREASE
the advertisements instead of reducing them.
No peace for you.
Write more poetry!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 10th Feb 2021 10:46

This is a nicely angled write Greg. There's a slightly dystopian edge in there somewhere, with hope blended in too. I'm left feeling sad that many are thinking 'that's it' after getting the jab, not realising that nothing changes, the problem hasn't gone away. I also feel that we MUST all invest more of our resources to increase funding of the NHS. We need a Greta!

Good work.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 10th Feb 2021 10:08

Thanks for the Likes, D Joshi, Holden, Aviva, Aisha, and Julie!

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keith jeffries

Wed 10th Feb 2021 09:57

Julie,

You are fast becoming a sage. Your poem speaks of the present and its consequences for the future, a future which is to some large extent a mystery.
Thanks
Keith

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keith jeffries

Wed 10th Feb 2021 09:54

Brian,

Your strong emotional attachment to Kenya is something often felt by those of us who have lived and worked in other parts of the world. Such an experience is an education in itself. I lived in the deserts of Oman for ten years and even longer in Spain with a few years in the Caribbean. It is hard to settle back here as a part of us yearns to be back in to those places much loved and cherished. I too learned Arabic and Spanish and entered fully into the life of the world about me at the time.

Your poem touches the nerve ends of my soul as I too recall such incredible vistas and some of the best people I have ever had the joy of knowing.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Brian Hodgkinson

Wed 10th Feb 2021 06:44

This one is like a time machine for me. I cannot help but get choked up with longing for those wonderful times we enjoyed there. How rich we were, and are, because of the experience of Kenya, East Africa. We spent fourteen years there -- not back and forth -- no. We lived there, learned the language, culture, food, and received and gave love from the marvelous Luyia people of western Kenya. I hope to visit there again one day before I meet our Maker.

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julie callaghan

Wed 10th Feb 2021 06:36

Just beautiful, such a lovely read. Thank you.

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d.knape

Wed 10th Feb 2021 03:37

if that is the future,
count me out
I'll go back to the past
where it's safer.
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Jordyn Elizabeth

Wed 10th Feb 2021 01:12

I loved this piece ? So beautiful!

-J

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D Joshi

Tue 9th Feb 2021 23:11

This is so beautiful to read. Made me smile ?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 9th Feb 2021 23:03

Yes, I was sitting there reading it. I know mango, papaya, guava, so well because I once lived in that timezone too.

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 23:02

A contented man. A good poem. Makes us appreciate what we have.

Thanks
Keith

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Erika Montoya

Tue 9th Feb 2021 22:52

So nice poem!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 9th Feb 2021 22:35

Thank you to everyone who clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

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Nicola Beckett

Tue 9th Feb 2021 22:04

Yes. I often leave when it gets like this. Sometimes leaving is the only option xx a lovely poem

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 21:46

Aisha,

This poem could easily be the power house of my soul, a place where one treats oneself to the exclusion of all else. Moments of solitude and self indulgence. Ten minutes! Aisha surely you can extend this.

Loved every word and thank you for this poem.
Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 21:41

This poem has a sacred quality to it especially when I read the words of the third stanza as it brings to life the house focusing as if on the epicentre of a real home. The smells and the noises, those aspects which bring a place to life and identify those who live there. My grandmother´s home evokes the same memories for me. A poem with nostalgia and real meaning.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Erika Montoya

Tue 9th Feb 2021 21:30

Beautiful poem, you described so well the feeling

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New Shoes

Tue 9th Feb 2021 21:10

Surveillance, and targeted advertising " The wave of the future, the future, the future, the wave of the future"

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 20:56

This is one of those poems where the poet has the ability to take the reader to the scene described with so little effort. Before I finished reading this poem I was already there.

Thank you
Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 20:54

The cry of humanity, a goal waiting to be achieved since time immemorial but always out of reach. Yet strive we must because there is no viable alternative to humanity´s existence. To love and accept people......surely this can´t be too much of a challenge.

Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 20:50

Many love poems have been written down the centuries but those which come from the heart always stand out from the rest and this is one of them.

Thank you for this
Keith

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D Joshi

Tue 9th Feb 2021 20:10

Wise words and something we should all take on board. ?

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Abdul Ahmad

Tue 9th Feb 2021 20:08

Shifa appreciate your generous comments and shall cherish the like. Thank you for your continued support.

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Chinwendu C.E Rays

Tue 9th Feb 2021 19:28

Great write up Crystals

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Dawn

Tue 9th Feb 2021 18:41

I really like this. opened up a bit of soul

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Dawn

Tue 9th Feb 2021 18:40

Powerful. An abandon lover's song.

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jennifer Malden

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:25

Nice one! Didn't know about G O's name being Eric Blair.
Jennifer

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:18

Thanks Stephen and I have now seen your Essex poem as commented upon. Sorry for the delay.

Ray

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:17

I'm coming back to you Jennifer . Embarrassingly late - I seem to lost the link with WOL reminders. Fascinating school games and pursuits. I do remember fortunes, mainly a girl's option. We used to collect milkbottle tops and wire them together then donate them to some long forgotten charity.

Ray

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