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For The Great Mover

lumps of clay facilitate reality 

nothing is that is not

                                                               Moved

who Moves the Earth?

 

blocks of space        thick                 invisible

portions of what is

a crunched sun dead on

arrival                           no death Moves 

that is not pushed 

 

we are the blocks between airs

atoms attempt to clarify emptiness: there is none

       death step-dancing to

the symphonic tones of orbits

Life is

erratic strings of static like

electric elastic 

 

Who Moves Life?

 

◄ Dead Bird Crawling

One King ►

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kealan coady

Fri 21st Jan 2022 20:34

Keith I'm eternally grateful for your comments and interest in my poetry. It means more than you know.
Anyway, yes it's Dylan Thomas' The Force That Through The Green Fuse Drives The Flower.
I 100% believe there is a Creator because I've seen through this fake reality many times. Thanks again for your consideration.

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keith jeffries

Fri 21st Jan 2022 19:15

Who moves life or who generates natural energy? God, if not who? There must be a life source.
Interesting poem
Thanks
Keith

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