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John Coopey

Wed 24th Mar 2021 09:42

God save us from the “worthy” stuff.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 24th Mar 2021 02:57

This has a great rhythm to it and a great message. ?

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Mike Bartram

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 20:37

Thank you for the nice comment.

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julie callaghan

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 18:32

Thank you Stephen G for the like.

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Your Royal Poetess

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 18:19

Lovely poem

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 18:06

Thank you to everyone who liked this. There is a race between vaccination and the third wave and more restrictions will be necessary until the numbers immunised get up to a decent level. At the moment, only 10% of Belgians, where I am, have had their first dose.

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John Marks

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 15:23

Thank you, as ever Keith for your erudition and empathy. As I.grow older I go further back for my reading. This poem was inspired by Virgil's the Aeneid and the Eclogues, one passage in particular:

"I will be gone from here and sing my songs/ In the forest wilderness where the wild beasts are,/ And carve in letters on the little trees/ The story of my love, and as the trees/ Will grow letters too will grow, to cry/ In a louder voice the story of my love."

Virgil 70 BC to 21 BC

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julie callaghan

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 14:30

Great message, well said. Thank you

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keith jeffries

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 14:24

A poem from the heart of inner searching and anguish from the past. The poem has a raw content but engenders compassion. Honesty is at the fore.

Well written and direct.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 13:23

a poem of intense longing for that moment when we drift away. As with all your poems I am drawn to certain lines, "waves to gentle my dreams as I slide into the sea" and " while young ghosts in the hallway weep silently". As the reader I am there. If I were to write this poem I should want to be close to the sea but in a chair wrapped in a heavy tartan blanket with my pipe and a glass of rioja as the sun sets. A poem which brings to together life as a culmination of all yet in a moment of time.

Dare I say, more please.
Thank you for this

Keith

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John Coopey

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 12:49

You are quite right about consistencyMC. We coined the very definition-“Spursy”. We were top of the league just before Christmas, having beaten Man U and City, and the Arse. Two months later we were mid-table having dropped like a stone. “Spursy” from game to game and also within a game, always capable of snatching defeat from the jaws of victory. It’s what every Spud signs up to.

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keith jeffries

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 11:38

Stuart,
This is a good poem and the last stanza really says it all. There but for the grace of God go we. Many are unfortunate in either their appearance or mental agility. They need all our love, attention and support. I once knew a young man who was downs syndrome. He was regarded as a lost cause by most until he developed a flair for cooking and baking. He was sent to a Catering College against advice but emerged with distinctions and credits along with best student of the year. As your poem concludes "show some humanity".
A good poem and thank you for it

Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 11:22

JC - I wasn't aware of that comment from JM.. But maybe he was
"talking them up" into being better than they were? His previous
teams were hardly short of class/talent. The question is - where is
the consistency of play from the players now? Arsenal has had
the same problem. Talk about travelling in hope in a league that
has players swanning around claiming to be worth hundreds of
thousands of £££s a week!! ?

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keith jeffries

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 10:12

The mind can be a dark place but there are ways of breaking free from its influence. Look outwards and focus yourself on someone or something else to distract your attention. This poem comes from deep within using powerful expressions. A poem seeking release from a form of captivity.
Thank you for this

Keith

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Nazia Khan

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 08:28

Amorevolous ??

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Nazia Khan

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 07:02

???

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Your Royal Poetess

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 07:00

Beautiful!

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julie callaghan

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 06:37

Thank you for the likes Aviva, Holden, Nigel, Kevin and Hugh. Thank you also for the kind comment Hugh.

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Hugh

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 04:06

Brilliant !!

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Annie Josephine

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 21:37

Thanks for liking my poem!

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Annie Josephine

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 21:35

Your poems are wonderful. They bring a big smile to my face!

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Annie Josephine

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 21:33

I love this! Smart penguins!

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Annie Josephine

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 21:32

Thanks New Shoes. Yes, God is everything and so are we.?

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 21:03

Thanks Jennifer, and thank you Stephen, really pleased you liked it. I've felt like I've lost my mojo just recently, l really wasn't sure about this, so your comments are gratefully received and thank you so much. ❤❤

J. x

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julie callaghan

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 19:43

Thanks for the likes Aviva, Kevin and Stephen G.

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 19:09

I really love this poem by Tupac:

The Rose That Grew from Concrete
(autobiographical)

Did u hear about the rose that grew from a crack
in the concrete
Proving nature's laws wrong it learned 2 walk
without having feet
Funny it seems but by keeping its dreams
it learned 2 breathe fresh air
Long live the rose that grew from concrete
when no one else even cared!

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Your Royal Poetess

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 18:56

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Your Royal Poetess

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 18:20

I love this?? I do not think anyone in this world should go to bed hungry or without anything essential.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 18:16

Thanks Stephen and Julie for your comments. ?

Thanks also to everyone who clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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John Coopey

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 17:02

Indeed it’s sad to see where County are. They vie with Sheffield United for the title of oldest club in the world. If they get back they should adopt the Phoenix motto - if Accrington Stanley hadn’t beaten them to it.
As for “over-priced imitations”, Maureen himself said it was the most talented squad he had ever inherited and that he couldn’t believe his luck. Well, that seems to have deserted him.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 16:26

Thank you, Michael. Probably a good precaution.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 16:20

A whirlwind of a poem!

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 16:18

Yes, it is an absolute joy to read.

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 15:42

Thank you ?

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 15:34

thank you. it's so beautiful

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 15:26

Thanks to you all for the "likes".

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 15:20

An intriguing subject for poetry...suited to the style employed here..
The content shows just enough to allow the reader to imagine
the alleged offence, its outcome on the street and in court -,
adding the coda of the here today/gone tomorrow banality of life carrying on..

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 15:11

JC - Notts County could be in line for a play-off place - along with
Torquay United - as things look interesting in their own league.
As for Jose M. - even the best jeweller can't make diamonds from
over-priced imitations. ?

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keith jeffries

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 12:03

Thank you Stephen G and Jennifer for your comments and Julie, Aisha, Aviva and Holden for your likes.

I appreciate your kindness in reading and commenting on this poem
Keith

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julie callaghan

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 11:44

Thanks for the likes Stephen G, Aviva and Holden

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Brian Hodgkinson

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 02:51

This is a revised rewrite. Very little was changed -- most of the changes were small word order issues.

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raypool

Sun 21st Mar 2021 22:31

Thanks Jennifer as always. Sorry about the delay .

Ray

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raypool

Sun 21st Mar 2021 22:29

Thanks Sullimani for your observation, I think you have hit on a truth!

Ray

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raypool

Sun 21st Mar 2021 22:27

I'm most obliged for your likes Jennifer, Branwell, Stephen, Aisha and Holden for this piece.

Ray

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 21st Mar 2021 21:55

Thank you Stephen and Jennifer ?
I'm glad I used grimoire ?

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Hugh

Sun 21st Mar 2021 20:51

Wrote one similar to this, It was called "Big Head "

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jennifer Malden

Sun 21st Mar 2021 19:55

Agree absolutely with the general idea, but WHY ISN'T THERE A MAN'S DAY? Obvious answer, because they still have it very much their own way!

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sun 21st Mar 2021 19:51

Liked this one! He was generally rather a mysterious person anyway.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sun 21st Mar 2021 19:41

Beautifully orchestrated theme, and every word rings true. The marginalised don't make for interested reading, sadly. Agree with what Stephen says that it is a cutting criticism of the times we live in.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sun 21st Mar 2021 19:36

Reallly clever and funny as usual!

Jennifer

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