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Last night

 

Last night

I walked upon the water.

I really walked

Upon the water.

You who do not believe me,

Come back tomorrow and

I will tell you

That last night

I did it again.

◄ Sounds of the Seventies (or 'Those weren't the days')

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 22nd Mar 2021 16:26

Thank you, Michael. Probably a good precaution.

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Michael Kwack

Sun 21st Mar 2021 16:39

I believe you
but will come back tomorrow
and see what you will tell me.
M.K.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 19th Mar 2021 17:15

A big thankyou to everyone who liked this poem. I wrote it some time ago but I now find it very topical, since it implies that if you repeat something often enough people will start to believe it, and all you have to do is to tell someone that something happened, not provide any evidence. This is a tactic which has been followed recently with fraud claims in the US election.

Also, there is a time shift aspect. When I say:

'Come back tomorrow and

I will tell you

That last night

I did it again.'

I mean that tonight I did it again. But, of course, by tomorrow tonight will be last night. So nothing lasts forever, or at all.

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