Very witty - loved it.

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Thank you for your comment, Tommy. You were right of course, I may have a rethink on this one, lol.

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Original item by Lynn Dye

Music and Poetry in Norway Square every day from 12.30-2.00pm. Enjoy! :)

(Plus loads of other arty stuff too!)

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Original item by Ann Foxglove

Sounds lovely. I enjoyed the poem too.

Comment is about Feeling OK... (blog)

I like the title and the reasoning. There are a lot of damaged people out there and knowing that helps to understand the pattern of their behaviour.

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Oooo I want a Coco Chanel and chocolate day too - but I'm heavily committed to watching monkeys shit and rip my car apart (Knowsley Safari Park)...

The poem is lovely - very gentle and warming and original - very original! xx

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Thankyou :) and thank heaven indeed x

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Vienna Review
http://www.katfrancois.com/#/poetry-review/4546395630

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Original item by Kat Francois

Enjoyed this very much, Stella, good one. x

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No, I am not saying that.

Comment is about Between A Rock And A Hard Place (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

hi Stella.

I,m in'klein'ed to say
this is a lovely airy
optimistic poem,
ideal for la femme.

I can almost whiff
what,with hands up has the perfume
of something that shall remain
non-present on my wifes dressing table.

haha! as if not!
if it did,nt,I would speechless
lying on a cold slab.

this leaves a lovely lingering odour
unlike the onion-like smell
of my arm-pits after a day
of d.i.y in t'hot sun.

cheers Stella.

Stef.

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I love this John; one for the future for me to do.
Yes? Good! I knew you'd say that.

Now check out my "Schnel Shock" audio.

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Original item by John Coopey

Well written, I really like this. :)

Comment is about Disturbing Night (blog)

Original item by Christopher Dawson

Well, there's a vaster difference still between tyrants and our British parties, actually, which may have been worth commenting on. This was just intended to be a light hearted comment on how do you choose between two, three or four things that are all bad.
Are you in fact saying that maybe Hitler or Bin Laden were not bad then?

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Original item by Lynn Dye

yeh-lets hope you CHOP them off
at their SAUCE

don,t wanna MEAT them again
they might claim a STEAK on this site

I always will have a BEEF
with SPAM
even if it is a CORNY one.

thanks for not MINCING your words
and PUDDIN' in a lot of work
HAGGIS that will be the last we see
of this POLONEY.

might catch you again next FRYDAY.

OIL be seeing ya-

CHRIS PEEBAYKON.

ps. hope all PANS out ok

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Original item by Greg Freeman

simplistically yet well described
all too common
nightly journey

that I for one travel all too often
most times
instigated you could say
by wizzywords spinning around
ones grey haired cranium.

the solution?
need I tell you?
no-not the palm pilot thingy-but
L'amour! cor!

cheers

P&S

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Original item by Christopher Dawson

You're confusing the issue Cynthia...unless otherwise stated-(as in +1 or -1) 1+1 always equals 2, as I qualified in my remark re 'dialectics'. Re 'the egg'. You are confusing a simple statement of fact with the qualifier of morality- I said: 'If I take an egg and crush it in my hand- it is an event- indisputable- and only becomes a matter for 'dispute' when a sentient being 'intervenes''. Murder is also an event and is covered by my initial statement.

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Original item by Tommy Carroll

indeed Neil is there sadly
for some,
a too well rooted and not neccessarily wanted
subculture.
damn the white collar criminals!

good lines abound in this poem.

thanks.

P&S.W.

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Original item by Neil West

Lynn there is a vast difference between Hitler and Bin Laden: numerically, intent, methods and results.

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Original item by Lynn Dye

Hi Greg, thanks for your comments there may be more on the way, its quite an enjoyable exercise. Win

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Original item by Greg Freeman

oh-only a temporary glitch Johnnyboy
-you,ll be back forthwith-
if not sooner!

good advice from Kealan btw.

cheers Twelver Embley.

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Original item by John Embley

Good poem, it reminds me of the saying (i think this is it) "In the darkest depths of desperation, man created god"

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You should try writing a non rhyming poem. Maybe your thoughts are being confined by this form. When writing free form, thoughts are much more capable of expansion and therefore allows more freedom of vocabulary.

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Original item by John Embley

Everyone at my writing group liked your poem very much - and were intrigued to find out what a villanelle was! Most of the group stick to writing prose you see. Thanks a lot for letting me read it to them.

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Original item by Dave Carr

Hi Ann Thanks for clever comment on Piano which I hadn't thought of myself. In fact she was very quiet and unassuming which is another reason it was all so shocking.

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Original item by Ann Foxglove

Thank you, Patricia, you are right, we are lovely, but I guess some men are not so bad!!! Thanks for comment xx

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Original item by Lynn Dye

ha ha...possibly out of the window with my own gallavanting off somewhere more interesting..sighs.. :)

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Original item by John Embley

Harry, your comment on 'Considering Colour' is excellent, and I fully take your point. My aim was to steer completely clear of poetic 'values/imagery' and write something which bends the cold scientific terms into a versed/turned form full of cadence, out of the paragraph/caption genre into a more friendly eye-structure. Textbooks can be very intimidating. I'm still quite pleased with the effort; the facts might actually be remembered. THUS SPAKE CYNTHIA! Hahahaha.

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Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Hi Elaine; - thanks for the comment on ticket to ride it was wrote on a summers day which i guess sums up the british summertime - lol but thanks for the comment again - hope you are good - speak soon xx

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Original item by Elaine

Hi Elaine; - it was wrote on a summers day which i guess sums up the british summertime but thanks for the comment again - hope you are good - speak soon xx

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Original item by Andy N

thanks cynthia for the comment here on the end of summer .. it's one to think bout which i hadn't thought about so all suggestions are welcome.. hope you are well - andy n x

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Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

thanks cynthia for the comment here.. it's one to think bout which i hadn't thought about so all suggestions are welcome x

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Original item by Andy N

Hello Cynth
Thanks for Twice Bless`d

Thinking on this:
Lots of the discoveries of science are marvellous (genes etc;) but we`ve all got so used to praising them in the terms the scientists use that they read dully. Alan Morrison in his poem `Aloneness` gives a description of `a hand` which approaches a wondering, poetic way of telling (and using)a scientific truth. Both poetry - and science - would benefit if we could do more of it.

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Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

really enjoyable poem
I love the open-endededness

the best to you.

Stef

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Original item by Tom

Hi Ann, so glad you enjoyed 'Reminiscence' and for letting me know.

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Original item by Ann Foxglove

we get the gist of what you are saying and can relate to it.thank you.Patricia

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and thank heaven indeed for those greater things.nicely written.thank you.Patricia.

Comment is about The tightening vice. (blog)

hello again Lynn,this interesting poem goes to prove my point to you earlier,are,nt we women lovely and not warlike like some! my thanks.Patricia(oh and Stef I suppose)ha

Comment is about Between A Rock And A Hard Place (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

You're confusing the issue Cynthia...unless otherwise stated-(as in +1 or -1)1+1 always equals 2, as I qualified in my remark re 'dialectics'. Re 'the egg'. You are confusing a simple statement of fact with the qualifier of morality- I said: 'If I take an egg and crush it in my hand- it is an event- indisputable- and only becomes a matter for 'dispute' when a sentient being 'intervenes''. Murder is also an event and is covered by my initial statement.

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Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Very good Hazel, I enjoyed reading this, good way of defining the word thought.....

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Really enjoyed this poem Marianne. Lovely.

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Original item by Marianne Daniels

I like this too, but not so sure about the last bit. For me it fades out a bit after the Cowley line. But that's just me.

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Original item by Tom

Well said, Harry.
'Tis an old piece of advice, but never more appropriate -- Never try to refute religion with science, or refute science with religious argument.

Richard Dawkins would do well to acknowledge that logic and spirituality, like commonsense and love, have nothing whatsoever to do with each other, and it's just that difference which makes us human, not machines.

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I take it you mean professor Know-all Harry!
I can tell this by your clever BOLD indicative.
A memorable poem.

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These are very good. You have an excellent eye for imagery and a good ear for sound. I see a lot going on here, and admire it in one so young.

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Original item by Charlotte Henson

Hi Cynthia, thanks for the continued comments. Because each word was treated separately (Cut and pasted if you like) I don't think this piece says anything about football. Maybe that Mr McCarra uses a colourful vocabulary to report it but no more. His match reports would not sit comfortably in a red top for these reasons and this is partly why I like them. Win x

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Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Hi Bernard, Welcome to WOL. Winston

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Original item by Bernard Briggs

Andy, I like this a lot - unusual, fab images. IMO, I would consider whether the first stanza is needed at all - only because it is so ordinary, in a poem of extraordinary ideas.

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Original item by Andy N

I enjoyed this, Harry, the delightful sentiments, and the brisk metric style of rhyme and rhythm.

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Yes, we should correspond more. I have always thought so. BTW, since +1 and -1 = 0, IMO, quoting really simple arithmetic does not have secure bargaining power. And what if the egg had an embryo inside it? Is that still just an event, or murder? I love the grit of active discussion. You now seem more open to active 'give and take', without suspicion, or a kind of gentle snarling. Or am I being too personal?

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Original item by Tommy Carroll