there <3
Comment is about WOL's Gemma Lees launches book at Bury library (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Darn it - can't I get anything right? Lol - I was hoping you might like all the Yorkshire bits - I had to do a bit of research for all those cricket terms! xx
Comment is about Chlamydia (blog)
Original item by Isobel
Isobel - you titled it Chamydia.
Was this a slip of the tongue?
Very good! Luvverly rhymes like "riddya".
Comment is about Chlamydia (blog)
Original item by Isobel
Again more Autumnal imaginings from You Andy, I hope we will be spared the mustard gas! In some ways I think Autumn gets a bad press. Roll on the blues I say, and keep the poetry rolling too, Win x
Comment is about The End of Summer III (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Hi Again, this one built Andy. got better and better as it went on finishing on a dream ticket for nowhere. Excellent. Great pics to accompany both (1) and (11) too. Win
Comment is about The End of Summer (II) (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Enjoyed this Andy, This bit - jagged with purpose, like it was famous for 15 seconds. I thought particularly poetic and the ending interesting and original. Win
Comment is about The End of Summer (I) (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Wonderful Andy.
I'll go check it out.
Comment is about Little Lark Press (blog)
Original item by Lisa Zaran
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 2nd Oct 2011 20:42
aw thats nice of you Lynn.
much appreciated.
will catch up on the hundred poems
you do in our absence-lol!
have a nice evening Lynn
(and all your lovelies too)
Patricia and Stef.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
Original item by Lynn Dye
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 2nd Oct 2011 20:39
ok Ma Dye-
heres a list of my faves
to choose from.
lets see if great minds
have the same taste.
'love is a many splendoured thing?
or-'try to remember?
or-'moonlight in vermont?
or-autumn leaves?
or-'nature boy?
or-'harbour lights?
or-'cryin in the chapel?
or-'miss you nights?
or-'twelth of never?
or-'fields of gold?....
and many more...
as the k-tel ad always reads.
what brill taste I have hey Lynn....
-Lynn! where have you gone-haha!
Patricia/Stefano.xx
Comment is about Rock Star (blog)
Original item by Lynn Dye
Thank you, Steve, Stella, Mike. Be interested to know what parts you felt were too cryptic, Mike. It's my belief that any great work (not that this is a great work!) ought to elicit laughter and sadness.
Comment is about Stigmata (blog)
Hey Laura,
Thx for reading/commenting on my last poem
My Best
Chris
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Thx for reading/commenting on my last poem Tommy.
My Best
Chris
Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Thx for reading and feedback, I was a little unsure of this one.
My Best
Chris
Comment is about Animals (blog)
A really good and honest poem. I very much enjoyed reading it.
Comment is about Shutting-In Time (blog)
Original item by STEVE RUDD
Ta Andy - I know it's just a bit of whimsy! And anthropomorphism of course! But hey - not mortal sins so I'll leave those seals be. x
Comment is about beguiled by seals (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
<Deleted User> (6315)
Sun 2nd Oct 2011 16:35
Good one Nima.. :)
Comment is about Dear Diary © Part 1 by Nima Stone © (blog)
Stef, I said sweet not idiotic or nauseous!! haha.
Thanks for nice comments, Lynn xx
Thank you Andy, most kind :) xx
Comment is about Rock Star (blog)
Original item by Lynn Dye
Lynn
Thanks for your comment on `Everyone knew...
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
Original item by Lynn Dye
Thanks for livening up my week-end.
...and witty - man - witty!
That `Like some love being unrequited` is very 21st century.
Comment is about It Just Ain't Gonna Happen!! (blog)
Original item by Jeffarama!
Cheers Andy, Lynn, thats what its meant to do but also a bit of a serious ending thanx
Comment is about It Just Ain't Gonna Happen!! (blog)
Original item by Jeffarama!
thanx for commenting. its a piece from 97. was wrote when drunk. thanx. look forward to the cd. and yes imagine a universal mind and how it could see things like colour. that would fry our individual brains for sure.
Comment is about INTO MY MIND (blog)
Original item by NICK ARMBRISTER
<Deleted User> (9734)
Sun 2nd Oct 2011 12:00
Hi Andy, thx for the comments. These football poems have a mind of their own. I just give them a push, There are 2 more of mine on here from different Kevin McCarra match reports -
gap effects
harm resistance
Win
Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)
Original item by Andy N
I submitted Lisa.. it took a bit but got a piece done, x
Comment is about Little Lark Press (blog)
Original item by Lisa Zaran
Really enjoyed this, Nima.. Have a look at this blog entry as it could be of interest to you for this piece.. x
http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/newsgroupview.php?NewsThreadsID=1283
Comment is about Dear Diary © Part 1 by Nima Stone © (blog)
excellent stuff, laura.. hope to see you read soon..... xx
Comment is about Hasta Mañana (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor
last line is pitched perfect, kealan.. top stuff, man.. a
Comment is about In The Shadows Of Mountains (blog)
Original item by Kealan Coady
nice stuff, neil.. too long for my personal tastes but i enjoyed it however.. A
Comment is about Danger Rides Abroad Tonight (blog)
Original item by Neil West
I think this is defo more of a ranting Jeffarama here rather than the softer Jeff Dawson stuff, m8.. lol
Be aware of the Gedward typo m8 but I enjoyed reading it.. and it made Cathy laugh when i read it out to her, so job done i think - lol
top stuff, man.
Comment is about It Just Ain't Gonna Happen!! (blog)
Original item by Jeffarama!
i really enjoyed this, Nick - one of your best i feel... you may want to consider removing the section regarding alochol as it may build up the piece's tempo.. either way, keep it coming (Need to sort out that Curve CD too for you - haven't forgotten)
Comment is about INTO MY MIND (blog)
Original item by NICK ARMBRISTER
really enjoyed this, Ann - i do think the ending is a bit tellie however.. it could work better with a repeat of the end of the first stanza better.. either way, it's beauitful stuff x
Comment is about beguiled by seals (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
almost a song here, lynn... i almost picked up my keyboard and started hitting some chords to this then.. sad but lovely.. x
Comment is about Rock Star (blog)
Original item by Lynn Dye
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 2nd Oct 2011 00:09
"render me please one last sweet song"
okay,you asked for it-
# yer put yer left leg in
yer left leg out......#
or
# I wish I could fly right upto the sky
but I can,t#
(isnt that a shame,you fluffy green
little b******d) haha
lovely poem Dye the dude-ess
2kisses wiv teef in from-
guess who-two.xx
Comment is about Rock Star (blog)
Original item by Lynn Dye
<Deleted User> (9734)
Sat 1st Oct 2011 22:43
Amazing work J. Otis Powell. The words in Quintets captured my every emotion.
Comment is about J. Otis Powell‽ (with interrobang) (poet profile)
Original item by J. Otis Powell‽ (with interrobang)
Hi Jeff, this made me smile, (especially Jedward and John Major!) most enjoyable. x
Comment is about It Just Ain't Gonna Happen!! (blog)
Original item by Jeffarama!
Just spotted this Shirley (I've been away and I'm catching up now!) I really enjoyed it, the picture too. I used to stick cellotape on my fringe to try and make it go staight - and put a stocking on my hair after I'd washed it to stop it curling up! But now I kinda like it - freckles too! (Just wish there were no wrinkles!)
Comment is about A silly poem about hair. (blog)
Original item by Shirley Smothers
Thank you Lynn for your comment on Sexy at Sixty. I have to say I do try. Hazelx
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
Original item by Lynn Dye
Philipos
Sat 1st Oct 2011 20:09
Cosmic consciousness an awesome idea - like the way you handle these concepts and that of colour - are we lucky or what who have the faculties to see these things when some folk I know are colour blind for example and cannot think outside their own space.
Comment is about INTO MY MIND (blog)
Original item by NICK ARMBRISTER
Thanks Lynn ( beguiled by seals)- I know "nature" poems aren't everyone's cup of tea! When I was staying in St Ives last week I went for a walk on the beach just as it was getting dark and there were these two seals really close in to shore. Magic!xx
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
Original item by Lynn Dye
Thanks Lynn - I know "nature" poems aren't everyone's cup of tea! When I was staying in St Ives last week I went for a walk on the beach just as it was getting dark and there were these two seals really close in to shore. Magic!
Comment is about beguiled by seals (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
What a lovely poem, Ann, I love seals (well, all wildlife really) and this is so charming. x
Comment is about beguiled by seals (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
I really enjoyed this poem, Harry. As Stella says, very heartwarming.
Comment is about EVERYONE KNEW BUT ME (blog)
Yep, raised a big smile here too, Hazel. Having not long passed this stage, I would say why not be sexy at sixty if you want to be? Ignore the bits that droop, that's what I try for! Lol.
Really enjoyed this, Hazel.
Comment is about SEXY AT SIXTY (blog)
Thanks everyone! I just wanted to share my good news :)
Comment is about I'm a finalist... (blog)
Original item by Linda Cosgriff
I cannot help but admire this poem (even though I have real physical problems with my own feet lol). It is a sad tale, and in some parts i find it a little cryptic, but as Stella says, it is a positively enchanting poem. But i didn't know whether I should be laughing at the comedy or feeling sad. Nice work though ray.
rgds
Mike.
Comment is about Stigmata (blog)
I enjoyed this very much Stella.
Hazel
Comment is about Feeling OK... (blog)
Isobel
Sun 2nd Oct 2011 22:11
Love the way you build dialect and accent in John - substantiate and plausible seem a bit out of place for some strange reason...
Is a fizzog a face then? I've never heard of that one - it must be a yorkshire word :) x
Comment is about "Widening the Circle of Friends" (blog)
Original item by John Coopey