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The End of Summer III

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After Summer,

Autumn is always brushed

Under the carpet

Like a half-baked afterthought

Before the winter arrives

With its blanket

Of snow rolled blues.

 

At the beginning of Autumn

There is a hesitation

In the breeze

Before the clouds

Darken the sky

And poison us slowly

With mustard gas.

 

There is a sadness

In the half cut sun

Flickering once more

Before the clouds

Carry the sun away

Like a funeral director

As an ornament

Of a mystery

Dying with a silent scream,

 

Before setting their

Compass’s north

Never to be seen again.

the end of summersummer

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Elaine Booth

Tue 11th Oct 2011 19:50

Very enjoyable poem, Andy. I love "there is a hesitation" but wasn't so sure about mustard gas. I like what you're saying though. XX

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Andy N

Thu 6th Oct 2011 09:01

Hi Win;

I hope too we are spared the mustard gas.. I think I had Wilfred Owen in mind when I wrote that last line.. lol

Cheers

Andy N

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winston plowes

Sun 2nd Oct 2011 21:55

Again more Autumnal imaginings from You Andy, I hope we will be spared the mustard gas! In some ways I think Autumn gets a bad press. Roll on the blues I say, and keep the poetry rolling too, Win x

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Andy N

Thu 29th Sep 2011 22:14

thanks to all for your comments here on this series.. i think there is just one more to come here, then if all goes to plan - I'll then be starting on the next series of short poems which has a working title of 'the end of the pier'.. x

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Mon 26th Sep 2011 20:22


I too have enjoyed your series Andy :)

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Laura Taylor

Mon 26th Sep 2011 12:59

Lovely Andy - great series :)

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Lynn Dye

Mon 26th Sep 2011 11:53

Another goody, Andy. I enjoyed this, some original ideas. x

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kealan coady

Mon 26th Sep 2011 03:31

Really liked this andy, especially the idea of nature using chemical warfare on humans, if the earth could think maybe it would, it does its best with natural disasters. Good poem.

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