<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 7th Sep 2011 22:25
lovely poem
lovely Larisa.
Trish Wilde.x
Comment is about Only In September Night... (blog)
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Thank you my dear Lynn for helping me. I would like to ask you: Please, always tell me your opinion on this or that stanza. It's much appreciated.
With love, Larisa
Comment is about Only In September Night... (blog)
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As I've said to Ann, my first suit for eleven years. Yes we had a lovely day and the weather was stunning too. That's them all gone now, all four!
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
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My daughter got married last Friday and I had to buy a suit to give her away, my first one for eleven years. Haven't got many decent pictures of myself, usually on holiday and with sunglasses on.
By the way absolutely loved the last poem Ann, the weight of sentiment was bang on the money and the last lines were wonderful. Great work.
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 7th Sep 2011 21:10
evening Lynn.
re youtube-no not that one you mention
this is one where it really looks
like the dog is talking.
the guys voice is teasing him about food
'dont tease the dog'
logging off now to sort a poem out for later.
cheers
Stef/Trish.xxxx
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
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Hi Larisa, there are some beautiful lines in this poem. I enjoyed it. (If you don't mind me saying, I think it should be "I am so daring and brave" or "I dare and am so brave") Lovely though, with love, Lynn xx
Comment is about Only In September Night... (blog)
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Very touching and thoughtful poem, Kealan. I enjoyed it.
Comment is about Euphrasia (blog)
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<Deleted User> (9554)
Wed 7th Sep 2011 20:08
Well I did your "Ghost of White Hart lane." John
and it went down well. It was something they never expected from me. Some Liverpool supporter at the back called out("You cannot be serious)well I was on this occasion; and it was received with a nice gentle clap; except for that bastard at the back whose megaphoned-Broderick Crawford-voice just mocked me with: "10 - 4."
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Thanks all - I think it's the time of year. xx
Comment is about earth (blog)
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<Deleted User> (6315)
Wed 7th Sep 2011 11:30
Yes! I think you are an altogether bad lad..ha ha ha ha...
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<Deleted User> (6315)
Wed 7th Sep 2011 11:11
Good stuff indeed, especially like that last verse..eye's to blink wet memories..yup good stuff. :)
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<Deleted User> (6315)
Wed 7th Sep 2011 11:04
Ouch!..'Prose chopped up!' ouch again sir..
Love the subject matter (yup it was on the discussion board sometime a while back)
;) no passion in poets anymore had me giggling..
Comment is about Poetry Slam (blog)
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Somebody put me out of my misery.
The story's not mine.
I've read/seen/dreamt this somewhere recently, but can I hell-as-like remember where.
Comment is about Poetry Slam (blog)
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Philipos
Wed 7th Sep 2011 08:28
I've read many poems about special experiences when gardening and this is up there with the best of them - a really lovely piece.
Comment is about earth (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
Well written Neil.
My Best
Chris
Comment is about Hearts of Darkness (blog)
Original item by Neil West
Poles apart from how I think- I love your poem for that fact. A little thing that says something.
Excellent.
My Best
Chris
Comment is about Making Sushi (an oldish one tweaked) (blog)
me and dave are still laughing!!
Comment is about Excerpt from novel. (blog)
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:38
hey-angel eyes!
muchas gracias re-frustration.
have a peaceful night.
Stef&Trish
xx
Comment is about Melanie Coady (poet profile)
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The last three lines are particularly fine.
Comment is about earth (blog)
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amazing hun xx another brilliant piece of writing xx
Comment is about Early Learning (blog)
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jeasus i loved it xxx brill xx
Comment is about Nothing Happens For A Reason (blog)
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aw wow hun love it...flowers and killers..brill xx
Comment is about Nightbird (blog)
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unbelievable hun xx quite dark..love it so much
Comment is about Odium (blog)
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i have a strange want right now for a year in a room wit a red ball..hmmm...does it have 2 b a red ball..red means danger..or passion!! i would call my ball..harry xx
Comment is about The Little Red Ball (blog)
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my eyes tried 2 fuck off in opposite directions wit this one lol alot of questions here lol xx
Comment is about Sprawl (blog)
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dark stuff kealan...hmmm what was on ur mind here!! xx
Comment is about In The Dead Of Sunlight (blog)
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top notch ive read it 4 times..beautiful..a lovely calming warmth to this one kiddo xx
Comment is about He Heard The Stars (blog)
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jesus kealan ive gone from laughing at th lst poem 2 cryin wit this one!!!!! hnstly...something very terrifyngly sad about it xx
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ha ha ha ha ah im still laughin xx brilliant bro xx
Comment is about So (blog)
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were u a worm in a former life??u hv a secret connection 2 them i feel lol brill hun xx
Comment is about The Chants Of Insects (blog)
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i dont know why but im laughing right now lol...love it xx
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beautiful just beautiful xx
Comment is about In The Fizz Of Winter (blog)
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aw wow i luv it hun xxx
Comment is about The Censored Sky Of The City (blog)
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thank you 4 ur sweet comments frederick xx
Comment is about My Flower (blog)
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On the surface the poem is very sentimental, but not in a derogatory way, and it lets one fill-in the blank of who 'you' is. I read it a number of times and each time thought of someone or something different and they all worked. Thanks..
Comment is about earth (blog)
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Thanks Ann for comment on the Cuddle Chair. xx
Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)
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Thank you so much everyone for your comments.
Thomas, strange you should mention musical chairs, I wrote one at the weekend called Musical Beds!
Lol, Isobel, we did go bed shopping too, as it happens, but didn't make quite such a spectacle of ourselves!
Bed hopping, Julian? Perhaps I should rename that poem! lol.
Comment is about The Cuddle Chair (blog)
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Philipos
Tue 6th Sep 2011 20:53
Hi Dave, (John Doe) so many of these characters around and some actually began life with promising upbringings. Who knows where the decline began? Thanks for commenting.
Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)
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Ha - do you dare me to post Chlamydia? That should grab attention. I should do it before they kill Gadaffi - if they haven't already done so - I'm a bit behind on the news...
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Tue 6th Sep 2011 20:25
cheers for the info re Fanbox.
will look in later
ta Dave
P&S.
Comment is about Dave Dunn (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Tue 6th Sep 2011 20:22
Lynn,
try this for a laugh-
on youtube type in these exact words
-don,t tease the dog-
its absolutely hilarious!
(try and get Benji to copy it)
Trish'n'Stef.xx
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (5011)
Tue 6th Sep 2011 19:33
So you're claiming all that swivelling was an accident? Remind me not to follow you when you go bed shopping...
Comment is about The Cuddle Chair (blog)
Original item by Lynn Dye
Oh - I've come out in goosebumps John! It would be nice to think that there could still be that connection.
A tender, poignant poem Ann. xx
Comment is about earth (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
Hi Lynn, thank you for your comments, they are much appreciated. It pointed me towards your work too, I like the political awareness in your writing, especially When the World Stood Still. makes you wonder if things run better when there is no government!
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Larisa Rzhepishevska
Wed 7th Sep 2011 23:30
Thank you dear Stefan! It's always pleasant to read your poems and your comments. And now it's even more pleasant as you are together with Patricia. My warmest wishes to her.
Comment is about Only In September Night... (blog)
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