Hi Melanie - liked your sample poem on bats in the cave great - thanks for your comments on Crows x

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Very descriptive, you have a way with words. The more I read the more vivid it is. It reminds me of Flower of Hope. I wonder if I hvae posted that yet.

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Hi Ann - glad you were cheered up a little by Love Thy Clergy thanks for comments - was sorry to hear about your cat and hope you perk up soon x

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Once again, thank you all so much Going to the sunny south of the Island for me as a child was a treat one that included lots of crossed fingers and prayers to ensure good weather...

ahh well... somepeople believe in seaweed.....

But on rainy days there was always a silver lining... i played with the girl next door..... I liked that.

Gus xx

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hey Melanie, cheers for the comment about my poem. hope it didn't bum you out too much. look forward to reading your words.

Comment is about Melanie Coady (poet profile)

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HI Andy thanks for the feedback. Yes, I seem to be doing some different things at the moment, about time maybe!

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beauitfully wrote, Gus.... Loved it - if I was to write a poem for this comp (which is unlikely now owning to lack of time), would aim for something as beauitful as this.. Loved it!

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excellent, Isobel.. i couldn't fault this atall - love it in particular the first two stanzas xx

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Thanks you Elaine for reading and commenting on my poem (Musing on the Death of Poetry). You are much appreciated.

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Oh I used to play horses! I was a palomino! Or Champion the Wonder Horse! Hope you're well Lynn! Got to gallop off now and have my breakfast - a nice bucket of hay! xx

Comment is about Childhood Friendship (blog)

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Lovely!xx

Comment is about Apple Blossom Song (blog)

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Hi Tom, You draw very well, and the poem is very nice,

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Hi Anthony

What's happened to you? You're missed. We could do with a bit of class round here

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Hello Cynthia, thanks for reading and responding to my poem 'Cravings.' I hope you do reread it and my accompanying "disclaimer" and see if it alters the first impression you had. Cheers. Frederick.

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This is a lovely nostalgic cameo x

Comment is about Childhood Friendship (blog)

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My fav - 'She stirred, and stole discreetly from the fascinating nest, And once again she hurried on her apple blossom quest' I on the other hand regret to say might have taken the eggs possibly earlier in my teen years x

Comment is about Apple Blossom Song (blog)

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Really liked some of the metaphors here - especially 'So I drink myself away' - nice poem

Comment is about The night comes (blog)

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nice, solid and violent. good message too. Clever use of rhyme. I should think would read aloud well.

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well said. i love how you move from the universal into the descriptions of human pain. great stuff.

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Thank you for your kind comments Melanie, i appreciate the support greatly, oh and I love your hair !

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Thank you for your feedback; it was very kind of you.All my poems are songs now as I felt I was better at writing songs than poetry - only took me three or four years to begin to understand the difference!Thanks again; it means a lot when someone of your experience takes the time to comment.

Thanks again - I put my stuff on http://www.mask-mp3.com/

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Hi Kealan, The chat facility usually works if you are very patient. A 'typing' sound effect will occur when you get a reply. The temptation is to think "oh the bloody thing isnt working" and click off or try to reconnect, don't just hang on in there if poss , its not ideal I know. Win (Admin)

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Hi Melanie, The chat facility usually works if you are very patient. A 'typing' sound effect will occur when you get a reply. The temptation is to think "oh the bloody thing isnt working" and click off or try to reconnect, don't just hang on in there if poss , its not ideal I know. Win (Admin)

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ah bless ta john x

Comment is about Eight Neglected Wonders of a Womb (blog)

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good work Lynn-beautiful part of the country!xx

Comment is about Childhood Friendship (blog)

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Forget my previous comment about "get posting" - just found this. It's powerful ju-ju, Melanie. Keep posting.

Comment is about Eight Neglected Wonders of a Womb (blog)

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How lovely. Greg is right - "refreshing" it is

Comment is about Apple Blossom Song (blog)

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Hello Melanie
Thanks for your kind thoughts on Senior, Haircut and my masterpiece of epic verse, Breakfast of Champions.
You say, up top, that you're not a poet; well - as you can see, neither am I.
So get posting.

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A welcome breath of something light; the militant wing of the hearts and flowers brigade carrying out "exercises" on a shared border, perhaps?

Comment is about Apple Blossom Song (blog)

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i couldnt stop reading hun..lovely

Comment is about Bill Ewen (poet profile)

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thank you again Melanie(reshape)-very kind-my best regards to you and look forward to reading your fab work.x

Comment is about Melanie Coady (poet profile)

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i cried..enough said!

Comment is about Lost Today (blog)

aw thats truly beautiful hun

Comment is about Disorder of My Family (blog)

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brilliance in words hun

Comment is about Ben Mellor (poet profile)

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that's lovely hun

Comment is about Child's perspective (blog)

Thanks Melanie, welcome to WOL! :)

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ha ha ha read it twice..brill hun!

Comment is about Senior (blog)

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class hun!!

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lol love it

Comment is about Breakfast of Champions (blog)

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Hi Melanie Thanks for your comment on the Wolf Man. He's a great favourite of mine!

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Hi Cynthia - thanks forgetting in touch re; Crows - I always appreciate your comments x

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Hi Kealan re: Crows - sorry to hear about your sexual disappointment - that can sometimes happen with a small bird - but thanks for getting in touch with your amusing comment

Comment is about Kealan Coady (poet profile)

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Hello Cate
Thanks for your thoughts on Dead Men's Shoes. I really do have shoes ranging from size 9 to 11 (not quite 8s to 12s).

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lol stefan u shud def go red..why the hell not?!!lol thank u sooo much 4 ur kind comment hun

Comment is about Melanie Coady (poet profile)

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omg i loved it!!!

Comment is about Ashley Fisher (poet profile)

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hun u shud def put up more,i read this one 3 times&still laughed out loud its brilliantly clever!!

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aw clarissa thank u so much hnstly dt means alot,it is a sore subject alryt bt i had 2 write it as it festers inside me constantly, hey we can only get betr from here on in hun shur ive only 1 up too,watch us we'll destroy wol wit our beautiful minds soon lol

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Welcome and thanks Mel re 'me dads'poem..in your bio you say you are not a poet..! you could have fooled me-your sample is brill! very inspiring-as is your brill hair colour-do you think I should try it? lol! ta again Melanie.xx

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