Several thousand years of built up force
It takes to make a mountain.
The popular friction of time
Surging forward on all sides.
Pushing mass upwards toward the sky.
Strict, unobstructed
As if freedom exists in this form.
As if the earth, wants.
last line is pitched perfect, kealan.. top stuff, man.. a
<Deleted User> (7212)
Wed 28th Sep 2011 22:10
.... and there's a pile of tectonic plates a-waiting in the sink :D
<Deleted User> (6315)
Wed 28th Sep 2011 10:57
enjoyed very much..especially the poular friction of time surging forward on all sides..lovely..
nice work :)
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Elaine Booth
Tue 11th Oct 2011 19:43
Liked this a lot Kealan. My sort of obsessions.