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Rock Star

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Sing me a song and I’ll wave you goodbye,

Pretend you’re not breaking my heart.

Wish me well and I’ll cry when alone,

I loved you too much from the start.

 

Your weeping guitar is deep in my soul,

Pluck me those strings once again,

Fill the air with your touching lyrics

In your bittersweet voice of pain.

 

Sing of your commitment to music,

Or your love of the stage so primary,

I’ll dream of those nights we made love,

Trapped in the cage of my memory.

 

Render me please one last sweet song,

I’ll capture in my heart every tone.

I wish you everlasting success

As I walk home on my own.

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Lynn Dye

Sun 2nd Oct 2011 21:26

Well, I remember the last four!!! ;)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 2nd Oct 2011 20:39

ok Ma Dye-

heres a list of my faves
to choose from.

lets see if great minds
have the same taste.

'love is a many splendoured thing?
or-'try to remember?
or-'moonlight in vermont?
or-autumn leaves?
or-'nature boy?
or-'harbour lights?
or-'cryin in the chapel?
or-'miss you nights?
or-'twelth of never?
or-'fields of gold?....

and many more...
as the k-tel ad always reads.

what brill taste I have hey Lynn....
-Lynn! where have you gone-haha!

Patricia/Stefano.xx

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Lynn Dye

Sun 2nd Oct 2011 16:23

Stef, I said sweet not idiotic or nauseous!! haha.
Thanks for nice comments, Lynn xx

Thank you Andy, most kind :) xx

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Andy N

Sun 2nd Oct 2011 09:58

almost a song here, lynn... i almost picked up my keyboard and started hitting some chords to this then.. sad but lovely.. x

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 2nd Oct 2011 00:09


"render me please one last sweet song"

okay,you asked for it-

# yer put yer left leg in
yer left leg out......#

or
# I wish I could fly right upto the sky
but I can,t#

(isnt that a shame,you fluffy green
little b******d) haha

lovely poem Dye the dude-ess

2kisses wiv teef in from-
guess who-two.xx

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