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Shutting-In Time

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With anthracite, you need to get your airs just right

I muse to myself, digging the shovel in the bright

Copper scuttle of flaky black diamonds, and a flick of the hand

Hefts them right to the back of the grate; satisfied,

Happy that orange flames will lick, I spin the regulator,

Close the front, and leave the stove.

 

And go around the house, shutting the doors,

Turn keys in locks, put up the chains: October now,

Who would have thought it, its silent, stealthy approach

Marked by the darkness under garden trees.

 

Shutting-in time: the fire mended, the cat and dog both fed,

Time for sitting up late, candles for company, scribbling,

I listen to the stillness of the autumn; glad of the warmth,

Then think of those left outside in the cold,

Those I shut out.

 

Winter, as yet unbitten and unbidden, will come to gnaw

With cold, remorseless fangs, their exposed hands and faces;

The Christmas lights, in garish mock-stone precincts

Where drunks piss, and fight with the police,

Shining a dismal message of commercial hope

Bring no salvation to the huddled forms

In doorways, who will never afford

To buy more stuff.

 

Buy more shit, and somehow the magic will happen!

We’ll all sleep snug and warm, padded in wads of shares

While the tooth fairy sprinkles banknotes on the brazier: yes,

And if my aunt had balls, she’d be my uncle.

 

Meanwhile, out there, bedded down behind skips and units

Under bridges and flyovers, on broken glass,

Or on the seedy banks of dank canals

A vast and shadowy army, a cancer on our conscience,

Grows daily, gradually, on the wastegrounds,

Of people we shut out.

 

Shut out by glib and specious leaders,

Smug in their gated residences, the forgotten,

Grey and shuffling, challenging our preconceptions

Only when found dead, or when you notice them

Selling “The Big Issue”.

 

And to my shame, instead of raging, I go around the house

All Robert Frost and folksy, stoke up my stove,

Keep everybody warm beneath my roof,

Shut up and bar my doors, October nights,

Coming in colder, yes, and try and get some sleep.

 

◄ John's Apples

A Poem for Bernard ►

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Steve Rudd

Wed 5th Oct 2011 10:43

Hello and thanks for your comments one and all. I am sorry my attendance on parade here has been a bit random on and off lately, I have been in hospital again (gall stones of all things, don't ask!) anyway yes, here I am.

I know what you mean, Harry, I wasn't entirely happy by the way it turned out, it just started from thinking about what my granny used to call "Shutting in time" when you go around fastening up all the doors and bank up the fire in the range so it'll still be in in the morning, and the people who were "out there". And the way we're all able to collectively ignore them, even me, who is actually concerned about such things... *Financial* comfort is dead wrong, though! If only!

Greg - we actually let the stove out during the heatwave, but it's back in again now, ticking away, since autumn seems to have returned to the Holme Valley with a vengeance today

Ann - thanks as usual for your comment. I am sorry not to have responsed to others in like kind, I am under quite a lot of time pressure at the moment, apart from anything else, and losing a week of my life to the NHS has not helped with the backlog!

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 3rd Oct 2011 22:46

The `bright copper scuttle of flakey black diamonds`and `orange flame` gets anthracite exactly. (I used to pinch it as a kid)Paradoxically, the social (or personal?)`Mea Culpa` seems to be undermined rather than re-inforced (as I think you intended) by the excellence of the cosy, secure and financial comfort.It`s all there though.

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Greg Freeman

Sun 2nd Oct 2011 23:26

I liked your previous one, Steve, and I like this one too. The first verse is a diamond. But I can't imagine lighting fires right now though ...!

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 2nd Oct 2011 18:14

A really good and honest poem. I very much enjoyed reading it.

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