<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 5th Mar 2018 09:33
Brilliant. You will always be my favourite twenty-first century satirical post-rock humorous verse poet Mr Spangles and I join you in worshipping your goddess! My 3D postcard is in the virtual reality post. Enjoy your Poem of the Week week. Col.
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<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 5th Mar 2018 09:11
you have us intrigued and wanting more of your tempting apples Raymondo. I agree with Kevin and Martin about the folk song feel. Have a scrumping good week sir. Col.
Comment is about THE APPLE MAN (blog)
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<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 5th Mar 2018 08:58
I like this lots Martin. There's the inevitable looking at the past through rose tinted spectacles element but then why not remember the good times and forget the bad? Yep, I'm still nineteen inside myself and hope I always will be. It just gets harder as each year passes to be as carefree as a nineteen year old - the weight of years is hard to shrug off. I guess finding mental freedom gets harder too as we grow older. I know plenty of people who continue to find some sense of it with the aid of alcohol. I prefer to find it on a long hike or road trip. Each to their own. A good poem makes me waffle. Thanks for posting. Colin.
Comment is about Standing on death (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 5th Mar 2018 06:50
Like it I think but it's bit too close to reality for my liking
Comment is about 1-800-273-TALK (blog)
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Thanks, Cynthia! I have definitely been influenced by hiphop. I've actually just had to embrace this fact about myself bc I don't particularly fit that mold, physically. However, it most certainly is woven into my heart and rears it's head at times. I always appreciate your input! Thanks again!
Comment is about He Who Has Ears (blog)
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Ruby
Mon 5th Mar 2018 02:24
Thanks John Marks..Means a lot!
Comment is about 'Dear Sad Friend' by Ruby is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)
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Martin, thank you for this comment. The two dimensional world is in the ascendancy. Spirituality, if acknowledged, is only a hobby to be pursued at leisure. I believe in things seen and unseen which is borne out of experience and from the third dimension. Thank you again. Keith
Comment is about More than the eye can see (blog)
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Martin, you are spot on and thank you for the comment. Keith
Comment is about Three Score Years & Ten (blog)
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Hi Brendon, thanks for sharing, i felt the emotion, wish you strength if it's where you're at now. That door should never be bared alone. All the best. Donovan
Comment is about All Wrong (blog)
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You have oodles of talent Ruby. Congratulations! I echo raypool's perceptive comment, that your work "has a winsome quality": some synonyms of winsome are: 'appealing, engaging, charming, winning,endearing, enchanting, captivating, fetching...' all of these epithets (and more) suit aspects of your work. Keep writing! John
Comment is about 'Dear Sad Friend' by Ruby is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)
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Thank you all for your encouragement!
Comment is about RECOVERY (blog)
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A pleasing companion to my own recollection of gazing out of my window overlooking the street at 4am to see the
snow falling steadily in virginal white on a traffic free scene.
Comment is about Courtyard In Snow (blog)
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Fantastically real poem. An everyday real story of somebody trying to fight to stay on the straight and narrow.
Love it
thanks for posting
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I agree with Martin it did read like a song. For me It was over too soon, I'd have liked it to have been longer. Possibly with the first verse repeated at the end. (just an idea, I don't want to get cheeky)
Cheers Kevin
Comment is about THE APPLE MAN (blog)
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Donovan,
thank you for writing more. Your poems have a spiritual content which is really worth developing.
Thank you
Keith
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Excellent Chris the line about the granny particularly had me chuckling
Comment is about The Bride Wore Blue (blog)
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There is some real richness here in this poem with dare I say it a sense of wanting to grasp hold of and understand life a bit more of life. Maybe I am being a little out there with such comments.
But either way a cracking poem Keith
Cheers
Comment is about Three Score Years & Ten (blog)
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'We chase our tails like playful dogs is such a great metaphor' such a great line
I think also your title is so right . There is so much in our world and our own little worlds that is out of our sphere of understanding. Much of which always continues to amaze me.
Nice one Keith
Comment is about More than the eye can see (blog)
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This definitely has the feel of a song about , particularly with the repeated lines. dare I say a folk song with its content.
But I also like the message regarding refugees and what is going on with them. Wonderfully put A beautiful poem Ray
Love it
Comment is about THE APPLE MAN (blog)
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A great romp com Chris. Well seedy. Being a muso, I have struggled with these events when nobody wants to dance except the kids, others just staring or poking the keyboard.
Nice work! Ray
Comment is about The Bride Wore Blue (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18118)
Sun 4th Mar 2018 13:15
Brilliant stuff and V1 is a cracker!
Comment is about The Bride Wore Blue (blog)
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Thank you so much for your responses. Such moments string like jewels around the heart because we all share them, no matter when or where we live.
Comment is about My Mummy Can Do Anything (blog)
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I love the sincerity and intensity of this piece Vanessa.
Well done.
Raj
Comment is about To begin again (blog)
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A splendid piece Cynthia, beautifully culled.
I must say you have distilled the very essence of childhood tales at their nocturnal best.
I vividly remember that great grandfather's clock keeping me awake, until I learnt to see it as a sweet substitute for a lullaby.
Here's something to ponder over -- A Buddhist friend once said to me "you will only notice the presence of a clock when it stops ticking".
Raj xx
Comment is about My Mummy Can Do Anything (blog)
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<Deleted User> (13762)
Sun 4th Mar 2018 09:25
great fun - reminded me of the Stereophonics song Too Many Sandwiches - another wedding that didn't quite go to plan. But then how many do?!
Comment is about The Bride Wore Blue (blog)
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Very pictorial. Chris. You couldn’t point out the granny for me, could you?
Comment is about The Bride Wore Blue (blog)
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I really enjoyed this one Chris. It painted such a picture.
Cheers Kevin
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Ruby
Sun 4th Mar 2018 03:11
Thanks Cynthia!
Comment is about 'Dear Sad Friend' by Ruby is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)
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<Deleted User> (18118)
Sat 3rd Mar 2018 19:09
I am so sad to read this.
Losing your work is a terrible loss.
Try to rewrite the ones you can remember and put them on here. I should like to read them.
Hannah
Comment is about Lost (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18118)
Sat 3rd Mar 2018 19:04
Delightful.
Absolutely loved it.
Hannah
Comment is about My Mummy Can Do Anything (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18118)
Sat 3rd Mar 2018 19:01
<Deleted User> (18118)
Sat 3rd Mar 2018 18:58
Son Dun Too today, MC.
Comment is about TALE FROM THE NORTH COUNTRY (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 3rd Mar 2018 17:52
Chris I was immediately attracted to your poem because hablo un poco espanol and then found the piece enjoyable.
Comment is about Role Reversal (blog)
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Lovely this Trevor.
I can't wait for summer, I've seen enough snow for a lifetime.
Cheers Kevin
Comment is about Love Of Summer (blog)
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Ha-ha, JC...very droll. But maybe "Son" you aren't too far
off about players' names in this context.
Comment is about TALE FROM THE NORTH COUNTRY (blog)
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A snapshot of a winter world with its page unwritten. As if it is ready to start everything over, like spring.
Comment is about Courtyard In Snow (blog)
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Lovely piece. Invokes (for me) a long gone Enid Blyton childhood, so reassuring. Really enjoyed it.
Comment is about My Mummy Can Do Anything (blog)
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It is definitely interesting. Very 'rap' in style, and well held together for a long piece.
Comment is about He Who Has Ears (blog)
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Delightful, softness and strength in so few lines. 'Lovelight' is a splendid concept. Why have you titled it as 'Lovesick'?
Comment is about Lovesick (blog)
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D. Lee, welcome to WOL. Perhaps your experience here will become your present. That is a lovely photo. Is it you?
Comment is about Andrea Lee (poet profile)
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Superb. Splendid start to the day.
Comment is about Courtyard In Snow (blog)
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This is very interesting. Some super metaphors. 'sky dominating parent' is superb.
Check 'silhouette' since it is right in the first line, a great word that stands out.
Comment is about Crying (blog)
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What an absolutely charming piece CBT. Night noises are something we are all disturbed by.
Quite recently (permeating my dreams) I could hear a baby crying, it turned out to be a couple of distant cats squaring up to each other in the night.
Love the idea of frogs sounding like stars! Oh that they could sing to us!
Comment is about My Mummy Can Do Anything (blog)
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 5th Mar 2018 10:37
This is so clever- deserved three readings before I was happy with my giving it proper attention.
Haven't seen you in ages. I hope all is well. Or am I wrong? I could have sworn I recognised the name from years ago. But your profile does not seem to bear this out.
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