Recently worked up the courage to share some of my writing, Would really like to speak to some writers to get their opinions on things I may be doing right or wrong open to any feedback ! :)
Sip sipping chloroform wine, Fortified in a tortured mind. Sat drinking abnormal thoughts arised, distorted by the slimes. Deforming like metamorphosis his limbs begun to change Tidal waves of liquor cycled into the rain. Violence absorbed his hate Eyelids would start to fade to blackness, Aching from chain reactions. Face conveyed the fact that he caged his rage with straps in vacant space he sat with mental pages of the map. Where did I loose the track ? Where am I heading ? Lost on the stair way to heaven. Skipping stones across the oceans 7. Alone in a essence, sitting on the ozone with a message in a bottle let it drift through the universe. Not finished not sure it ever will be.
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Give me peace. (19/06/2017)
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