I just read your comment on the profile of AM Cash. Excellent thinking. I am far behind on many interesting persons and their works. WOL is a huge, engaging site, and growing daily.
A whole year! since I made contact before. How's the novel coming along? Finished and published, perhaps?
Comment is about Juan Pablo Lynch (poet profile)
Original item by Juan Pablo Lynch
Mr. Horton, I look forward to reading more of your work as I can find the time. 'The Risk of Metaphor' is both severe and funny at the same time. Much enjoyed.
May I ask why you included 'not even a flame-white one'?
Comment is about Randy Horton (poet profile)
Original item by Randy Horton
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 16:43
"careless and hairless" ?!! love it! type of guy I would end up with depending on my alcoholic intake on the night.
more...please!
Rose ?
Comment is about Bored (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
Thanks, Brian and Hannah.
I recently saw a YouTube snippet of JRM on his feet in the
Commons defending Press freedom. His grasp of his
material and cool analytical approach were hugely
impressive. He is a real asset to any parliamentary debate
and carries that impression beyond the chamber into the
wider world. A formidable "Spock-like" mind at work.
Comment is about BITING BACK (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 16:36
once again bags of lovely memories which in this case makes for a heartwarming read Martin.
Was Dad sporting the famous knotted hanky headwear by any chance and more to the point have you carried on the tradition? if so please do send pix! ?
Rose ?
Comment is about Bucket spades and ice cream days (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
The use in writing of "fun"
Can also get other things done,
With something serious to say
That won't let minds stray,
And gets through in more ways than one!
Comment is about I'm Watching My Mind Ride a See-Saw (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 16:23
Your poems certainly are getting the attention they deserve to which I am more than happy to add to Martin. This is a well penned if somewhat tragically ending read.
If I was asked if we will ever be rid of the scourge I'm afraid the answer would be the inevitable one.
Best regards.
Rose ?
Comment is about It will be the death of you (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 16:12
you have come on poetical leaps and bounds since I was last on Martin. More power to your quill sir! As to the last line, you will not find me disagreeing.
Rose ?
Comment is about Mountains climbed (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 16:07
great stuff Mr E! I particularly LOVE the opening three lines. A very relatable piece that takes some of us back to happier times.
Cheers matey.
Rose ?
Comment is about old kid, new tricks (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
Thank you Keith for the apt enthusing feedback.Peoples of the two countries were thirsty of peace and development.
Comment is about Welcome white dove (blog)
Original item by Alem Hailu G/Kristos
Big Sal
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 15:21
Another great one.?
Comment is about Our Poem of the Week is ‘Purpose is defeated’ by Kporho Vwede Daniel (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Big Sal
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 15:05
I quite enjoy the format of this piece, as to me it makes an easier, well-flowing read capable of digesting it all line-by-line instead of by stanza. Well done on this.?
Comment is about Without A Full Stop (blog)
Original item by Kristina Utami
Big Sal
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 15:03
Big Sal
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 15:02
I love chickens, they're the absolute best. My favorite type of dinosaur. Lovely pictures Taylor!?
(5 months later in December, and I still think the same thing!)
Comment is about 15323344695612007105914.jpg (photo)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Big Sal
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 14:55
Thanks Colin.
Comment is about There's Always Time For Some Ogden Nash (article)
Original item by Mike Took
Totally agree with Keith's comments.
Beautiful poem.
Taylor
Comment is about Thoughts (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Serious, Comic...yes?...There's a time and place for you both. Serious, you're time was in my poem. Comic, your time's now in the FUN BUS...wheeee
ribbit... ?
Comment is about I'm Watching My Mind Ride a See-Saw (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 14:14
Thank you for this Big Sal. It's great to see members of the wider WoL community getting involved with writing articles and book reviews. I'm looking forward to more from whoever fancies stepping up and having a go. I think this is a really positive approach for WoL to take as it makes the experience of sharing our poetry worlds so much more intimate for want of a better word. Col.
Comment is about There's Always Time For Some Ogden Nash (article)
Original item by Mike Took
<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 12:43
Don't let Serious on the Fun Bus Don...he'll put a real dampener on things.
Comment is about I'm Watching My Mind Ride a See-Saw (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Kanchan Moni
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 09:42
Kporho,
Congratulations on being awarded Poem of the Week. Well deserved.
Keith
Comment is about Our Poem of the Week is ‘Purpose is defeated’ by Kporho Vwede Daniel (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Alem,
This is indeed a joyful poem, full of hope and the promise of reconciliation.
Thank you. It has brought light into my day.
Keith
Comment is about Welcome white dove (blog)
Original item by Alem Hailu G/Kristos
<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 09:18
I was talking with an Amy last night on one of those live internet chat things - no that sort, it was with my bank, and no not the sperm bank either! Probably a different Amy I'm sure. A real belter of a poem this one Martin and a fine piece of story telling. Can't decide though if the last line would read better if written 'She'd had enough'. Col.
Comment is about Bored (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 08:41
Congratulations Kporho. Hope you are able to read this.
Comment is about Our Poem of the Week is ‘Purpose is defeated’ by Kporho Vwede Daniel (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
FUN BUS is at garage for grease and oil change in prep for trip to 'DM vs BM Alliteration Contest'.
Gina says hi...
Tyson says woof...
Froggie says ribbit...
?
Comment is about I'm Watching My Mind Ride a See-Saw (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Big Sal
Sun 22nd Jul 2018 23:36
I liked the ebbing and flowing of the poem's stanzas, and you did a superb job on your rhymes/schemes. Made it come out sounding great, especially when read aloud.
Comment is about Extract from Shhhh!!!! We Don't Talk About That (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Big Sal
Sun 22nd Jul 2018 23:15
Another artistic expression of poetic talent, and what a great topic for doing so.?
Comment is about Wild Heart (blog)
Original item by CHIMAOGE NWAIGBO
The final stanza of this is outstanding.
I really felt the emotion and the depth in this final part. Well done.
Comment is about One Step Closer (blog)
Original item by HayzTee
Louise, I really enjoyed this poem. It was a little like being on a carousel as when I reached the end I felt impelled to start again. Excellent rhyming.
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about The Car Boot (blog)
Original item by Louise Clarke
Beautifully crafted and so true.
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about Thoughts (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Comment is about Wild Heart (blog)
Original item by CHIMAOGE NWAIGBO
Hello Chimaoge,
This poem including the sample with your biography are absolutely exquisite; a joy to read. You possess the power to express, which you do so with a wise sensitive use of the language. Please continue to write as I look forward to seeing more of your work,
Thank you,
Keith
Comment is about Wild Heart (blog)
Original item by CHIMAOGE NWAIGBO
Martin,
Thank you for this comment. I suppose this sudden poem, as it appeared out of nowhere, was the inner self in revolt at the world we see about us and yet remain quiet. Every day I seem to encounter, either personaly or through the media, people who seem to have sold their souls to a world of materialism and greed. I felt anger and needed to articulate my feelings.
Thank you again....it is a change of gear.
Keith
Comment is about Shout it from the Hills (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
An air of impending doom Martin - the usual interplay of
frustrations leading to the splits. A convincing offering - almost like a Madness track perhaps!.
Ray
Comment is about Bored (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
Feelgood poem Louise - a nice idea for recycling gear into money, honey ! No easy task to get these rhyming couplets.
Ray
Comment is about The Car Boot (blog)
Original item by Louise Clarke
<Deleted User> (18118)
Sun 22nd Jul 2018 21:51
JRM he is a fascinating man.
Almost from another era.
Now he has had a poem written about him !
Hannah
Comment is about BITING BACK (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
<Deleted User> (18118)
Sun 22nd Jul 2018 21:49
Excellent. She is perfect. It is scary to think this is still expected.
Good to read you.
Hannah
Comment is about A good girl (blog)
Original item by Ankita Srivastava
Thanks for adding your voice Des. It's gratifying to get so many on this occasion!
Ray
Comment is about ‘Bye bye blackbird’ by Ray Pool is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Sun 22nd Jul 2018 21:30
Great poem Ray, like it lots. Well deserved POTW.
All the best des
Comment is about ‘Bye bye blackbird’ by Ray Pool is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Hi Fred, Just read Truth and Lies. Wonderful.
Much admiration for your work in the community. Taylor
Comment is about Rick Varden (poet profile)
Original item by Rick Varden
Big Sal
Sun 22nd Jul 2018 20:23
Some people complain that sarcasm is 'beneath them' or only 'when you can't communicate in other words', but I personally think it's the best vehicle for delivering a concise point to someone - especially if they're pretending not to listen to the message being conveyed. I like the candor of your piece and how it showcases unrealistic standards in a realistic light for others to see.?
Comment is about A good girl (blog)
Original item by Ankita Srivastava
This piece is a sarcasm over the expectations and social standards imposed over girl just to get the reward of good girl. It is suffocating to know these standards still exist.
Live and let others live.
Happy Reading,
Ankita.
Comment is about A good girl (blog)
Original item by Ankita Srivastava
Martin,
Another highly imaginative and observant poem. It enables the reader to experience what you are saying. One of your best.
Thank you
Keith
Comment is about Bucket spades and ice cream days (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
elPintor
Sun 22nd Jul 2018 18:11
It really is a great piece of writing, Martin.
Comment is about Bored (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
<Deleted User> (19836)
Sun 22nd Jul 2018 17:30
A great take on a couple stuck in a rut. Bravo!
Comment is about Bored (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
<Deleted User> (19421)
Mon 23rd Jul 2018 17:45
Great Work Martin -
DJB
Comment is about Bored (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder