child like

the snow whispers, gently falling 

a child like dream revealed

Crisp white snow 

upon a starched white path 

To a wonderland I will go

To make a footprint 

To slide along

To build a snowman 

a carrot for his nose

◄ The red wood

march ►



Fri 1st Mar 2019 08:19

Thank you Erin for your encouraging comments, much appreciated. Thank you Rachel and Damon for the likes

All the best des

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Erin Cc

Thu 28th Feb 2019 19:08

Such beautiful imagery and brought a smile to my face! You had me reminiscing about being little and playing in the snow and how great that feeling is! Keep up the great work Desmond!


Sun 17th Feb 2019 19:52

Thank you Kate and Keith for your comments very much appreciated. Thank you. Thank you Jon, Anya,Lisa and Do for the likes.

All the best he best des

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keith jeffries

Sun 17th Feb 2019 10:17

A delightful reminder of my childhood. A very good poem
Thank you for this

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 09:22

You took me to a wonderland with this Desmond. Lovely poem.

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