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trixtex

Fri 31st Jan 2020 18:55

Thank you, Cynthia and M.C.! I sincerely appreciate the feedback!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 31st Jan 2020 18:53

Have you got your face mask ready Hugh?

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kimberly

Fri 31st Jan 2020 16:42

I enjoyed this one very much. ☔️

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 31st Jan 2020 16:33

There will always be meglomaniacs..the trick is to spot them early enough.

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keith jeffries

Fri 31st Jan 2020 15:26

An interesting and well constructed poem.

Keith

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keith jeffries

Fri 31st Jan 2020 15:21

Stuart,

Excellent rhyming indeed and the content is one which I believe is universally approved of. Yet when I watch the news on television I see refugees struggling in hostile situations. Recently we were all reminded of the holocaust so your poem strikes several cords. Well done and thank you

Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 31st Jan 2020 15:08

I recall with some affection the big selling poster of another attractive
young female in similar pose, but viewed from the rear. Cheeky!
I preferred to look at that than witness the vulgar behaviour of the
equally young J. McEnroe.

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Don Matthews

Fri 31st Jan 2020 12:37

What's this? I am surprised Brian
No comment? sexy thigh?
Don't tell me you are past it?
Which leaves the question, why?

Perhaps you got in trouble
For commenting before
When paying bit of tennis
Got sidetracked, lost the score?

It's nice to see a bit of leg
On the tennis court
But comments need be careful
Not of offending sort

Which I know you wouldn't do.......

?

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 31st Jan 2020 11:18

I play a bit of tennis. I tried playing table tennis but I was no good....kept falling off the table.

What's that you say? Irrelevant?

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lynn hahn

Fri 31st Jan 2020 04:55

LOL this is me! Getting old is so unusual. Love your humor.

Lynn

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mona s

Fri 31st Jan 2020 03:22

Simply beautiful and poignant..

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Philipos

Thu 30th Jan 2020 21:52

Hi Mike - Sefton Park - memories of my growing up in Merseyside - and your serendipity moment in finding the right coat. Good stuff. P.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 30th Jan 2020 20:22

Hi d.k. - I certainly seem to recall a breakfast cereal of the name "Cheerios" here in England, although it's not my own choice.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 30th Jan 2020 17:13

Brief and sharply observed - thanks.
As with the content
As with Mum and Dad
Life's about facing facts
And meeting good and bad!
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M.C. Newberry

Thu 30th Jan 2020 17:03

The interest lies between the target itself (coin or occasion?) and the
semantics of English grammar.
My own reference tends to go with continuation of content or
its divergence via use or absence of a comma. For example
1. Comma added>divergence of subject matter
He was gregarious, garrulous, and fond of backing horses.
2. Comma absent>continuation of subject matter
He was gregarious, garrulous and fond of gossip.
??
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Emer Ni Chorra

Thu 30th Jan 2020 15:52

Thank you, Don. ?

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kimberly

Thu 30th Jan 2020 14:00

Graham,
You have taken it to the depths of darkness and back up to the light. Well done. Very uplifting piece.

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Becky Who

Thu 30th Jan 2020 12:36

Love it.

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d.knape

Thu 30th Jan 2020 12:20

thank you for reading "Wild Oats".
Do you have Cheerios
in England?

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d.knape

Thu 30th Jan 2020 12:01

do flies fly by instruments?

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penguin

Thu 30th Jan 2020 11:18

Thanks, Greg. Blackest of comedy? I think Villa toiling against Man City at Wembley might beat it.

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penguin

Thu 30th Jan 2020 11:13

Enjoyed the poem. Maybe you could incorporate the relevant phrase, peace and prosperity or whatever tosh it is, for the unenlightened.

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Graham Parker

Thu 30th Jan 2020 09:16

Thanks for the likes, they are most appreciated

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Don Matthews

Thu 30th Jan 2020 04:47

The story of many.......

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Don Matthews

Thu 30th Jan 2020 04:35

I am a proud, yes proud I am
To live in Oxford Town
How dare the Royal British Mint
Let my compatriots down

They said tuff shit (gave us the flick)
We got no need for you
Despite us being specialists
In commas, use, how to


What's that?.....You've put Boris on the back again?.....

Serves you right.......

?


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Don Matthews

Thu 30th Jan 2020 04:10

My dad said

"you must believe the Bible son"........

To which my mum would blindly nod......

But it doesn't make sense?......

He was a preacher.......

And I was at university......

Question everything they taught me......

No wonder I get into so much strife......

I should just conform......

Then everyone would be happy.....

(except me).......



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kimberly

Thu 30th Jan 2020 03:37

I like the way the messages balance each other. Colorful yet unforgiving.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 29th Jan 2020 23:19

Cheers, Ray. And well done to the Villa in reaching the League Cup final. You never know ...

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Don Matthews

Wed 29th Jan 2020 23:18

Thankyou for your comments Brian and MC

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Greg Freeman

Wed 29th Jan 2020 23:17

Beautifully crafted, the blackest of comedy.

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Don Matthews

Wed 29th Jan 2020 23:05

I like this....

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 29th Jan 2020 22:10

There was never a demand for emojis. But some bright spark somewhere had a bathtub moment and invented them. And when they are out there and available they create their own demand. If I see text peppered with emojis I can't be bothered to pick my way through it.

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John Marks

Wed 29th Jan 2020 21:56

Thank you Greg and thank you Cynthia. Your appreciation means a lot to me. John

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Philipos

Wed 29th Jan 2020 18:23

Hi Cynthia - Wraiths - just my nowadays style of presenting I guess - reads better than it looks on screen. Thanks for noticing. Blessings. P. ?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 29th Jan 2020 16:29

IMO, absolutely brilliant!

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penguin

Wed 29th Jan 2020 16:22

Nice poem, Greg. Prompted me to google Von Choltitz, which was interesting.

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Rich

Wed 29th Jan 2020 16:14

Shame to've lost this. Rugby's great in any form. I guess this poem relates to many of us who've had a passion for sport. These days you'll find me gardening, rather than putting my body on the line each week!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 29th Jan 2020 16:13

IMO, brlliant, in topic and presentation.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 29th Jan 2020 16:10

Not keen on slops but that skunk cabbage sounds absolutely yummy!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 29th Jan 2020 16:07

Well put! And well constructed.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 29th Jan 2020 16:04

Really good - passionate and honest - and positive.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 29th Jan 2020 16:00

It sure is great to have superb literary references so expertly inserted into a fine piece. Much enjoyed.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 29th Jan 2020 15:38

He had a colourful way of making a point, my Dad did. Mum went straight for the jugular.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 29th Jan 2020 15:27

English is the finest language in the world! If only we had copyrighted it instead of allowing the rest of the world to use it free of charge. We could have been earning billions in royalties.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 29th Jan 2020 15:24

Boys are influenced by good example
But it's hard sometimes to find a sample! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 29th Jan 2020 15:09

The English language is certainly not easy to grasp as it seems
to possess no logical consistency.
As lyricist Ira Gershwin famously wrote about pronuncing either and eyether; neither and nyether (my emphasis via spelling) - it is often
confusing, even to the natives!
Give me your dough
But not your doe
But don't think enough
Should rhyme although
Could that last word be althuff?
(Is that plain enuff for you to see
when not referring to a yew-named tree?!) ?
In short -
The English language offers a profusion
Of ways to fall prey (so pray!) to confusion!
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d.knape

Wed 29th Jan 2020 13:09

Boys lack the sense
of introspection-
forgive them hence
their indiscretions.

?

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Greg Freeman

Wed 29th Jan 2020 12:44

Thanks for your comments, Brian and Phil!

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d.knape

Wed 29th Jan 2020 10:53

Thank you for reading
"nut & bolt"...
she is the bolt
I am
the nut!

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prince hall

Wed 29th Jan 2020 07:20

Yea Matt itz hard for a meta thes daes
Going crazy with directshin an waz..
My Heart beat feel for ur spiritual..
Awaken and sleep we just trying to ride waves and sleep.. I feel lik coding is deep?

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