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Dean Fraser

Thu 9th Apr 2020 07:43

Thanks ?

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John Marks

Thu 9th Apr 2020 00:08

A much under-rated poet and songwriter. All the plaudits will come, now he's dead.

Thanks, as ever, Cathy.

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Don Matthews

Thu 9th Apr 2020 00:04

this one needed to be released.

the call of a poet Mika....

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 8th Apr 2020 23:58

Another legend gone. May he Rest In Peace. What a great way to honor his passing John. ❤️

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raypool

Wed 8th Apr 2020 22:47

Erudite as always and there are some interesting strands to engage us John. Incredible that after the passage of so much time the minds of learned and intelligent people can still pass muster. And so we make a mark, however transient it may be.

An enjoyable read.

Ray

Comment is about Philosophy or Poetry (blog)

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Cameron Williams

Wed 8th Apr 2020 21:24

What a reflection of curiosity of what all of this is! Thank you!

Comment is about Seeking, Asking Answers (blog)

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Cameron Williams

Wed 8th Apr 2020 21:19

Love this, it is written with love! Also my Birthday!!

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Cameron Williams

Wed 8th Apr 2020 21:10

I love this,
It is a time of true thankfulness to be surrounded with nature’s beauty.

Comment is about Thank god for a welcome companion (blog)

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Greg Freeman

Wed 8th Apr 2020 20:57

I enjoyed this poem too, Abdul. Wonderfully detailed observations of nature. And a nice twist at the end with the robin.

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Philipos

Wed 8th Apr 2020 17:53

Greg, Creaking Gate, yes don't we all hope it isn't that ongoing. But then these events have been around for rather a long time - didn't I read somewhere about the 'seven plagues of …. in one of the ancient texts? Heaven forbid. P

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Chris Bunton

Wed 8th Apr 2020 17:36

Love it!

Comment is about The Ancient Tree (blog)

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Jeannot

Wed 8th Apr 2020 14:45

John,

Very interesting. I have thought about this question in the past and I tend to agree with the straightforward view of the American poet William Carlos Williams who said: “Philosophy is about ideas; poetry is about words”.

I say let’s keep playing with words, humbly.

Thanks,
Jeannot

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Abdul Ahmad

Wed 8th Apr 2020 14:21

Ian

A delightful vignette. Made more dramatic by the absence of music. It would have distracted the attention from the essentially visual spectacle.

Abdul

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 8th Apr 2020 13:12

I missed this earlier D.K

I agree with your sentiment about the need to explain ones work. However, I don't think it should always been understandable, or at least not immediately so.

Some poets write for themselves and not an audience but if an audience 'gets it' so much the better.

I do consider that much poetry is in the 'throwaway' mould which I think is a shame. Part of the art of writing (for me) is the consideration of a piece, before pen goes to paper.

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keith jeffries

Wed 8th Apr 2020 12:56

Thank you all for your comments as they are always appreciated.
Keith

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Don Matthews

Wed 8th Apr 2020 11:45

Thanks to all who liked this and to the person who thinks I'm a 'good egg'

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Don Matthews

Wed 8th Apr 2020 11:44

Ode to little Easter egg

I am a little Easter egg
Chocolate through and through
Oh no, someone's just rushed me off the shelf
My friends are gone - boo hoo ?

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d.knape

Wed 8th Apr 2020 04:04

it's just that so much of it is garbage.
it's like people just throw words together
whether they make any sense or not
and then call it poetry.

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kimberly

Wed 8th Apr 2020 02:24

Thanks Tom and Cynthia, and all those who liked this poem. This one was brewing of frustration after seeing someone do nothing but expose their emotions over and over again without changing the situation, and sometimes you have to say “Enough!” I try my best not to give in to those instincts to respond but this one needed to be released.

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keith jeffries

Wed 8th Apr 2020 01:30

If there is a re print I have an offering, should you be interested.
Keith Jeffries

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Emer Ni Chorra

Wed 8th Apr 2020 01:25

Wonderful poem. I look forward to reading more. Keep writing. ??

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 7th Apr 2020 23:22

Thanks Hannah, and thanks Cynthia. Yes the anymore thing was deliberate, I nearly wrote, "I'm sorry I couldn't love you anymore," and toyed with a few possibilities. But in the end I hoped that people realised I meant, "Any more," and, "Anymore," given the possibility that if it was me leaving never to return I would mean both. I couldn't find a way to give the duel meaning in text, but trusted it might come across in spoken word. And thank you, because yes, I really did mean it when I said I like it when people ask.

J. x

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keith jeffries

Tue 7th Apr 2020 22:47

John,

This is a good poem of exploration and comparisons. I have always regarded poets as people who are in varying ways philosophical. Poets often explore the truth and challenge the mind. I shall read this poem again a few times. Plato wrote at a time of antiquity alongside some of the greatest poets. Homer being perhaps the greatest.

Well done John. As usual you rake the grey matter
Thank you for this
Keith

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John Marks

Tue 7th Apr 2020 20:45


Sea, tá Emer a cuid ceoil chomh hálainn agus chomh brónach.?

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Abdul Ahmad

Tue 7th Apr 2020 20:23

Hannah
Appreciate your generous comments on this poem. The robin is solitary territorial bird by nature. It is well known for forging bonds with gardeners. It benefits from this relationship by finding easy prey in freshly disturbed soil.
Abdul

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Emer Ni Chorra

Tue 7th Apr 2020 20:03

Both song and tribute poem are beautiful. ❤️

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 7th Apr 2020 19:49

Very strong, and beautiful.

'anymore' puzzles me. Whether it means 'any longer' or 'any more ardently'.

As written, it means 'no longer' which may be exactly what you want.

As 'any more' it would mean 'any more greatly'.

You kindly said I could always 'communicate' with a question. So I am.

Comment is about Goodbye At The Door (blog)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 7th Apr 2020 19:40

Splendid, Mika. And very sad.

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John Marks

Tue 7th Apr 2020 19:31


"Listen to them, the children of the night. What music they make!"

Bram Stoker?

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Tom

Tue 7th Apr 2020 19:03

This is great Mika... the attention seeking shrieks of the self-eviscerating get quickly tiresome. The last 3 lines left a vivid closing image in my mind too. Great writing.

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 7th Apr 2020 18:47

''no friends or relations
on viral visitations.''

Love this one, it made me smile.

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 7th Apr 2020 18:43

The rush for toilet rolls, a bit crazy.
Chocolate I can understand.

Hannah

Comment is about Puzzled Supermarket Shelf (blog)

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 7th Apr 2020 18:39

Great poem. Love the robin.

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 7th Apr 2020 18:36

Very moving.

Hannah

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Tom

Tue 7th Apr 2020 16:56

Hi Sofia, thanks so much for the kind comment on New Memories! It seems that I've somehow missed your posts up to this point - but I'll be sure to check out your work when I get chance. Thanks again, Tom.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 7th Apr 2020 15:20

Much enjoyed! However...
There's a poetical omission
Intentional I assume...
But it earns this coy cognition
As "the elephant in the room"!

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 7th Apr 2020 15:02

I always had the feeling you were a "good egg", Don. ?
Hey - it might be a marketable stroke of genius to wrap these Easter
products in decorative toilet tissue instead of the stuff normally used.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 7th Apr 2020 14:57

This reminds me of a book title recently discovered: "How To Understand Poetry And Why". Notwithstanding the assumption of
a certain level of competence in the use of language, I found the
title helped explain "how" and "why" there is an abundance of
over-our-heads stuff around these days - as if the writer had
acquired a thesaurus and encyclopaedias of metaphysical and fable
content with the intent to confuse and confound - exemplifying
the word "condescension".

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 7th Apr 2020 13:57

Don, as you know I formally greet all who register to the site and am always massively surprised how many of those NEVER add anything to the resources here. Why join (other than to just read others' work) if not to share one's work. A very small percentage (as you can see by reading the monthly entries) of those registered actually contribute.

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Don Matthews

Tue 7th Apr 2020 13:25

Yes Tom, once they leave there is no way of communicating...

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 7th Apr 2020 13:17

Beautiful poem Sophie. Write on! ?

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Tom

Tue 7th Apr 2020 12:32

As Greg said; so many stories! I wish I'd known some were planning to go as I'd have liked to say goodbye. Nice write.

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 7th Apr 2020 09:41

Thanks Sofia, my pleasure.❤

J. x

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 7th Apr 2020 09:39

Yes absolutely Sofia, I think our healthcare system here in the UK is just about handling capacity at the moment, but they look shattered bless them, and they say we haven't even peaked yet, we've lost about 5000 so far and now the Prime Minister is in intensive care. Definitely stay at home.❤

J. x

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Sofia Urquiza

Tue 7th Apr 2020 09:20

Hi there AM Cash!
Thanks for stopping by, commenting, and giving a like to "A Poem to my BFF". I'd like to change the title, hopefully I'll get any ideas/feedback to a new title ?

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Sofia Urquiza

Tue 7th Apr 2020 09:15

Hello there Vautaw!
I'm glad that you liked my poem and that I reminded you of taking vitamin D lol due to "lack of sunshine". Here in Cali we've had some sun with few clouds and rain, so yea lack of sunshine too!

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Mae Foreman

Tue 7th Apr 2020 08:57

I haven't? Oh well! Thank you Don!



Mae

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Sofia Urquiza

Tue 7th Apr 2020 08:38

Your writing in New Memories is so vivid, so lovely. I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end! I hope to read more of them also, will definitely have to catch up on more of your poems?

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Sofia Urquiza

Tue 7th Apr 2020 08:26

Bless you for such wonderful
Poem!?

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Sofia Urquiza

Tue 7th Apr 2020 08:23

Wow! Stunning!

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