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Wed 22nd Jul 2020 00:29

Lost in words,
Need words to find.

Indeed!

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Wed 22nd Jul 2020 00:29

Silence rejuvenates the tired soul
Embark on a journey new
The dawn shall bring happiness to you

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Wed 22nd Jul 2020 00:27

Beautifully expressed.

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 22nd Jul 2020 00:19

Well thank you both so much. I do like to try and spread a little happiness when I can, and thank you Cynthia, I wondered if anyone would notice the double meaning in the title.?❤

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Nigel Astell

Tue 21st Jul 2020 23:28

At midnight
another hand
holds yours
guiding you
into the
forest daybreak.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 21st Jul 2020 23:11

Thanks for your like on
They Say

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 21st Jul 2020 23:08

and we are now exploring one of those other strands - rather than the strand written by the rich and powerful who perpetrated the crime. No bandwagon here - the wheels are actually coming off this historic bandwagon

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David Blake

Tue 21st Jul 2020 22:55

This is great. Also seems a bit untamed and rough around the edges which suits the subject of cats well...

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 21st Jul 2020 22:30

Who is actually denying what occurred? What is being brought to
attention is that history has more than one strand to explore.
The arrival of the opportunistic European traders on the West African
Coast resulted in a trade that already existed being utilised for
the need as seen then (autre temps, autre moires) when human
life across the board was far less valued or argued over than it is now, not least from a land that was viewed as heathen by the
visitors. . .

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Tue 21st Jul 2020 22:26

We do seem to be creating a bandwagon don't we, with those on board wanting to point fingers, apportion blame, determine guilt etc. Why don't we let sleeping dogs lie and just concentrate on doing the right thing going forward?

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 21st Jul 2020 22:15

there has to be demand to create supply. Colonial Britain wanted cheap labour - they wanted slaves - they created the need and abused those they bought. Irrespective of HOW slaves arrived on these shores and in America - it's what happened to them when they got here that BLM is highlighting - and what is still happening in an unacceptable amount of cases. Don't try to wash our colonial hands of these crimes - you are prolonging the wrongdoing with your denial ?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 21st Jul 2020 22:05

GS is bang on the money, endorsed by the report (BBC Africa) a
couple of days ago from the descendant of a notable Igbo leader in the Nigeria of her ancestors when owning slaves was a sign of
wealth/prestige. Her predecessor was a leading figure in slave trading when the
Europeans in the shape of the Portuguese, Dutch and British arrived, to provide the opportunity of extra prestige and
payment to those already involved in this profitable and widespread capture and
marketing of its less fortunate inhabitants in tribal Africa. I doubt though that you'll see any BLM marches around the streets in that part of the world!

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Nicola Beckett

Tue 21st Jul 2020 21:56

I'm sorry x

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Shifa Maqba

Tue 21st Jul 2020 20:42

cinnamon is hands down the best spice, ain't it? ;)
On a serious note, really enjoyed reading this!

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Shifa Maqba

Tue 21st Jul 2020 20:40

Winsome piece of poetry about an ugly truth. Well done!

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Shehariah

Tue 21st Jul 2020 20:03

This is the first collaborative piece that my wife and I did. She read this poem and had the vision for the painting.

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Shehariah

Tue 21st Jul 2020 20:01

My wife wanted to do this painting and I wrote the poem alongside that painting. It’s our second collaborative work.

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Shehariah

Tue 21st Jul 2020 20:00

Cynthia, thank you. And I would call it a sense of release more than anything. I lived as a dead man inside for a very long time. I was a ghost among the living.

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Shehariah

Tue 21st Jul 2020 19:58

Thank you, Cynthia.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 21st Jul 2020 16:52

Bloomin' brilliant. Oh, I laughed. Check your title... just a typo ... but it's glaring.... unless you did it on purpose.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 21st Jul 2020 16:49

Hard reading but blazingly brilliant.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 21st Jul 2020 16:36

I do like the word play. Good title.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 21st Jul 2020 16:30

Welcome to WOL.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 21st Jul 2020 16:28

A splendid sense of drama and word power, strongly gripping. I also presume deeply satisfying to yourself. Great picture.

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Shehariah

Tue 21st Jul 2020 16:15

RoseMary, thank you. A lot of what I write comes from the place of addiction that I lived in for so long. I suppressed my emotions and myself for a very long time and now am finally giving words to those times and those emotions. Thank you again for the comment, encouragement, and for the like.

Bluesky, thank you for the like. ?

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 21st Jul 2020 16:07

There ain't no justice, even poetic. Good one.

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RoseMary

Tue 21st Jul 2020 15:15

A pathetic situation. May God send the best help possible and the strongest angel to achieve the impossibly possible task. I wish an easy and timely rescue

Miracles do happen. It's just a prayer away.

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Tue 21st Jul 2020 14:27

Wow! You are most welcome RoseMary.

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Shifa Maqba

Tue 21st Jul 2020 13:37

Inspiring! A much needed message to fight the lockdown blues.

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RoseMary

Tue 21st Jul 2020 12:38

Dean, your poem has cleared many tangled thoughts and shown me the right way. I was sure but I just needed a reaffirmation. Thank you.

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Tue 21st Jul 2020 12:34

Thank you
The one certainty in life
is change
we can shout and scream about how unfair life is
or do our best to make change on our terms

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 21st Jul 2020 11:42

was it something I said ? ? ?
thanks for the 'ilke' Anmolpreet ?

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Tom

Tue 21st Jul 2020 10:38

Great writing Adalyn. Very effective. ?

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julie callaghan

Tue 21st Jul 2020 10:33

Thanks for the likes. Needs must, our house in Turkey has been empty since last October and jobs need to be done.

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Jared Harris

Tue 21st Jul 2020 10:29

Love your sample poem...as a recovering addict I can relate...I definitely have my fair share of poems dealing with addiction, check them out whenever you have time....i will read some of your other ones soon as well...thanks

Jared

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Tue 21st Jul 2020 10:19

Brave Julie...I'm giving it a miss this year.

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Philipos

Tue 21st Jul 2020 07:55

Ah regrets M, I think we all get them. Our inner compasses sort them out - I think. P

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Philipos

Tue 21st Jul 2020 07:52

Certain things we cannot change - other things we can - one porpoise cannot extinguish a mighty fire - but if there is a big enough school of them, well ... who knows.

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John Coopey

Tue 21st Jul 2020 07:50

Thanks for the Likes, Po and Stephen.

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Philipos

Tue 21st Jul 2020 07:46

Thank you for sharing. P.

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Philipos

Tue 21st Jul 2020 07:43

Interesting compilation with some subtle implications. P.

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Philipos

Tue 21st Jul 2020 07:31

Haunting piece C. Thanks for sharing. P

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Philipos

Tue 21st Jul 2020 07:25

Amusing take on it. P.

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Shifa Maqba

Tue 21st Jul 2020 07:08

Thank you, Abdul, for your generous input!

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Nicola Beckett

Tue 21st Jul 2020 04:24

Broke back mountain x

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Shehariah

Tue 21st Jul 2020 04:16

Nicola, thank you for that. I have an amazing support system. I want that my pain can bring relief and comfort to others. My desire is that the hope I've found can spark some hope in others.

Po, my noose was loosened, but not by my hands. I am one of the fortunate ones.

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Shehariah

Tue 21st Jul 2020 04:00

Nicola, I did run and run and run. I couldn't run far or fast enough, and all my running brought me to the end of myself where I was found again.

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racha chafik

Tue 21st Jul 2020 03:44

i read your poem three times its so deep i love how it starts with the intention of giving a try to just feel dissapointed by what you already knew

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Shehariah

Tue 21st Jul 2020 02:53

Nicola, that is how I used to live, and I was really good at it. Now I’m learning to live vulnerably and honestly with myself and the ones around me.

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Jared Harris

Mon 20th Jul 2020 22:27

Also M.C. you described it perfectly, you nailed it....

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