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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 12th Jan 2021 19:22

Right, I've come to the conclusion that you have to be a poet before you're allowed to become a politician.. Let's start a petition ?

It could go without saying but I'm not going to let it go without saying, this is an amazing poem, and I feel lucky to have had a chance to read it.

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julie callaghan

Tue 12th Jan 2021 18:48

Thanks for the likes Stephen A, Stephen G, Hugh and Aviva.

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Philipos

Tue 12th Jan 2021 18:22


A profound piece of writing Holden - one to grip the attention.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 12th Jan 2021 17:44

Interesting read, John. We have to hope for some real leadership from the next generations, even if we won't be there to see it.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 12th Jan 2021 17:27

I love the last line (and the rest, of course).

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 12th Jan 2021 17:20

I enjoyed this, Tommy, although it's an uncomfortable subject. It says so much in such a short time. A real gem.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 12th Jan 2021 17:17

I think poets should rank fairly high in the pecking order, certainly above bankers, although some of them may write poetry. What a fascinating world it is, as this poem suggests.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 12th Jan 2021 17:00

Yes, this is great and sends a critical message. It needs to reach the widest possible audience. I'll do my best in my very small way.

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keith jeffries

Tue 12th Jan 2021 16:13

Stephen, a first rate poem with a message loud and clear. This should be put in the national press. It is clear and to the point with a poetic if not prophetic flavour.

Thank you for this

Keith

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April Holt

Tue 12th Jan 2021 16:08

I don't think I have ever seen you cry and frankly I don't really want to, but you have every right to cry sometimes and don't ever hold it in. You can't be super Grandma, super wife, super mum all the time. We love you, April x

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Hugh

Tue 12th Jan 2021 16:05

On one of my walks I see 3 horses in the same situation, I feel soo sorry for them. But they seem relaxed and accepting their situation, patiently watching the world go by.

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April Holt

Tue 12th Jan 2021 15:58

You are annoying, I can verify. But more so you are incredible and never fail to make me question everything, which though frustrating at the time, I cannot thank you for enough now - for the thinker you have sculpted me into. April x

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Hugh

Tue 12th Jan 2021 15:49

Your openness is a psychological tonic. Well done ,keep writing.

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April Holt

Tue 12th Jan 2021 15:44

This made me smile. Love April x

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April Holt

Tue 12th Jan 2021 15:39

What a way to think about it, wow. I believe you are completely right, our ability to think/ imagine to the extent that we can create a physiological reaction (adrenaline and others) yet face no real harm; how else can you describe that ability besides simply artful. Love April x

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April Holt

Tue 12th Jan 2021 15:28

???beautiful

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April Holt

Tue 12th Jan 2021 15:21

I have hung this one next to my mirror at university and I glance at it every morning, I will know it off by heart soon. Love April x

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keith jeffries

Tue 12th Jan 2021 12:47

Thank you Brian, Vautaw, Stephen A., JD., and Aviva for your likes and comments. They are much appreciated. I am sorry that I am responsible for plunging Brian into the depths of depression but outside our comfort zones there exists a stark reality which cannot be ignored. Perhaps, Brian you could write an Ode to Joy.

Keith

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 12th Jan 2021 12:42

Thank you Mariyam, Philipos, and Brian for your comments.
Thanks also to those who have clicked 'Like' for this poem.

Mariyam you are correct one of the things I wanted this poem to be is a little bit cute, and I wanted to imply that I think that I am 'a poet'. I was a little bit teasing when I suggest that it could be the true centre of the universe although I do think it is an indispensable and irremovable part of it.

Philipos mathematics has been used for the understanding, building and shaping of many things but my sister's perspective was at least a few times as stated (with very little poetic license) and that goes beyond what I would agree with.

Brian, yes, it is a human characteristic to do that and as far as I am aware all poets are human (but that's just because I don't know any other animal languages so I can't say for sure whether they contain poetry or not). Just because most people can't even get pennies for their poetry doesn't mean their poems aren't precious and of great value (in non-monetary ways).

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Tom Doolan

Tue 12th Jan 2021 11:21

Hi Mariyam - Thanks for feedback. Thanks for like Julie. T ?

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raypool

Tue 12th Jan 2021 11:18

Thanks Graham. I suppose I wrote this in exasperation which most of us feel most of the time. It is well recorded and that reinforces the message - are we in a spiral ? Speed bonnie vaccine ....

Yes Tony I know what you mean - it's all a bit like a soft version of big brother (not the reality show). I do get attracted to rhyming on certain topics, I think it can emphasis points of dark humour. In a sense it is demanding and shouldn't be forced. It can be addictive, but there's the rub.

Thanks for liking this Tom, Kevin, Stephen and Aviva.

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Tue 12th Jan 2021 10:04

Indeed. Let's hope soon!

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Tue 12th Jan 2021 09:36

You're right Aviva, poets do tend to overrate their importance in the world.

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julie callaghan

Tue 12th Jan 2021 09:36

My husband drove past the airport yesterday for work. Our topic of conversation last night was trying guess when we will be able to fly again.

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Philipos

Tue 12th Jan 2021 09:36


Good pointers here- especially when i think of current tv Comments about a wartime schoolgirl whose numbers were aerodynamically ideal for producing the famous Spitfire.

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julie callaghan

Tue 12th Jan 2021 09:29

Me too Stephen A ?
Thanks Greg and Dean for the likes.

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julie callaghan

Tue 12th Jan 2021 09:27

Thanks for the likes Aviva, branwell and Philipos.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 12th Jan 2021 09:04

Insanity seems to be the cost for creativity. We are all here proudly paying the price! Shine on J.D. ?

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Philipos

Tue 12th Jan 2021 08:53


Thanks for commenting on Age Barriers Aviva, appreciated. P

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 12th Jan 2021 08:32

I was touched by this poem too.
Though the wall cannot be broken, I hope in time it will fall away.

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Mariyam sheikh

Tue 12th Jan 2021 06:40

? hey i am a nature lover and too a athlete so I can feel the rhythm of ur thoughts while you were writing this poem

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Mariyam sheikh

Tue 12th Jan 2021 06:22

somehow it seems that you wanted us to take a glance towards the scheme of poverty faced by many of us.... ?

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Mariyam sheikh

Tue 12th Jan 2021 05:43

AAww!! so sweet poem. It's like someone who is itself a poet thinks that universe cares it's poets.??

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Mariyam sheikh

Tue 12th Jan 2021 04:57

I got touched with the phrases used..<3...

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 12th Jan 2021 01:09

Yes, and blue is the uniform I wore at school
And Blu is the tack that sticks on my wall

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 11th Jan 2021 22:27

I'm starting to look like a womble. The joys of lockdown! ??

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nick armbrister

Mon 11th Jan 2021 20:48

i listened to 6 hours of floyd on utube last week last it run tho here i make no mention of them. as a band they were far ahead of their time. i prefer goth mtal 80s normally except when chilling \m/

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 11th Jan 2021 20:12

So beautiful. Calming the chaos. Thank you for sharing. ❤

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New Shoes

Mon 11th Jan 2021 19:56

Thank you Cynthia

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d.knape

Mon 11th Jan 2021 19:17

Black hair
red beard?
what's with that?
Grecian formula?
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Tom Doolan

Mon 11th Jan 2021 18:57

Hi M C. - Nice to know you are/were a fellow runner. T?

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Anthony Andrea

Mon 11th Jan 2021 18:56

I think that Covid - 19 is a global marketing campaign - there is nothing happening in the world in terms of infectious disease that does not happen routinely and all the time. In that sense Covid - 19 is a hoax - but worse than that a Genocide. The global implementation of a sanitary dictatorship is made possible by the people - who would rather be a slave in a gas chamber than take responsibility for their own life.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 11th Jan 2021 18:53

Thanks for your likes
Stephen A
Mariyam
Dean
D.W. Hamilton and
Your Royal Poetess.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 11th Jan 2021 18:51

Thanks for that Mariyam

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Anthony Andrea

Mon 11th Jan 2021 18:42

On the one hand - you admonish the sheeple for going quietly into the final night designed for them by the genocidal elite (covid hoax) - on the other you claim that the 'plague' rages on. I am confused.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 11th Jan 2021 18:40

You might have been in a silly mood or feeling crazy but I don't think it is a silly or crazy poem. I think it is very clever and you've converted the lyric into essential wisdom for these times.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 11th Jan 2021 18:28

Thank you New Shoes for your comment. Life takes us to difficult places but sometimes we can find or find out wonderful things.

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem.

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Rob Cohen

Mon 11th Jan 2021 17:08

pretentiousness and losing friends are my specialty. why i felt qualified to write about it

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julie callaghan

Mon 11th Jan 2021 17:08

Thanks for the comment Stephen.... I think? Just imagine being able to womble free on the common.
Thanks Aviva for the like for my silly write.

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Rob Cohen

Mon 11th Jan 2021 17:05

one of the wonders of words. i prefer to taste off of a plate unlike the patrons of quasi-fine dining establishments, who eat off of bits of the roof. thanks cynthia x

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