The constant bad weather made conditions hard going and I was just waiting for small ducks to appear on the pitch.
Only one goal settled this game and the County lads played as well as they could against strong opposition.

Comment is about They Held Their Heads up High (blog)

Original item by Nigel Astell

Emeka indeed, poverty and abuse sometimes go hand in hand.
Thanks
Tommy

Comment is about Planning her Escape (3rd person silent) (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Thanks Stephen.
I have a separate piece done with the woman alone in the bedroom.
I'm still pondering.
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Comment is about Planning her Escape (3rd person silent) (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Indeed Mariyam, Poverty and Domestic Abuse, which can follow financial difficulties.
Thank you.

Comment is about Planning her Escape (3rd person silent) (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

This is a poem which follows a break and the need to put behind the past. The words " there's nothing better than letting go" is very apt. This often takes courage and the poem is so descriptive of this dilemma that it has the reader in the vehicle experiencing these emotions. A good poem.
Thank you for this
Keith

Comment is about Consider Me Gone (blog)

Original item by Jordyn Elizabeth

Thank you Stephen for your comment. Always appreciated.

I think the human 'universe' is broad and complex enough for many things to be at its centre. Banking isn't even essential although it is a very useful service both historically and currently. I for one am glad that we are no longer in a society that has to hide/carry and protect its wealth individually at all times. We still can by choice, but we do have an alternative. I understand why bankers would think that the world is ruled and defined by money. That said, I agree that poets rank higher. Words sway intentions which sway actions and only then is money involved.

Comment is about Centre Of The Universe (blog)

Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari

It feels so good and redeemable after reading anybody's life story in a touche- phrases ??

Comment is about Memories of Austerity (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Exactly!!!! summoned with thorn even then rose blooms itself every day-....... #selfmotivation , it (poem) actually takes to my most recently mistake i did and the poem let my breath exhale with the satisfaction for what i planned for my desirable future.?

Comment is about Consider Me Gone (blog)

Original item by Jordyn Elizabeth

"Their heart geared always to assist

Even at their expense they will not desist

For “No” is a word their mouth knows not

Sleep a luxury even when their body cries out"-

hey, it so much relatable to our parents. For sure the poem is all about change but also stake us to feel the realm of one's life.......??

Comment is about Awareness (blog)

Original item by Mocosy

Thankyou for your comment, Stephen.

Comment is about SHIT HAPPENS (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Thanks JD and Emeka for the likes,
Emeka I think your saying is much more fitting. Thanks for sharing.

Comment is about Just Get Through Any Way! (blog)

Original item by julie callaghan

Actually
horses can stand a lot of cold
their coats get thick
in winter.

Comment is about hugh (poet profile)

Original item by hugh

Someone has burgled John's flat and used his PC to post something very un-Johnlike on WOL.

Well done John.

Comment is about WOODY (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

Thank you very much Keith & Stephen. I hope this pandemic is the start of a realisation to how bad our interference with nature, etc can become. We still have too much to learn!
And Thank you also Emeka and Aviva, yes I'd sign that petition! Although many a poet can be just as vague as a politician! ?. But thank you for your very flattering comment!
And for the Likes Julie, & Holden!

Comment is about We! (blog)

Original item by Stephen W Atkinson

I didn't see it as about poverty at all, but to me it read more like a domestic abuse situation where the working male is a window cleaner but has spent the money, maybe gambling or drinking, and hasn't given any finances to the stay at home woman who being met with violence if she asks for anything doesn't want to stay at home anymore, at least not this home. For me the fine detail is in the line 'He sat quietly' and how she plans silently too. Whether poverty had a background role to play isn't really apparent from the poem.

Comment is about Planning her Escape (3rd person silent) (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

No chain can hold back a genuine insanity by a genius of your type.

Comment is about Insane (blog)

Original item by J.D. Bardo

It is isn't just about poverty but what it has turned us into.

Comment is about Planning her Escape (3rd person silent) (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

In Nigeria we say, "Any which wey na wey"
Just survive and stay strong.

Comment is about Just Get Through Any Way! (blog)

Original item by julie callaghan

We are all architect of our fate. It is time we stop changing nature ...

Comment is about We! (blog)

Original item by Stephen W Atkinson

Thanks Stephen! Always appreciate your visits.

Cheers
Mike

Comment is about Exes (blog)

Original item by Mike McPeek

Right, I've come to the conclusion that you have to be a poet before you're allowed to become a politician.. Let's start a petition ?

It could go without saying but I'm not going to let it go without saying, this is an amazing poem, and I feel lucky to have had a chance to read it.

Comment is about We! (blog)

Original item by Stephen W Atkinson

Thanks for the likes Stephen A, Stephen G, Hugh and Aviva.

Comment is about Just Get Through Any Way! (blog)

Original item by julie callaghan

A profound piece of writing Holden - one to grip the attention.

Comment is about Of Ravens & Roses (blog)

Original item by Holden Moncrieff

Interesting read, John. We have to hope for some real leadership from the next generations, even if we won't be there to see it.

Comment is about SHIT HAPPENS (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

I love the last line (and the rest, of course).

Comment is about Exes (blog)

Original item by Mike McPeek

I enjoyed this, Tommy, although it's an uncomfortable subject. It says so much in such a short time. A real gem.

Comment is about Planning her Escape (3rd person silent) (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

I think poets should rank fairly high in the pecking order, certainly above bankers, although some of them may write poetry. What a fascinating world it is, as this poem suggests.

Comment is about Centre Of The Universe (blog)

Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Yes, this is great and sends a critical message. It needs to reach the widest possible audience. I'll do my best in my very small way.

Comment is about We! (blog)

Original item by Stephen W Atkinson

Stephen, a first rate poem with a message loud and clear. This should be put in the national press. It is clear and to the point with a poetic if not prophetic flavour.

Thank you for this

Keith

Comment is about We! (blog)

Original item by Stephen W Atkinson

I don't think I have ever seen you cry and frankly I don't really want to, but you have every right to cry sometimes and don't ever hold it in. You can't be super Grandma, super wife, super mum all the time. We love you, April x

Comment is about SECOND CHANCE (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

On one of my walks I see 3 horses in the same situation, I feel soo sorry for them. But they seem relaxed and accepting their situation, patiently watching the world go by.

Comment is about Tails To The Wind (blog)

Original item by d.knape

You are annoying, I can verify. But more so you are incredible and never fail to make me question everything, which though frustrating at the time, I cannot thank you for enough now - for the thinker you have sculpted me into. April x

Comment is about Heady Idea (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Your openness is a psychological tonic. Well done ,keep writing.

Comment is about Insane (blog)

Original item by J.D. Bardo

This made me smile. Love April x

Comment is about HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DADDY (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

What a way to think about it, wow. I believe you are completely right, our ability to think/ imagine to the extent that we can create a physiological reaction (adrenaline and others) yet face no real harm; how else can you describe that ability besides simply artful. Love April x

Comment is about Feelings (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

???beautiful

Comment is about People and Pansies (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

I have hung this one next to my mirror at university and I glance at it every morning, I will know it off by heart soon. Love April x

Comment is about New Year's Morning, 2021 (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thank you Brian, Vautaw, Stephen A., JD., and Aviva for your likes and comments. They are much appreciated. I am sorry that I am responsible for plunging Brian into the depths of depression but outside our comfort zones there exists a stark reality which cannot be ignored. Perhaps, Brian you could write an Ode to Joy.

Keith

Comment is about The Predicament (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Thank you Mariyam, Philipos, and Brian for your comments.
Thanks also to those who have clicked 'Like' for this poem.

Mariyam you are correct one of the things I wanted this poem to be is a little bit cute, and I wanted to imply that I think that I am 'a poet'. I was a little bit teasing when I suggest that it could be the true centre of the universe although I do think it is an indispensable and irremovable part of it.

Philipos mathematics has been used for the understanding, building and shaping of many things but my sister's perspective was at least a few times as stated (with very little poetic license) and that goes beyond what I would agree with.

Brian, yes, it is a human characteristic to do that and as far as I am aware all poets are human (but that's just because I don't know any other animal languages so I can't say for sure whether they contain poetry or not). Just because most people can't even get pennies for their poetry doesn't mean their poems aren't precious and of great value (in non-monetary ways).

Comment is about Centre Of The Universe (blog)

Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Hi Mariyam - Thanks for feedback. Thanks for like Julie. T ?

Comment is about Twilight Run (blog)

Original item by Tom Doolan

Thanks Graham. I suppose I wrote this in exasperation which most of us feel most of the time. It is well recorded and that reinforces the message - are we in a spiral ? Speed bonnie vaccine ....

Yes Tony I know what you mean - it's all a bit like a soft version of big brother (not the reality show). I do get attracted to rhyming on certain topics, I think it can emphasis points of dark humour. In a sense it is demanding and shouldn't be forced. It can be addictive, but there's the rub.

Thanks for liking this Tom, Kevin, Stephen and Aviva.

Comment is about COVID AVOIDANCE (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Indeed. Let's hope soon!

Comment is about John (blog)

Original item by Dean Fraser

You're right Aviva, poets do tend to overrate their importance in the world.

Comment is about Centre Of The Universe (blog)

Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari

My husband drove past the airport yesterday for work. Our topic of conversation last night was trying guess when we will be able to fly again.

Comment is about John (blog)

Original item by Dean Fraser

Good pointers here- especially when i think of current tv Comments about a wartime schoolgirl whose numbers were aerodynamically ideal for producing the famous Spitfire.

Comment is about Centre Of The Universe (blog)

Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Me too Stephen A ?
Thanks Greg and Dean for the likes.

Comment is about Remember You're A Human (blog)

Original item by julie callaghan

Thanks for the likes Aviva, branwell and Philipos.

Comment is about Must Try Harder (blog)

Original item by julie callaghan

Insanity seems to be the cost for creativity. We are all here proudly paying the price! Shine on J.D. ?

Comment is about Insane (blog)

Original item by J.D. Bardo

Thanks for commenting on Age Barriers Aviva, appreciated. P

Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)

Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari

I was touched by this poem too.
Though the wall cannot be broken, I hope in time it will fall away.

Comment is about Heart (blog)

Original item by Jacqueline L Elias