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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 21:53

A poem of sadness, Clare, but also of joy and hope. It really gripped me.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 21:48

Another fine poem, John. Yes; life is wonderful.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 21:45

An accomplished poem, Russell. On a lighter note, I remember Greg Chappell of Australia hitting a streaker with his bat, but it didn't break. Neither did the streaker, if I remember.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 21:39

An inspiring villanelle, John, and we know who the villain is.

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John Botterill

Thu 12th May 2022 20:35

A truly amazing poem, Jo. I love the clear-eyed honesty of your writing. A real tonic to read! πŸ˜€

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 20:32

Strong stuff, Pete, but the real thing. Thanks.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 20:30

A really impressive poem, Jo. A fascinating read.

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John Botterill

Thu 12th May 2022 20:27

Thanks Jo and Clare for the likes πŸ˜€

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 20:27

A grimly superb poem, Keith. So many memorable phrases: 'Uniformity of Malevolence' one of the best.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 20:22

A fine tribute to an impressive memorial of a terrible event. Excellent, Nigel.

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Jo Callisto

Thu 12th May 2022 19:45

Thanks Ursula!! 😊😊

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Jo Callisto

Thu 12th May 2022 19:45

Ha yes Stephen, I DID used to watch Quantum Leap. It was such a fun show. But I love cosmology documentaries these days. They're a GREAT antidote to real world stuff. I enjoy pondering on the really big questions like... there's one called Olbers Paradox.... and it's something like: IF the universe is INFINITE (and has been there forever)... then *why* is the night sky.... not FULL OF LIGHT?? It *would* be full of light.... if it had been there... forever, even tho stars do die.... because the light from **all the stars** would still be travelling and the sky would just be one massive light ball. But it's not. <--which, I find totally fascinating tbh. And I also LOVE the law of conservation of mass, where matter cannot be destroyed, it can only change down to its smaller iterations.

Hey, your wife does great work then by the sounds of it. I did similar things at break times. Sometimes I just used to stand in a toilet for the whole break time. It sounds SO sad--but I was kind of.. in my element, lol.. truly.. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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Reggie's Ghost

Thu 12th May 2022 17:52

Corbyn offered a radical alternative. Perhaps the Party should have stuck with him on principle and been content with permanently holding the government to account rather than watering down their policies to gain the public vote?

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 12th May 2022 14:29

thanks for the kind comments Stephen & RG - and thank you to those who have 'liked' the poem - I appreciate it
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 12th May 2022 14:28

thanks for the kind comments and likes - apologies in my delay in replying - my spam filter is blocking my WOL notifications

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Nigel Astell

Thu 12th May 2022 10:25

Your ship will sail
once the coast is clear❀

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Russell Jacklin

Thu 12th May 2022 08:49

Thank you all,
There is another one called,
If you can't play the game, break the bat,
unfortunately not so hopeful

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Red Brick Keshner

Thu 12th May 2022 05:01

Oh yes, the tide has to be in or it all stays put. Thanks for sharing. /Frederick.

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Sunshine

Thu 12th May 2022 04:43

Thank you NigelπŸ’•

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Sunshine

Thu 12th May 2022 04:42

I hope so Nigel. May the almighty God bless us all.

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 12th May 2022 01:46

A really inspiring poem, Russell, filled with hope! 😊

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 12th May 2022 01:19

Thank you so much for the kind comment, Pete, I really appreciate it! 😊

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Nigel Astell

Thu 12th May 2022 00:17

Thanks for your likes
Clare
Stephen A
Holden
Stephen G
and
Your Royal Poetess.

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Wed 11th May 2022 23:58

Just read your brilliant sample poem, KJ. It was so funny. Gave me a great laugh. Really good. Well done to you!πŸ‘πŸ™Œ

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Wed 11th May 2022 23:19

Just great, Russel '. Love that old friend, 'Possibility'! Very hopeful poem. Thanks!πŸ‘πŸ™Œ

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keith jeffries

Wed 11th May 2022 22:42

Kevin you never fail your fans and this poem is no exception. I enjoy your writing because the reader is not only taken into the scene but even allowed to experience the emotions involved. The last stanza reminds me of a time many years ago when a soldier and sitting in the NAAFI with a mate. We were both three sheets to the wind when he exclaimed, "hey mate, do farts have lumps in them". He had also followed through.
Thanks again for a superb poem rich as always in humour
Keith

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 11th May 2022 21:42

Thank you, John, appreciated
And Stephen, yes I've always found it a tad sinister 😡
And thanks for the likes! 🌈

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Wed 11th May 2022 21:12

Absolutely brilliant, Jo! It sounds like a very interesting person to me. Love it.πŸ’•

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 11th May 2022 21:03

That's most kind if you, Stephen. Yes, you have to laugh at all the self-important nonsense.

And thanks to Ray, Tom and Julie for liking.

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John Marks

Wed 11th May 2022 20:03

Thank You kindly Stephen.

Life is the childhood of our immortality.

Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 11th May 2022 19:53

Bleakly beautiful, John. Complimented by a great uplifting song. 🌈

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John Marks

Wed 11th May 2022 19:45

From my most unnoticed actions,
my most veiled writing -
from these alone will I be understood.
C.P. Cavafy

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keith jeffries

Wed 11th May 2022 19:32

Stephen, Pete and Tom,
Thank you for your comments. As always they are appreciated and a source of encouragement. I have been off site for sometime as I have returned to live in Spain. I need tranquility in my old age.
Thank you again
Keith

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 11th May 2022 18:36

One if your best for me, Russel. Brilliantly constructed & written, with beautiful imagery πŸŒˆπŸ‘

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 11th May 2022 18:33

A fascinating & eye opening read, Jo. My wife works at a ' special ' school for kids with all manner of kids with, so called difficulties. Quite a few on the autism 'spectrum' There's a boy who sits facing the wall at break time so he doesn't catch anyone's eye
in case he has to speak. Very introverted, but intelligent & happy in his own company. Is that a problem?
Had to Google Susskind, sounds right up my street. Except I have no idea what it means... And, I have to ask, did you ever used to watch Quantum Leap ( The very accurate TV programme - and don't say it wasnt)😁

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 11th May 2022 18:12

Another brilliant piece, Stephen. I always think of it as a yearly pantomime, minus the good. Widow Twanky has never looked so pompous . ✌

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 11th May 2022 18:04

Nice to have you back, Keith, and with such a grimly truthful piece of brilliance. Superb

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Pete (edbreathe)

Wed 11th May 2022 17:40

Keith
I feel your anger
I think we have all tried to hang words on this , the pen being mightier than the sword at the moment is debatable
A brutal poem for a brutal event

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 11th May 2022 15:14

Thanks very much, Greg, John and Graham. I do my best to manage anger but it's sometimes not easy in view of what is going on.

I get the ridicule point, Graham. It's true that the more obnoxious these dictators become, the more absurd things look. Think of the Belarus generals with their oversized hats or the practised, hysterical clapping in North Korea. Yes, the parade seemed more jackbooted than ever.

My thanks once again for all the kind comments.

And to Nigel, Rudyard, Holden, Pete, Clare and K Lynn for liking.

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Tom

Wed 11th May 2022 14:21

Wow, Keith this is fantastic. The final line is perfect. πŸ‘

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John Coopey

Wed 11th May 2022 14:08

Not as creul as being a Sprus suttorper.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 11th May 2022 10:31

This parade for many of us in the West has always been(to me) a thing of ridicule. The irony for me is that Putin declares he is removing naziism from Ukraine and yet his troops resemble the jackbooted strutters of 1939 more than ever!
A fine observation. Well done Stephen.

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John Botterill

Wed 11th May 2022 08:21

A fine poem. Love the "dark webs of time."

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John Botterill

Wed 11th May 2022 08:08

So much to admire in your poetry, Stephen. The fresh-dead paradox and the "wind-up, flat-packed military" descriptive brilliance. All of it was great!

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Pete (edbreathe)

Wed 11th May 2022 07:57

As always , brilliant

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Pete (edbreathe)

Wed 11th May 2022 07:55

Unfortunately it always seems to happen like this . Is it because they need you , or you need them ? I can never work it out .
Nicely written

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Mahira Pamnani

Wed 11th May 2022 05:46

Thank you for your comment on Wilderness! I seriously feel that excessive urbanisation needs to be stopped for the betterment of humankind and all the other creatures known to exist. Feels good to see someone thinks the same way😊

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Nigel Astell

Wed 11th May 2022 02:52

What is meant to be sometimes works out better than you could ever imagineπŸ‘

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Nigel Astell

Wed 11th May 2022 02:46

Free to love
free to write
boundless everlasting poetryπŸ’•

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Greg Freeman

Tue 10th May 2022 23:16

Wonderful final couplet, Steve. You just keep them coming. You manage your anger very well.

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