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Sat 24th Sep 2022 17:12

Profound

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Sat 24th Sep 2022 16:47

This act would likely finish his career.

Why would it finish his career?

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 24th Sep 2022 15:42

Any views on the Stamp Duty Greg? πŸ˜‡

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 24th Sep 2022 15:01

Nice one, Greg. Another reason to hide behind the sofa (if it hasn't been repossessed).

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 24th Sep 2022 14:55

Quite right, Julie, although perhaps he will have to be pushed.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 24th Sep 2022 14:53

I think you are on to something here, Tom. The emptyness and strange freedom of early morning is very special, although in my case the temptation to lie in is always there!

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Nigel Astell

Sat 24th Sep 2022 12:37

Dark is the night
as moonlight fades
soon to return
happy we will be❀

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Isobel

Sat 24th Sep 2022 10:03

It's a sad day for this country when a government can be so out of touch with the plight of its people, that it thinks it ok to roll out a budget like that.

Yes it does rather take us into the realm of science fiction - it's so ghastly , it's unbelievable.

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Flyntland

Sat 24th Sep 2022 09:56

Thank you to Stephen A. a comment that I greatly appreciate,
a great confidence giver.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 24th Sep 2022 08:51

Greg’s right! I’m seventy-one next month and have turned into both a Lark and a Nightowl!

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Greg Freeman

Sat 24th Sep 2022 08:02

It was technically morning when you posted this, Tom! I'm one of those 'can't sleep' people. Happens more often as you get older ...

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Red Brick Keshner

Sat 24th Sep 2022 00:52

Thanks John, that feels so much like a thumbs up as in the writing and the building up to write, I distinctly recall those selfsame feeling of being fascinated and disconcerted in turn and simultaneously. Just glad that kernel remained discernible in its final form. Most obliged, Frederick.

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 23rd Sep 2022 21:46

If only he would realise this, Julie!
Hope is eternal! πŸ™πŸŒˆ

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 23rd Sep 2022 21:39

Thank you Sarah for commenting on 'Our Lily' Always appreciated. Keep writing, keep being amazing yourself 🌈

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 23rd Sep 2022 21:20

Superb

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John Botterill

Fri 23rd Sep 2022 17:46

Fascinating and disconcerting. Covers many issues with skill, Frederick. I like this poem a lot.

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Flyntland

Fri 23rd Sep 2022 14:56


Thank you to Massoud and Holden for taking the time to read and like.
Thank you Stephen - it is a poem that arrived unbidden and flew onto the page - it coincided with Putin raising the spectre of conscription and the mass exodus of young men 'who didn't choose to die'

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John Marks

Thu 22nd Sep 2022 23:40

Thanks Flynt, you're kind. Kindness is the most efficacious antidote to fear and anxiety. "What wisdom can you find that is greater than kindness?” β€”Jean-Jacques Rousseau.

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Martin Elder

Thu 22nd Sep 2022 21:13

I love the line cataract windows. A fabulous poem with some great lines.
Love it

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Martin Elder

Thu 22nd Sep 2022 21:11

Nice one Tommy . to the point and well put

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Angel whisperer indigo child x

Thu 22nd Sep 2022 20:42

Well done Stephen amazing achievement to have your work read out in the house of commons
You're amazing
And what a tribute xxx
Godbless

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 22nd Sep 2022 17:09

Thank you Brenda for the very flattering comment! And Graham & John.
In a reflective mood lately! I did show 'the wife' this one and she said... unlikely! πŸ˜‚
And thank you for taking the time to read & like, always appreciated 🌈

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Tom

Thu 22nd Sep 2022 15:56

Ah thanks Rose, that's lovely to hear. πŸ˜ƒ

And thank you Kevin, really appreciate that. πŸ˜ƒ

And thank you to Frederick, Holden, Julie and Stephen for taking the time to read and the 'likes' πŸ˜ƒ

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John Botterill

Thu 22nd Sep 2022 15:27

Lovely affectionate poetry, Stephen. πŸ˜€

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Laura Taylor

Thu 22nd Sep 2022 13:52

Ah, thank you Stephen. You think? For sure πŸ˜‰

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Flyntland

Thu 22nd Sep 2022 10:26

"Like a dark, tepid river, fear begins to stalk through empty spaces"
Chilling, memorable, and many of us have been there.

Thank for this and the music.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 22nd Sep 2022 08:11

My thanks to Flyntland and Greg for the comments and to Nigel, Holden, John B, Julie and Pete for the likes.

I don't usually post poems on UK politics but this 'difficult decisions' mantra is so crass that I felt the urge to respond.

I liked your definition, Flyntland. I suppose that she's laughing all the way to the bank(ers).

This does smack of desperation, Greg. A lot of post-Brexit departures.

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John Marks

Wed 21st Sep 2022 23:36

Thank you Pete for all your support. Our kid, me brother, was named Pete. I got my vocab by not listening but by reading. β€œLive as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever.” β€” Mahatma Gandhi

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 21st Sep 2022 23:12

Words that those of us of a certain age and long tenure often think but never say.

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Brenda Wells

Wed 21st Sep 2022 22:58

Another brilliant and sensitive poem.
Every word well chosen and brimming with emotion.
Excellently crafted.

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Pete (edbreathe)

Wed 21st Sep 2022 22:51

Fantastic as usual, a joy to read.
If I’d listened at school I might have a vocabulary as good as yours !

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Wed 21st Sep 2022 20:31

Love it Tom.





Rose πŸ’‹

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raypool

Wed 21st Sep 2022 18:52

Thanks folks for the likes; Nigel, Frederick, Graham, Jennifer, Stephen, Holden and Flyntland.

Thanks Stephen. This is one of those where I was dwelling on human nature as often I do. I always believe that people's motivations are often unconscious and so a secret to them, so I like to probe my own to give reason where none is forthcoming. That may sound harsh I know.

Always a pleasure to hear from you Laura and to garner a response both thoughtful and to my mind complimentary. I refer you to my response to Stephen's comment.

Cheers Greg, that's the third poem in a series it seems, along with so many others. Glad it found favour.

Ray

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Greg Freeman

Wed 21st Sep 2022 17:57

Apparently the bankers are all leaving the UK because of Brexit. So this is to try to persuade them to stay.

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Flyntland

Wed 21st Sep 2022 17:42

"Difficult decisions" what she really meant were decisions that make other people's lives more difficult.

I winced at "sell your pets"

your last line made me wince even louder. Well done for exposing the truth.

And she is smiling Grrrrrr!

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 21st Sep 2022 17:00

I was fascinated by this, Laura. It has a rebellious sweep, I think, and is brilliant expressed.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 21st Sep 2022 16:47

A brutal but magnificent poem. This kind of thing just has to be written.

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Flyntland

Wed 21st Sep 2022 10:16

to Frederick, Laura and Jennifer, and to Stephen G, Julie, and Halden thank you so much.
To Stephen A, thank you for your comment.

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julie callaghan

Wed 21st Sep 2022 08:11

Thanks for the likes and kind comment John.

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Red Brick Keshner

Wed 21st Sep 2022 03:56

Thanks John. Should preciseness be the deal of the day it is also scary as what or how little/much does it take to become imprecise in our analogies?! Suffice to say it is gladdening to know this is deemed "very clever." Cheers!

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Holden Moncrieff

Wed 21st Sep 2022 02:17

Thank you so much, John and Jennifer, for your lovely comments, they are genuinely encouraging! πŸ˜ŠπŸ’—

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Sunshine

Tue 20th Sep 2022 19:31

Very soon.

Thank you 😊

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John Botterill

Tue 20th Sep 2022 17:48

Very clever, Frederick. Precise and telling use of analogy πŸ˜€

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John Botterill

Tue 20th Sep 2022 16:57

Heavenly, Julie πŸ˜€

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 20th Sep 2022 16:50

I am so pleased that the launch went so well. My thanks and congratulations to everyone involved. I know that Greg has contributed a lot to this and it was very kind of him to read out my poem.

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John Coopey

Tue 20th Sep 2022 16:33

I had rather hoped someone might say something on the lines of β€œShit poetry? You, John? Surely not!” But, hey ho, never mind.
Thanks for the Likes, Frederick, Stephen A, Stephen G and Jennifer.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 20th Sep 2022 11:50

Soul Searching
Ever watching at the night sky
Star signs shooting wishes
Only one for me
Moonlight message to see❀





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Nigel Astell

Tue 20th Sep 2022 11:38

Thanks everyone for your likes
Frederick
Stephen G
Holden
John B
Rose
and
Kevin.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 20th Sep 2022 10:29

Another good one from you, Ray, about this whole business.

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Laura Taylor

Tue 20th Sep 2022 09:56

Yes, I like this. And I could hazard several guesses, re what Stephen says about the motivations.

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