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keith jeffries

Mon 5th Sep 2022 21:43

Well Jordyn,
Now I know that I am not alone in my feelings of spontaneity and impetuosity. I shall come out of the closet from now on. Seriously I loved this poem as it had that unexpected climax. Forgive the pun.
Good piece of writing
Keith

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John Botterill

Mon 5th Sep 2022 21:19

Thanks Keith and Greg. Love your comments. Glad it stimulated some reminiscence, Greg.
Well, I had to do something on the beach, so I wrote a poem, as you do! ๐Ÿ˜‚

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Greg Freeman

Mon 5th Sep 2022 19:34

Ah, Sheringham ... where summer turned to winter, missing out autumn, during one holiday week for us. Next year, Crete, which was too bloody hot! Loved to watch the trains pass on the nearby embankment as we sheltered indoors from the rain. Lovely poem, John.

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keith jeffries

Mon 5th Sep 2022 18:48

The Meditations of Marcus Aurelius is a profound book and worth reading despite its age. I would agree he was probably the wisest of Romans as a philosopher but my hero will always be Hadrian.
Thanks again John
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 5th Sep 2022 18:44

Loved every word John
Thanks
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 5th Sep 2022 18:01

John,
A poem of relationships at various stages but the last line caught my attention and somehow summed up all what had gone before. Life is so very tenuous and we should learn to grasp every moment as if it were our last especially with those we love. How I would love to turn back the clock and spend more time with my father. Thank you for this
Keith

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John Marks

Mon 5th Sep 2022 16:36

Thank you Holden, KL, Stephen and Keith. Marcus Aurelius was, in my opinion, the wisest of the Romans:

"When you arise in the morning, think of what a precious privilege it is to be alive - to breathe, to think, to enjoy, to love."

Marcus Aurelius

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John Botterill

Mon 5th Sep 2022 15:30

Thanks so much Holden and Stephen A for your supportive comments. It means a great deal to me. ๐Ÿ‘
Thanks for the likes K. Lynn and Julie

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Angel whisperer indigo child x

Mon 5th Sep 2022 15:25

Aw thankyou very much for your kind feedback x

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keith jeffries

Mon 5th Sep 2022 14:20

Sarah,
What an assuring and hopeful poem, beautifully crafted and brimming with optimism. Words which gladdened my heart.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 5th Sep 2022 13:07

They can still pull the chain Hugh as they seem to have given up on the prevention and detection of crime. Good humorous poem
Thanks
Keith

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Nigel Astell

Mon 5th Sep 2022 12:14

Every thank you that is given
brings sunshine to friendships found
even the others too because they have
made each thank you stronger by far.โค

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keith jeffries

Mon 5th Sep 2022 11:09

A poem verging on a prayer of gratitude, honestly composed and balanced in thought and feeling.
Thank you for this
Keith

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raypool

Mon 5th Sep 2022 10:50

I would just like to say that for a couple in the Autumn years so much engaged in the poetry publishing world there is a decided Spring in their step, and the enthusiasm is a wonderful infusion considering the gravity of the current economic and health situation that we all find ourselves in. Poetry is a voice that should never be silenced and the likes of Donall and Janice are part of that. Hail unto them both.

Ray

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Flyntland

Mon 5th Sep 2022 08:16

Thank you to the two Stephens abd to Holden, comments and likes are so encouraging.

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julie callaghan

Mon 5th Sep 2022 06:32

Thanks for the likes and for the lovely comment Keith.

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Holden Moncrieff

Mon 5th Sep 2022 01:30

A truly beautiful poem, John, your appreciation of nature and respect for its time frames really shine through! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 4th Sep 2022 22:29

A lovely poem, John. I felt like I was sitting there with you! ๐ŸŒˆ

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Sunshine

Sun 4th Sep 2022 22:02

It's all in the head. Experience, knowledge, faith, belief etc. It shapes our thoughts, vision and words.๐Ÿ’•

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John Botterill

Sun 4th Sep 2022 21:32

Delightful poem. You write with great skill and charm, Stephen.

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sun 4th Sep 2022 20:42

Thanks for your comments. Appreciated

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kJ Walker

Sun 4th Sep 2022 19:31

It's lady's day in Donny next week, and I believe that Paul is going to give us a rendition of his classic.
It'd be brilliant to hear this one on the same night.

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John Coopey

Sun 4th Sep 2022 17:47

Stephen and Keith, we share something in common. Pain.
And thanks for the Like, Holden and Stephen A.

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John Botterill

Sun 4th Sep 2022 17:19

Thank you so much Keith and Stephen G for your appreciation. It means a lot. It was good to sit there and commune with Nature. A rare treat!
Thanks, too, for the likes, Frederick and KJ. ๐Ÿ˜€

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 4th Sep 2022 17:07

'Now is the time of the cat'. I love that, John. In fact, I love it all.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 4th Sep 2022 17:00

This conveys something of the mystery of artistic creation, I think, Keith. An enthralling poem (to follow on from your last line!) which I enjoyed.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 4th Sep 2022 16:52

A lovely sense of the passing of time and of the enduring power of nature, John. A pleasure of a poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 4th Sep 2022 16:47

No it doesn't and yes it can. A beautiful, poetic summary, Stephen.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 4th Sep 2022 16:31

I think most West Ham fans would be happy with the chippy just outside Heaven's gates, John. Undemanding lot.
Forget the departure stuff - the night is young!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 4th Sep 2022 16:24

Thank you very much, John. You''re right that there is a subtext concerning the casual exercise and abuse of power. I wonder who could be a candidate for that?!!!

Thanks to Reggie's Ghost, Holden and Stephen for liking.

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Sep 2022 16:16

A poem which expresses the mood which is prevalent in the country at this time, if not throughout the world. The last line of the poem echoes what many other recent poets have mentioned. People are perplexed by the injustices that are now so prominent. Your poem well describes the age we live in.
Thank you for this.
Keith

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John Coopey

Sun 4th Sep 2022 14:34

Thanks for your thoughts, Keith and Graham. I am, Graham, suitably qualified to be a cock.
And thanks for the Likes, Frederick and Flyntland.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 4th Sep 2022 13:35

I'm sorry to hear that you're making plans to meet your maker JC. I have it on good authority that there are separate heavens and in the once that you're heading to it is permanently 1961/2. However, it might be difficult for you to get a game as the greats still like to turn out.

They do however have a vacancy for someone to dress up as the team's mascot!!

Keep breathing in and out John! We need you.

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Sep 2022 13:08

Intimacy and friendship juxtaposed. A poem from a heart that regrets but at the same time has few regrets; a longing for more. The heated passion of love or a fling often has an emotional residue which we are left to pick up the pieces from. A poem from an unfulfilled heart. Well written.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Flyntland

Sun 4th Sep 2022 12:40

Thank you for your comment Keith, this is a very simple poem - no hidden meaning which I suppose is unfashionable- it reflects my love of walking 'off the beaten track' with my beloved collies (long gone)and is one of my 'close to the earth' poems.

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Sep 2022 11:54

A beautiful poem in praise of nature. Well crafted and written with an appreciative heart.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Sep 2022 11:52

John, fear not. There is not a single Man United fan in heaven as paradise is full of Aston Villa players and supporters.
Thanks
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Sep 2022 11:50

One of the best definitions of love I have read for some time.
Thanks Stephen
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Sep 2022 11:47

Thank you Holden for the like and to Stephen and Stephen thank you for your comments. When the world is going through war and suffering there always seems to be a dictator in the background pulling the strings.
Thank you again
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Sep 2022 11:45

Thank you for all the likes as they are much appreciated. Thank you to Flyntland, Ghazala and Graham for their valuable comments. Ghazala we are promised the second coming of Christ at the end of time and many believe that we are living in those end times here and now. I also believe this. Graham thank you for your words of wisdom as I too am increasingly of the opinion that it is better to sit back and let it all happen as in reality I cannot change an iota.
Again thank you to all
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Sep 2022 11:38

This poem succinctly encapsulates the reality of human conflict, yet sadly we seem doomed to repeat it. A poem which takes aways the trees and we see the wood.
Thank you for this. Every word is true
Keith

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Flyntland

Sun 4th Sep 2022 11:12

" ideas held in minds wich are
hallowed caves wherein beauty lies
Chaos lives here too"
These are beatifull - haunting - words - the depth of understanding in this poem is both humbling and empowering - and is one that I shall read over and over, Thank you Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Sep 2022 11:03

A poem which speaks of the fullness of nature where man combined with nature can bring about such a clear manifestation of where nature and art do truly meet. The poem is also a reminder of past generations who in their generosity planted and planned what they knew they would never see nor reap. Selfless creators indeed.
Thank you for this
Keith

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julie callaghan

Sun 4th Sep 2022 05:58

Thanks John, canโ€™t take credit for the shot it was shared on the Herdy site asking for captions.

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keith jeffries

Sat 3rd Sep 2022 21:37

Many such trails exist with their own history which defy logical explanation but have become reused to accommodate our own ways of reaching or avoiding places. Local fauna foraging
perhaps. A poem to ponder on.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 3rd Sep 2022 21:32

Superb. I love the words "transient unstable compulsions somehow sacred maybe from another time a resonance". In this poem I feel a sense of the original creation and a reaction to it. Maybe I am mistaken but still impressed with the quality of thought given to it.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 3rd Sep 2022 21:24

A poem richly exquisite in its descriptive quality. You have captured those early precious moments of dawn in a sublime way where the reader is taken to that hour of the an incipient day.
A poem of real quality.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 3rd Sep 2022 20:24

Thank you guys always good to hear nice words, maybe I've got a chance at this writing lark

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Sunshine

Sat 3rd Sep 2022 20:10

You never miss any poem Nigel. Thanks for making my poems special with your comments, likes and appreciations....๐Ÿ’–

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Sunshine

Sat 3rd Sep 2022 20:08

Always your wordprints to see. Thanks for your comment Nigel๐ŸŒท

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