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Flyntland

Mon 17th Oct 2022 09:14

My thanks to Frederick, John and Russell for your 'likes'.

Stephen- thank you for your very supportive coment.

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keith jeffries

Sun 16th Oct 2022 23:11

Truly philosophical and beautifully crafted portraying the inevitability of our ultimate demise. Yet somehow also comforting.
Thank you for this
Keith

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John Botterill

Sun 16th Oct 2022 20:42

Gy John Botterill under his pseudonym J.G.Barwell
Available on Amazon for ยฃ6.50.

All proceeds will be donated to the Teenage Cancer Trust,

"it's a rattling good read!" Peggy, (John's mum) ๐Ÿ˜‚

https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B0BHRFHJM9/ref=sr_1_1?crid=2T94ANMPND5I0&keywords=jg+barwell&qid=1665742573&s=books&sprefix=jg+barwell%2Cstripbooks%2C78&sr=1-1

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John Botterill

Sun 16th Oct 2022 19:31

Intriguing, moving and with a wealth of meaning. Fab, Clare.

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John Botterill

Sun 16th Oct 2022 19:21

I think you convey the horror which is surely being felt by ordinary people uncannily well, Stephen. Brilliant poem!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 16th Oct 2022 17:17

I probably owe my life to a black bus conductor who, back in the 1970s, saved me from falling off the back of a Routemaster in East London. Fortunately, he didn't seem to prioritise the 'familiar race'.

I find this poem depressing and pointless.

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Sun 16th Oct 2022 17:12

This poem saddens me and I simply can't be arsed to explain why.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 16th Oct 2022 17:08

Thank you, Bethany. Yes, this war must have led to so many individual tragedies, coupled with all the emotions that each of us would feel. As you say, violence is never the answer, but when will people learn?

And thanks to Frederick, Julie and Holden for liking this one.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 16th Oct 2022 16:58

A pleasant contrast to some of the stuff that's around. Thanks, Flyntland.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 16th Oct 2022 15:34

kj - thank you for the considered comment.
Flyntland - Indeed; no denial from me. That said, I sought to
address the dichotomy that sees contrasting behaviour and
attitudes "across the "spectrum". We seem so accept traits in
others that we deny in (or to) ourselves. That intrigues me.

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John Botterill

Sun 16th Oct 2022 14:31

Thanks so much for your support, Stephen A. Hope it lives up to the billing I have given it ๐Ÿ˜‚ I will be buying yours, too. Let us know when it comes out!

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 16th Oct 2022 11:46

Congratulations, John. Its the same reason I'm so quiet, busy compiling my first book. I didn't realise id wrote so many lol. I'll definitely get a copy, & for such a worthy cause. ๐ŸŒˆ

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John Botterill

Sun 16th Oct 2022 09:15

Thanks Holden. You're a star ๐Ÿ˜€

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Flyntland

Sun 16th Oct 2022 08:48

" and that applies to the familiar race" your words - never mine.

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 16th Oct 2022 02:59

Congratulations, John, I will definitely be purchasing a copy! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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kJ Walker

Sat 15th Oct 2022 22:14

My initial reaction was to take issue with the title of this piece, and assume some moral high ground.
But unfortunately I have to admit that to a degree you are probably right.
That having been said, if there is a spectrum I think that we'd be on opposite ends .

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John Marks

Sat 15th Oct 2022 19:43

Thank you Bethany, you are very kind.

Writing in English is the most ingenious torture ever devised for sins committed in previous lives. The English reading public explains the reason why. James A Joyce

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Sat 15th Oct 2022 17:32

When oh when will this violence dominated world ever learn the necessary lesson's it most certainly needs to Stephen? Yet in the midst of all of this mayhem, we must not lose sight of our everyday emotional needs so to speak.

A very well and realistically written poem. Thank you, Mr. G!

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Flyntland

Sat 15th Oct 2022 10:16

Thank you Stephen G, Clare and K.Lynn for your very welcome likes.

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John Botterill

Sat 15th Oct 2022 09:08

Thanks for the likes Russell and K. Lynn ๐Ÿ˜€

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John Coopey

Fri 14th Oct 2022 22:07

โ€œAsked.....to stand asideโ€ is the terminology, I believe, Stephen.

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John Botterill

Fri 14th Oct 2022 21:41

Thanks so much Stephen and Clare. It's great to be part of Writeoutloud! Such great people on this site! ๐Ÿ˜€

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 14th Oct 2022 21:35

'Nature's showiest season' - yes, that's right.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 14th Oct 2022 21:27

Thanks, MC.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 14th Oct 2022 21:12

Spot on, John, and there may not even have been a first-class seat available.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 14th Oct 2022 21:09

Congratulations, John. I shall certainly buy it.

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John Coopey

Fri 14th Oct 2022 20:25

I think they are, MC. But sheโ€™s left him on the pew on his own.

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John Botterill

Fri 14th Oct 2022 18:35

Thanks, Tom. I sincerely hope you enjoy reading it. much appreciated!

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 14th Oct 2022 18:07

I retain a number of copies of newspapers and their cuttings
from the past. Both serve to remind me of things that are too
easily "deleted" in today's instant gratification market place.
I've just been re-reading a copy of the London Evening Standard
from nearly two decades ago that reports the UK population to
be 70 million by 2030. Only 8 years out but a warning that
we should have taken seriously.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 14th Oct 2022 17:51

Hah...it seems that they are not singing from the same song sheet! ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 14th Oct 2022 17:45

Flyntland - thanks for the kind words. Positivity in life is always
to be encouraged as we pass along our individual paths.
Thanks also to those who "liked" this entry.

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Tom

Fri 14th Oct 2022 17:19

Congratulations John, great work. I look forward to getting my hands on a copy. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Flyntland

Fri 14th Oct 2022 16:33

Please accept my condolences, some things are so hard to bear.

Your quotation is a sound one - and is one that that I shall remember. Thank you for printing it here.

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John Botterill

Fri 14th Oct 2022 16:29

Thanks so much to Julie, Russell, Frederick, Graham and Flyntland. Supportive and kind, as always! ๐Ÿ˜€
"The name's Barwell. J.G.Barwell!"

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Flyntland

Fri 14th Oct 2022 14:54

This is such a gentle, comforting, tender poem.

I liked

"But life is full of all shapes and sizes
many unique individual souls"

" And supportive arms into which you can hide"

Well done on this one.

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Candice Reineke

Fri 14th Oct 2022 12:41

Thanks for the kind note, Bethany!

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 14th Oct 2022 12:25

Brilliant, grief intertwined

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julie callaghan

Fri 14th Oct 2022 12:00

Congratulations and well done you hope itโ€™s sells well and makes lots of money for a great cause.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 14th Oct 2022 10:52

Well done JGB or is it JB, very envious. Good on you!

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 14th Oct 2022 09:15

Thanks for your comments, Greg and John. In a way, it's surprising that in 2022 there are still so many print versions of newspapers out there. I find the prospect of only on-line newspapers, mostly behind paywalls, very sad. I suppose we have to admit that the Mail knows its readership - it's just worrying that there are so many of them out there. (OK, I admit that Guardian readers can also be a bit odd at times).

Thanks to Nigel, Frederick, Holden, Graham and K Lynn for liking this.

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John Coopey

Thu 13th Oct 2022 22:55

Thankyou for your further thoughts, Massoud and MC.

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Thu 13th Oct 2022 22:44

brilliant! loved this, Candice. Thank you.

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Thu 13th Oct 2022 22:40

All in all Mike, a very nice poetical package. Thank you.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 13th Oct 2022 16:01

Massoud - claiming to be an idiot seems to make you even more
likely to fit in on today's benches in Parliament. You could even
go straight to the House of Lords!! ๐Ÿ˜Œ

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Russell Jacklin

Thu 13th Oct 2022 11:55

Love it, great story telling, I was engrossed and keen to know whether there was a happy ending, ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 13th Oct 2022 09:51

A great read, lots of involved content, love and angst! Well done!

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John Coopey

Thu 13th Oct 2022 09:02

Indeed, Stephen. In the 70โ€™s The Mirror sold more copies than all newspapers are sold today. I suspect the biggest driver of their decline is what I am using now - personalised technology, the iPad, smart phone etc. It is still good to see The Daily Mail averting its gaze from news it doesnโ€™t like.

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Rasa Kabaila

Thu 13th Oct 2022 00:59

Thank you Frederik and Graham. I appreciate your support of frontline workers. People often think that Nurses and healthcare workers get burnt out by the stress of the clinical work. However the statistics show that it's the love that Nurses and healthcare workers have for patients and the clinical work that keeps them there, and it's how they are treated by the managerial system which forces them to leave. I have always adored my patient work-even while working in a crisis mental health work, which is very full on. My love to be able to help and support others will never change.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 12th Oct 2022 23:20

Arguably the excesses of the tabloids, the phone-tapping and all the latest allegations, have hastened their decline. They say young people don't really read newspapers any more. I like the way your poem conjures up the language of those times, Steve. There are certain words that you only see in newspaper headlines, that were never, ever part of everyday language.

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Wed 12th Oct 2022 18:26

The mere desire to stand for election should dismiss the candidate automatically.

Definitely not for me thanks, also I'm an idiot.

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