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Landi Cruz

Wed 20th Mar 2024 15:37

Thanks for your comment, David.

I feel lucky to have noticed it as I'm sure many who pass that way don't.

Really, it still moves me as something quite profound and even suggestive of an anachronistic and rare bit of knowledge to which, surely, only the most fortunate were privy 🌷

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John Gilbert Ellis

Wed 20th Mar 2024 15:04

Parental Controls

So, is there another but tougher 
password to get you set up with?
Yes, how about I use my
favourite word chicken? 
Okay, you need a
capital. Make 
it chicken 
Kiev 
then.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 20th Mar 2024 14:46

I am probably ahead of most if not all of WOL contributors in terms of age and retain an ongoing circumspection about the
attitude of the medicos to matters of health. Many years ago, during a routine eye-test in my old line of work, I was told I'd
probably need glasses sery soon. This actually only occurredf
during the past few years when I adopted pharmacy bought
2X specs for reading and PC screen viewing, while able to
read a car index plate at much further than the DVLA minimum
requirement. I suffered higher frequency hearing loss due to
exposure to firearm use but still manage to hear most things
around me and use headphones satisfactorily for domestic
appliance listening. Have you noticed how many NHS ads.
are exhorting us to check in with our docs about this and
that at a time when Covid has thrown patient queues for serious illness treatment into freefall? And how today's
medicos opt to strike for financial gain at the drop of a syringe?
I now place them alongside lawyers for putting income
interest before client interest! Meanwhile - let's all eat well,
exercise sensibly and keep the brain busy. Mother Nature will
take you when she's good and ready!

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John Marks

Wed 20th Mar 2024 14:42

Supposedly, when WW was on a walking tour in Germany with his sister Dorothy he let STC and de Quincey stay at Dove cottage which they wrecked consumed much laudanum, led a totally nocturnal existence,, did no washing up, no cleaning/maintenance, didn't pay the milk bill, fell out with all the locals etc etc So you are right Beth pandemonium ensued!

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John Marks

Wed 20th Mar 2024 14:26

Thank you all.Esoecially you Beth for your generous comment. I lived in London in 1975 and often danced to SH's music. Steve was in hospital for 4 years as a boy, polio. I love the poetry of his lyrics.

You've done it all
You've broken every code
And pulled the rebel to the floor
You spoiled the game
No matter what you say
For only metal, what a bore
Blue eyes, blue eyes
How come you tell so many lies?
Come up and see me, make me smile
Or do what you want, running wild
There's nothing left
All gone and run away
Maybe you'll tarry for a while
It's just a test
A game for us to play
Win or lose, it's hard to smile
Resist, resist
It's from yourself you have to hide, oh
Come up and see me to make me smile
Oh, or do what you want, running wild
There ain't no more
You've taken everything
From my belief in Mother Earth
Can you ignore
My faith in everything?
'Cause I know what faith is and what it's worth
Away, away
And don't say maybe you'll try.....

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R A Porter

Wed 20th Mar 2024 11:36

A lovely challenge - Stephen Fry would approve ... here goes:

The poetry tap

Sometimes it roars with a whoosh and a rush
A tumbling torrent, of flash phrases that gush
Sometimes it gurgles, with wheezing wet croaks
An intermittent flow that scarcely soaks
Sometimes it stutters, stops, drips
Barely dampening the lips
Don’t force it
The Poetry
Tap

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R A Porter

Wed 20th Mar 2024 11:23

Thank you Stephen & Graham - he was inspirational, even with a heavy cold - the Lemsip Laureate indeed!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 20th Mar 2024 10:56

Are THFC going to win something then JC. I thought you had a deal?

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leon stolgard

Wed 20th Mar 2024 10:49

Hence my earlier incorrect now corrected adressing of you Stephen as our resident war poet-
please keep the poetic albeit sad info coming

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 20th Mar 2024 10:40

Perhaps, you're next R.A? 👏

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leon stolgard

Wed 20th Mar 2024 10:40

Roaringly brilliant!

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 20th Mar 2024 10:38

J.C. it was purely going out clothes, honest! 😂 & we believe you, Graham... 😉

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David RL Moore

Wed 20th Mar 2024 09:43

Hi Telboy,

Thanks for your visitation. I have been fortunate in receiving a helpful hand on occasion. Sadly I have witnessed too much revelry and delight in the downfall of others. It is a sorry world we occupy.

I'm not sure we come back wholly stronger, definitely different.

David.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 20th Mar 2024 09:11

World Poetry Day tomorrow and we are asking for a late flurry of nonets as WOL’s way of spreading the word.

Why not have a go? How to explanation in headline text on homepage

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 20th Mar 2024 09:04

Clever stuff RAP!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 20th Mar 2024 09:02

JC and Stephen.
My daughter asked me to order a bikini online for her birthday.
It took me ages to stop the paper copy of the Bravissimo catalogue addressed to me, coming through the letterbox!!

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John Coopey

Wed 20th Mar 2024 08:39

Don’t mention the funeral plans, Stephen.

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John Coopey

Wed 20th Mar 2024 08:35

Powerful and painful memories, Violer.

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John Coopey

Wed 20th Mar 2024 08:32

Very poignant, Lee.

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John Coopey

Wed 20th Mar 2024 08:25

Ahhhh, Steven! This evokes memories of smuggling my mam’s catalogue into the bog for a half hour of “enjoying” the pics of bras and corsets.
Still do.

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David RL Moore

Wed 20th Mar 2024 08:06

Hi John,

Thanks for the response. I wasn't familiar with the song but am now and all the better for it.

Thanks mate, nice one.

David.

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John Coopey

Wed 20th Mar 2024 07:57

A turtle on its back is indeed a sad sight. But are you familiar with this Les Barker classic, Steve?

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=cpr_XvKy2tQ

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Telboy

Wed 20th Mar 2024 07:55

Periods of vulnerability when others can help you, offer words of encouragement, or take the opportunity to kick you when you are down. They say we come back stronger.

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R A Porter

Wed 20th Mar 2024 07:39

Loved these - they capture the weary, grim angst of a long suffering train traveller with wit and a light touch!

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rob1967able

Wed 20th Mar 2024 06:36

Thank you Bethany, this is very nice of you. I like the idea, and your written words are even better than mine. Love.

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David RL Moore

Wed 20th Mar 2024 06:11

Thanks Landi,

Forces like those of/in nature don't often spend time preaching, they prefer to turn up unannounced and just do their biblical thing--I like that.

Men like to give warning, usually to feed their little egos and thankfully in doing so betray their intentions...to those that might be paying attention.

David

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rob1967able

Wed 20th Mar 2024 06:06

Im glad you liked it. Still keep creating Bethany. Love.

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David RL Moore

Wed 20th Mar 2024 06:02

The descriptive use of "Like a broken wave" carries so much within four words.

The force of a vibrant life briefly rolling like thunder only to break onto a shore and recede, spilling its every precious moment into grains of indifferent sand.

Those Greeks eh!

David.

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David RL Moore

Wed 20th Mar 2024 05:46

Hi Ray,

I'm pleased I hooked into that in a way that gave you some satisfaction, it's great when minds align in that way.

Although I do occasionally post comments which are short and not much use to the author of the piece I do like to post remarks which suggest I've taken some time and real interest in the writers intentions.

There are those who seem to post comments merely in the hope of reciprocal likes, a mutual agreement of recognition which amounts to bugger all. Occasionally I'll see something that I am unable to comment on simply because it is so complete it needs no comment, I might then leave a one or two word response showing appreciation.

I like to think I'm honest, stuff I think isn't up to it or of little interest to me I passover without vacuous feasting.

Anyway, hope all is well Ray.

David

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Landi Cruz

Wed 20th Mar 2024 03:53

Biblical without the demagoguery and preachiness--I like it.

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Tue 19th Mar 2024 23:23

Stunning poem John and a stunning quote from Samuel.

A film worth watching about his and Wordsworths supposed collaboration, Pandemonium,

R.I.P S,H,

Beth

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<Deleted User> (35860)

Tue 19th Mar 2024 23:17

Quite a thought provoking piece rob. Thank you.

Beth

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 19th Mar 2024 23:06

A doctor asked me if I had trouble peeing. I said no
& bugger me! 6 months later, here I am standing waiting for the 2nd stream to arrive!
Funeral plans, John? 😆👍

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 19th Mar 2024 23:00

Good writing! 😆👏

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 19th Mar 2024 22:56

Yes, John, sometimes the cover is far more enticing than its contents!
I actually did write this on the toilet, as 'the wife' had left one of her fashion books on the cabinet. It was a lovely thing to look at 😃

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David RL Moore

Tue 19th Mar 2024 22:39

Thank you Hugh and Stephen, much obliged.

David

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Auracle

Tue 19th Mar 2024 22:15

enjoying your poetry 😃

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 19th Mar 2024 19:39

Seemingly not ending anytime soon Stephen with you know who cheating his way into another term.

I feel as though 2025 will be a decisive year one way or the other.



Graham

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 19th Mar 2024 19:13

Beautiful and moving, Lee.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 19th Mar 2024 19:09

A real sense of dystopia here, David, and a lot of truth as well!

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 19th Mar 2024 19:03

'reoccurring' in the last stanza takes this poem to a higher level, David. You can almost taste the rhythm.

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Landi Cruz

Tue 19th Mar 2024 18:40

A translated piece of Grecian poetry found while perusing the remains of a once civilized site...

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raypool

Tue 19th Mar 2024 16:09

Hi David. Ive gotta say your comments are utterly exhilarating and frame a poem in all its aspects. You have of course read my mind exactly - and added the best compliment I could hope to receive in my endeavours. I applaud your use of "subtle" as I cannot really avoid that. When that runs down the plughole it can take attention with it, as you imply. ( It was Downing Street, now rather twee}.

Cheers mate. Ray

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David RL Moore

Tue 19th Mar 2024 15:59

Hi Holden,

Many thanks for your lonely like, I am appreciative of your popping by.

David.

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David RL Moore

Tue 19th Mar 2024 15:49

An interesting set of emotions this stirred in me Ray.

Feelings of NIMBY's and first world problems began to raise hairs on the back of my neck.

I wonder what the worries might be for their precious little urchins? that they may slip in the miscreants piss or that they become the miscreants doing the pissing.

The clever distinctions embedded within the poem are very pleasing, the bus stop and the walk to their car possibly demarcating some misplaced superiority.

Your work is subtle Ray and possibly because of that occasionally slips through the cracks of attention spans too sparsely constructed.

I like it.

David

PS, Was Downing Street, Farnham, your framing for this?

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John Gilbert Ellis

Tue 19th Mar 2024 15:46

A story to align with!

I also find myself teetering on the brink of too many books. Buying and reading are two very different pleasures. One is easier and far less time-consuming than the other.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 19th Mar 2024 14:54

Thanks for all your likes
Manish
Stephen A
Holden
Stephen G
Hugh
and
Aisha.

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John Gilbert Ellis

Tue 19th Mar 2024 14:23

In response to https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=134056 by Stephen Gospage.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 19th Mar 2024 14:09

Politics - promising the impossible, honing excuses and hoping for the best and short memories among the electorate.

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John Gilbert Ellis

Tue 19th Mar 2024 13:46

Beautifully structured and engaging right to the great last line. Thanks for sharing.

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