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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 6th Mar 2021 19:47

I'm not leaving a comment
I'm just typing
pressing keys
don't read anything into it.

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julie callaghan

Sat 6th Mar 2021 18:43

Thanks you for the likes, Hugh, A Girl, Aviva, Dean, Holden and Stephen A, Thank you for your kind comment.

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 6th Mar 2021 18:31

Thanks for the comments Nigel,
A.G. it only knibbled on the fat I've put on since lockdown, so, not too bad.☺️
Thank you Aviva?
And Jennifer, I only know simple language ?
(&, er...it's the mushrooms, as per my earlier poem, Strange Old Day ? say nothing)

And thanks for all the Likes everyone! ??

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 6th Mar 2021 18:18

Lovely stuff Julie. ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 6th Mar 2021 18:16

Triggers the imagination beautifully. Great stuff!

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 6th Mar 2021 18:08

If only the programme was as good as your poem...

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:51

Disquieting and intriguing! At least the perpretator felt it was worth it!
Jennifer























At least

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:25

Decidedly spooky! Very cleverly writtten in simple language with 'creeping, crawling, breathing, touching' used very effectively. (Between you and me, perhaps the stuff you're being sold isn't best Afghan?)
Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:20

Absolutely! My life has shrunk like an old jersey, and has holes in it too.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:14

Hope this isn't autobiographical? Presumably if it was, and you had had an ending amid plastic, you wouldn't have been able to produce this. Would think that unfortunately this is very well described.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:11

Lighthearted, but very well written, (in my humble opinion!) Sounds decidedly familiar too! Loved 'scrolled as wayward history, scars and might have beens, in the dank vault lurks fear.' To read several times.

jennifer

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John Coopey

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:10

Thanks, MC. I recollect watching an guy at Doncaster Racecourse selling sealed packets. His sales pitch was awesome. He drew in a crowd with seductive Irish brogue “proving” his provenance, supplemented with photos purporting to show him leading out Derby winners, in the company of trainers and stood alongside jockeys.
He did a roaring trade selling these packets which, he said, contained the name of his tip for the next race. His guarantee was that, in the unlikely event it didn’t win, he would give another ticket for free. The punters couldn’t wait to part with their money.
It was all about the telling.
Absolutely brilliant.
Jennifer - as we’re frequently told, if it’s too good to be true, it isn’t!

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:07

Nice stories! The important thing is to be able to laugh about it afterwards. My husband is usually excessively diffident, but once he bought a 'gold' bracelet from a shady character in a motorway carpark. Luckily at a very low cost! Served him right anyway, as it would have been stolen if genuine!!!!

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 16:59

Liked the soothsayer who never soothes! I live with someone for whom the first could have been written! Unusual. Jennifer

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 6th Mar 2021 16:46

Thank you for your comment Nigel ?

Thank you also to all those who have clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Mar 2021 15:23

A security guard doing security. A "guardian" making news in The Guardian. What next?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Mar 2021 15:20

A stimulating theme with a wide range. However, I'm not sure that silence per se has ever existed on this Earth.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Mar 2021 15:12

JC - you can still find Smiths pocket watches sold on Ebay. Actually,
they acquired a certain "name" and were not necessarily the "here
today, gone tomorrow" cheapo that the brand seemed to mean for many folk.
As for your second example, I'm reminded of a certain well-known
racehorse trainer of yesteyear from up north who actually got into
print in a racing 'paper of the day boasting how he used to sell
fruit and mix crab apples with the rest selling eating apples to the
public. It used to be called "sharp practice" in my day and I made
a note of avoiding any possibility of backing any horse in his charge.
But I guess we all get "had over" at various stages of life...commonly placed under the collective heading termed "experience". ?

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Your Royal Poetess

Sat 6th Mar 2021 13:59

Rest in peace Christopher Wallace and Robert Nesta Marley ?

Song: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=M72qgmGhhzY

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Nigel Astell

Sat 6th Mar 2021 12:36

Your spark returns
when springtime wakes
up your soul.

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Sat 6th Mar 2021 10:06

As I understand it, Sylvia Plath herself was not local to Heptonstall, Hughes having bought his house at Lumb Bank after their separation.

Presumably, that precedent would have made this woman's request difficult to refuse anyhow.

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Sat 6th Mar 2021 09:31

wow! feeling the fire here!

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Sat 6th Mar 2021 09:23

lol. i think i saw this movie ?

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John Coopey

Sat 6th Mar 2021 07:27

Thanks, Tim. “Rumours of my demise have been greatly exaggerated”.

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julie callaghan

Sat 6th Mar 2021 07:05

Carry On Doctor! ?

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Nigel Astell

Sat 6th Mar 2021 01:02

Windswept sands of time
tide is turning
footsteps once lost are found.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 6th Mar 2021 00:43

Spooky and Amusing at the same time.

Comment is about Something's Creeping... (blog)

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 6th Mar 2021 00:29

Thank you Stephen for your comment, appreciated.

Thank you also Nigel for commenting, I'm sure we can share the same train of thought many times, especially through poetry.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Sat 6th Mar 2021 00:20

I like this.?

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 6th Mar 2021 00:04

Thank you very much, Brian ?

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A Girl

Fri 5th Mar 2021 23:45

Great fun! Especially reading it in the middle of the night...

Ps. Did it eat you?

AG

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Brian Hodgkinson

Fri 5th Mar 2021 23:40

Of course, I love the word 'propitiation' -- and I think it is a spot on.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Fri 5th Mar 2021 23:31

I liked this very much. I'm of the opinion that a true believer is your best bet to reach the summit with. Not a Dr Pangloss who pretends the journey is a sinch.

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 5th Mar 2021 22:57

Definitely nothing...or was it something... ?

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Tim Ellis

Fri 5th Mar 2021 21:50

Yes!

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Tim Ellis

Fri 5th Mar 2021 21:46

Good to see you’re still on form, John.

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Tim Ellis

Fri 5th Mar 2021 21:33

This councillor must have redefined the word “socialist”, M.C. You have some odd friends!

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Nigel Astell

Fri 5th Mar 2021 20:36

Something or nothing

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Nigel Astell

Fri 5th Mar 2021 20:21

Can I book a seat
on your train of thought.

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John Coopey

Fri 5th Mar 2021 20:07

Thanks, Stephen. And to Aviva, Stephen A and Nazis for the Likes.

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A Girl

Fri 5th Mar 2021 19:30

Nice twist!

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Holden Moncrieff

Fri 5th Mar 2021 19:14

He just might ?

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Emer Ni Chorra

Fri 5th Mar 2021 18:33

It sure is, Aviva?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 5th Mar 2021 18:23

They got better value and material appreciation from Capt. Sir Tom!!
This brings to mind a certain local socialist councillor - a customer in a pub I used - who held the view that nursing was a "vocation" and should not expect to be rewarded in any real sense of the word.
Clearly, that view is still held among the politicos...to their ongoing
shame.

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Alaia vibes

Fri 5th Mar 2021 18:16

Thank you so much!

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 5th Mar 2021 17:59

Or wears the helmet, or apparently doesn't.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 5th Mar 2021 17:50

I'll give it foive, a someone once said on Juke Box Jury (Juke Box Jury?!).

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 5th Mar 2021 17:47

Yes, "do the math" has never been more appropriate. Or fruitless.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 5th Mar 2021 17:43

I'll remember to avoid the nihilist. Will a fatalist do?

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 5th Mar 2021 17:36

Very enjoyable poem.

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