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Tue 4th Aug 2020 03:10

Feeling it more and more each day! Great poem!

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keith jeffries

Tue 4th Aug 2020 00:44

Emeka,
You are to some extent right. Those who are aware would rather look the other way. They are afraid to confront issues. They live in comfort zones. The time is fast approaching when we shall need the courage to stand up for what we know to be right. If not we regress into repeating past horrors and mistakes. It certainly feels like an asylum.
Thanks for your comment. It is much appreciated.
Keith

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Emeka Collins

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 23:56

This conversation, I have it daily with my self. The words differ but the meaning same.

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Philipos

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 23:46

Jennifer am quite moved by this poem as it bespeaks of much lingering hurt, if it is in fact reality, as I suspect it might be.

Platitudes would seem inappropriate - not becoming a repeat victim might be if you know somebody in that position.

My blessings to whoever it is, and thank you for sharing this poem.

Love can be very painful for some, emotionally and/or physically.

P. ?

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Emeka Collins

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 23:40

Poets as I was told are prophetic in nature. I just hope we don't do this again.

Great poem. You have a way of speaking to the core fabrics of our existence as humans.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 23:37

Thanks Brian and Emeka for the likes and comments.

Jennifer

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Emeka Collins

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 23:36

Keith, the world is really an asylum now ...it gets madder each day. The masses like you said are unaware.

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Mon 3rd Aug 2020 23:32

Don't blame it on the moonlight

(M.Jackson)

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Emeka Collins

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 23:30

Jennifer Malden, you did great work here.

It is heartbreaking to find out that love proclamation are sugar-coated lies.

Love is truly beyond words but can't do without it.

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Emeka Collins

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 23:18

Thanks you so much Keith.

Loving someone is like learning how to cook soup, we always want to cook it better when next we try again.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 23:05

So well expressed! Great poem.

Jennifer

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keith jeffries

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 23:04

Emeka,

This is a beautifully crafted poem one which reminds me of the Chilean Poet Pablo Neruda, who was famous for his love poems.

Very well written and with feeling.
Keith

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jennifer Malden

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 23:01


Liked the spirit of this one! The kneebenders, if their knees are anything like mine, Brian, are more likely to be split!!! Great work for the orthopaedic surgeons, anyway.

Jennifer


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jennifer Malden

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 22:57

Help! Terrifying because so much of it is true, but beautifully writtten without a superfluous word, every one counts.

Jennifer

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John Marks

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 22:50

Yes You hit the right note Cathy - the physicality of music, rocks you, the spirituality of music, rocks you. Classical, Jazz, Rock, Country, Indie, Folk. All genres and styles.

Charlie Mingus, jazz composer and bassist, said: "Making the simple complicated is commonplace; making the complicated simple, awesomely simple — that's creativity."

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Abdul Ahmad

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 22:37

Philipos thank you for your continued support and sending a like.

Emeka thank you for striking the like.

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Philipos

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 22:01

Cliff hanger waiting to unfold. P.

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DESMOND CHILDS

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 19:57

Thank you Shifa and Chinwendu for your comments, much appreciated.


All the best des

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Mon 3rd Aug 2020 19:51

I'm hoping it will fade away in time...but baby showers and Haloween haven't so maybe it will be another thing to divide us a la Brexit. We'll be split between knee benders and non-knee benders.

Knee pad manufacturers - ramp up production!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 16:07

I understand that his concern was the increase in postal voting - a
system that has been abused and which needs the strongest
supervision to ensure that is not likely to happen there later this
year. As a politician he is, I suspect, making a point to score points.

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Ken Evans

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 15:06

Great idea, happy to be with it!

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 13:09

Great Central Railway, Greg. Although I believe it is currently being refurbished once again.

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keith jeffries

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 11:23

Zhar,

A poem which expresses the power of optimism and positive thought.
Thank you for this

Keith

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Greg Freeman

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 10:52

Always glad to hear of a salvaged steam locomotive, Dean. Like a true trainspotter I am thirsty for facts - where is it running now, please?

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Abdul Ahmad

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 09:29

Shifa
This is simply amongst the best.

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Chinwendu C.E Rays

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 09:18

Gracious varieties will always adapt in the nature of beast!
If only there is tendeny to conquer the grave!

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julie callaghan

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 07:54

Thank you Shifa.

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Shifa Maqba

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 07:17

D.W. Hamilton & Aj, your roses are deeply cherished!

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Shifa Maqba

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 07:14

There's so much tenderness and grace in this poem. Love it!

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Shifa Maqba

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 07:10

Intriguing imagery! The entire poem, in fact, exudes mystique. This is what art should look like.

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Shifa Maqba

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 06:51

There is so much magnificence in this concise piece of poetry!

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Shifa Maqba

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 06:46

Thank you so much, Philipos, Po and Leon, for your generous roses and comments. Couldn't thank y'all enough for your continued encouragement and support!

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kimberly

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 06:30

Thanks, Paul, for the comment.

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kimberly

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 06:30

Thank you, Paul. I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to read and leaving such a kind comment.

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d.knape

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 01:43

don't mind getting wet.
it washes away bad poetry.

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<Deleted User> (17847)

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 23:20

What a terrible waste of life and outstanding talent.

The Bell Jar like all of her work is truly magnificent. She has left a wonderful, wonderful mark on this world.

God bless her.

Another outstanding poem Shifa-thank you.


L.S.

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<Deleted User> (17847)

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 23:13

The repetition goes on and on of so many being pushed around by so few.

And how devious those few are!

Great poem Keith-thank you.


L.S.

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julie callaghan

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 22:14

Thank you Emeka

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Philipos

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 21:24

Aw bless - love it. P. ?

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Emeka Collins

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 21:08

Such a beautiful piece

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julie callaghan

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 20:34

After watching war horse this afternoon maybe I should re title

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julie callaghan

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 20:33

Thanks for the likes

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keith jeffries

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 20:18

Aditya,

An excellent poem to remind us of who the real angels are.
Thanks for this

Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 18:45

Reminds me of those old deep South blues numbers - sung by some
guy on his porch while his kin look on.

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Shifa Maqba

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 18:37

Dazzling! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 18:36

Ho-ho. I hope you're getting a collection for a book, Hugh.
Like a failing business life makes you wonder
At what you pay before going under! ??

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Aditya Raj

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 18:31

Thank you Danielle ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 18:31

Pastoral and pleasing. I can see the scene in my mind's eye as I
(mentally) hurry indoors.

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Shifa Maqba

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 18:28

Thank you, Leon! Really glad that you enjoyed this piece. ?

Thank you, Stephen, for hitting a like!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 2nd Aug 2020 17:54

I thought that there was also a character called Hedges, which would have been good, but it turns out to be Hodges. Can't win 'em all.

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