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Stephen Gospage

Fri 5th Mar 2021 17:28

"Hand-servants" is a lovely description.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Mar 2021 17:27

The coke bottle
will reincarnate
as a plastic plate
and after soon
will be a spoon
and maybe then
a biro pen
till fates allot
it who knows what.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Mar 2021 17:17

Thank you for your comment Your Royal Poetess. Fighting!

They steal happiness
as if they think it is the
only one i've got.

They run off with it
only showing the sad fact
they can't grow their own.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Mar 2021 17:05

Thank you for your comment Your Royal Poetess and that is a great concept, a beautiful thought. ?

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Your Royal Poetess

Fri 5th Mar 2021 16:55

Don’t let the world change your smile, allow your smile to change the world ☺️

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Your Royal Poetess

Fri 5th Mar 2021 16:54

Fight for your happiness ??

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Fri 5th Mar 2021 16:12

Ha. I love cats

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 5th Mar 2021 15:42

It does seem true that our will to act can vary according to time and
circumstance. Heroism - like cowardice - can be a sometime thing.
There can often be that silent insistence
That leads to the path of least resistance. ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Mar 2021 15:30

Thank you Kevin for your comment, and yes, that is right.
Waiting for the poetic train of thought.

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Fri 5th Mar 2021 15:28

Perhaps you yourself are the vehicle to take you there ?

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Fri 5th Mar 2021 15:25

That is what pesticide does to us

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Fri 5th Mar 2021 15:21

your presence here makes my world a little better. Take care

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Mar 2021 15:20

Thank you for your comments A Girl and Keith. I am really glad that you each enjoyed the poem and took time to comment about it. ?

Thank you also to everyone who clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Mar 2021 15:15

She of little memory thinks this might be your finest piece...

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 5th Mar 2021 15:02

Hah - nice one!

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keith jeffries

Fri 5th Mar 2021 10:34

This is one of those poems in which the writer successfully takes the reader into the scenario described. I well remember the days of steam, carriages with corridors and compartments, large waiting rooms with open fires, whistles being blown and the great gusts of steam as trains arrived and departed. Train journeys have no comparison to other forms of travel. A poem well written.
Thank you for this

Keith

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A Girl

Fri 5th Mar 2021 09:21

Nicely penned. I really enjoyed this.

AG

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Darren Lea-grime

Fri 5th Mar 2021 08:01

thanks for you kind comment nazia

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Kristian Deidre Brown

Fri 5th Mar 2021 07:48

Beautiful and ethereal. Thank you!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Mar 2021 07:42

Thank you for commenting Nigel. ?

Thanks also to those who have clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Mar 2021 07:28

Thank you to Nazia Khan and Holden Moncrieff for the likes.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Mar 2021 07:26

Thank you for your comment Nigel, I agree with that. ?

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Nigel Astell

Fri 5th Mar 2021 01:17

After a lifetime of collecting
we forget to leave a space for ourselves.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 5th Mar 2021 01:12

You have won the war
when happiness comes
without having to battle.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 5th Mar 2021 00:47

Thanks for your likes
Aviva
Stephen A
Julie
Holden
and
Stephen G.

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A Girl

Thu 4th Mar 2021 22:47

So just keep breathing and try to love yourself.

Music to my ears.

AG

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 4th Mar 2021 20:21

Superb! ?

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julie callaghan

Thu 4th Mar 2021 19:03

Thanks for the likes folks.

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Nazia Khan

Thu 4th Mar 2021 13:27

Heavenly ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 4th Mar 2021 12:24

I wake like that but it is not bitter, it is sweet. Sweet freedom.
it is salted caramel, it is lemon sherbet, it is fangtastic sours.
it is pancakes with lemon and sugar.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 4th Mar 2021 11:42

I like pheasant plucking cause pheasant plucking is fun
that is before it runs off!

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Nigel Astell

Thu 4th Mar 2021 11:33

Yourself must not
let the bitter taste of one
spoil the taste of another.

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Deb

Thu 4th Mar 2021 10:50

Love it, Nigel

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Deb

Thu 4th Mar 2021 10:47

Thank you Nigel for stopping by and reading my poem

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Thu 4th Mar 2021 10:47

You might consider this comment to be late, or perhaps just very carefully considered. I felt moved to add it after re-reading this interview.
Mission statements are oft well-meaning but can sound trite. I am thoroughly heartened to realise that Neil's (and everyone else's) perception of his success is to have brought more readers to (or back to) poetry, which we (Write Out Loud) have had as our mission statement - required for our 2015 application to become a Community Interest Company - and, as recent feedback testifies, have done exactly that.
Neil's critics worried that he had opened the gates to the barbarians. For the first years of our existence, we were accused of dumbing-down poetry, when in actual fact what Neil has achieved, and we have sought, is to help reduce the numbers of people ignoring most poetry, and increase access to the poetry that does not ignore most of us; to misquote Adrian Mitchell.
Thank you, Neil. Thank you, Greg.

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Nazia Khan

Thu 4th Mar 2021 09:08

?? ???

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Your Royal Poetess

Thu 4th Mar 2021 08:58

Artwork by: Michelangelo Buonarroti ?

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Hugh

Thu 4th Mar 2021 07:09

A beautiful poetic plant, planted by you. Trees are the lungs of our future.

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Hugh

Thu 4th Mar 2021 06:54

The virus is a maths destruction, I've nothing more to add.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Thu 4th Mar 2021 04:25

Thanks, GIrl, for your comment and kudos. I am glad you like it.

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 22:31

Thanks for the smilies, a girl ?

And, Julie, yes it was nice to see a bit sun for a change. It's as misty as my brain now though ?

Kevin, hope you're not laughing at my poem, it has hidden meanings regarding conservation of the planet & the eco syst... Aw, no it's just about a bird having a poo ?

And thanks for the Likes!

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jennifer Malden

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 22:22

Our ever present lack of satisfaction so well described. Better and better!

Jennnifer

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A Girl

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 21:22

It’s like the instruction on how to write a great poem.

Made me feel.

AG

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Nazia Khan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 21:16

Beautifully written ??? I love rain and your poem smells like drenched soil. ???

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Nazia Khan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 21:13

Writing is my only redemption ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 20:35

Yay, I'm in a band! I'll contribute intermittent footstep and paraphernalia percussion.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 20:23

Thank you, Kevin, yes, I agree.?

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 20:09

perhaps that moment is not so far away

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Nicholas

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 19:55

I have to be honest and admit I was adopting a particular persona, but there is also an element within me that empathises with the sentiments of that persona. I should also add that I can't wait for warm days sitting outside a country pub, enjoying a pint or tw

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 19:54

LOL it's cracking me up!

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