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Wed 10th Feb 2021 12:42

Lovely xx

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Wed 10th Feb 2021 12:41

We all feel like this xx

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keith jeffries

Wed 10th Feb 2021 12:19

Well described with the final stanza being a thought which most people dread. Good poem
Thanks
Keith

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Greg Freeman

Wed 10th Feb 2021 11:40

Thanks, Graham. It has to be said that probably due to my age I do well up in odd places - so to speak - more often these days. Last time it happened was at the barber's - my first haircut in months - last summer. At the same time I seem to have developed a condition during lockdown called Dry Eyes. All very weird.

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d.knape

Wed 10th Feb 2021 11:37

Philistines! Exactly!
Can't believe they would actually INCREASE
the advertisements instead of reducing them.
No peace for you.
Write more poetry!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 10th Feb 2021 10:46

This is a nicely angled write Greg. There's a slightly dystopian edge in there somewhere, with hope blended in too. I'm left feeling sad that many are thinking 'that's it' after getting the jab, not realising that nothing changes, the problem hasn't gone away. I also feel that we MUST all invest more of our resources to increase funding of the NHS. We need a Greta!

Good work.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 10th Feb 2021 10:08

Thanks for the Likes, D Joshi, Holden, Aviva, Aisha, and Julie!

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keith jeffries

Wed 10th Feb 2021 09:57

Julie,

You are fast becoming a sage. Your poem speaks of the present and its consequences for the future, a future which is to some large extent a mystery.
Thanks
Keith

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keith jeffries

Wed 10th Feb 2021 09:54

Brian,

Your strong emotional attachment to Kenya is something often felt by those of us who have lived and worked in other parts of the world. Such an experience is an education in itself. I lived in the deserts of Oman for ten years and even longer in Spain with a few years in the Caribbean. It is hard to settle back here as a part of us yearns to be back in to those places much loved and cherished. I too learned Arabic and Spanish and entered fully into the life of the world about me at the time.

Your poem touches the nerve ends of my soul as I too recall such incredible vistas and some of the best people I have ever had the joy of knowing.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Brian Hodgkinson

Wed 10th Feb 2021 06:44

This one is like a time machine for me. I cannot help but get choked up with longing for those wonderful times we enjoyed there. How rich we were, and are, because of the experience of Kenya, East Africa. We spent fourteen years there -- not back and forth -- no. We lived there, learned the language, culture, food, and received and gave love from the marvelous Luyia people of western Kenya. I hope to visit there again one day before I meet our Maker.

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julie callaghan

Wed 10th Feb 2021 06:36

Just beautiful, such a lovely read. Thank you.

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d.knape

Wed 10th Feb 2021 03:37

if that is the future,
count me out
I'll go back to the past
where it's safer.
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Jordyn Elizabeth

Wed 10th Feb 2021 01:12

I loved this piece ? So beautiful!

-J

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D Joshi

Tue 9th Feb 2021 23:11

This is so beautiful to read. Made me smile ?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 9th Feb 2021 23:03

Yes, I was sitting there reading it. I know mango, papaya, guava, so well because I once lived in that timezone too.

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 23:02

A contented man. A good poem. Makes us appreciate what we have.

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Keith

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Erika Montoya

Tue 9th Feb 2021 22:52

So nice poem!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 9th Feb 2021 22:35

Thank you to everyone who clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

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<Deleted User> (13740)

Tue 9th Feb 2021 22:04

Yes. I often leave when it gets like this. Sometimes leaving is the only option xx a lovely poem

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 21:46

Aisha,

This poem could easily be the power house of my soul, a place where one treats oneself to the exclusion of all else. Moments of solitude and self indulgence. Ten minutes! Aisha surely you can extend this.

Loved every word and thank you for this poem.
Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 21:41

This poem has a sacred quality to it especially when I read the words of the third stanza as it brings to life the house focusing as if on the epicentre of a real home. The smells and the noises, those aspects which bring a place to life and identify those who live there. My grandmother´s home evokes the same memories for me. A poem with nostalgia and real meaning.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Erika Montoya

Tue 9th Feb 2021 21:30

Beautiful poem, you described so well the feeling

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New Shoes

Tue 9th Feb 2021 21:10

Surveillance, and targeted advertising " The wave of the future, the future, the future, the wave of the future"

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 20:56

This is one of those poems where the poet has the ability to take the reader to the scene described with so little effort. Before I finished reading this poem I was already there.

Thank you
Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 20:54

The cry of humanity, a goal waiting to be achieved since time immemorial but always out of reach. Yet strive we must because there is no viable alternative to humanity´s existence. To love and accept people......surely this can´t be too much of a challenge.

Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 20:50

Many love poems have been written down the centuries but those which come from the heart always stand out from the rest and this is one of them.

Thank you for this
Keith

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D Joshi

Tue 9th Feb 2021 20:10

Wise words and something we should all take on board. ?

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Abdul Ahmad

Tue 9th Feb 2021 20:08

Shifa appreciate your generous comments and shall cherish the like. Thank you for your continued support.

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Chinwendu C.E Rays

Tue 9th Feb 2021 19:28

Great write up Crystals

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Dawn

Tue 9th Feb 2021 18:41

I really like this. opened up a bit of soul

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Dawn

Tue 9th Feb 2021 18:40

Powerful. An abandon lover's song.

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jennifer Malden

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:25

Nice one! Didn't know about G O's name being Eric Blair.
Jennifer

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:18

Thanks Stephen and I have now seen your Essex poem as commented upon. Sorry for the delay.

Ray

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:17

I'm coming back to you Jennifer . Embarrassingly late - I seem to lost the link with WOL reminders. Fascinating school games and pursuits. I do remember fortunes, mainly a girl's option. We used to collect milkbottle tops and wire them together then donate them to some long forgotten charity.

Ray

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:14

Another comment missed sorry Jennifer. Thanks for the idea.

Ray

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:12

So sorry folks to have missed your comments and likes - glitch on my phone perhaps. I think the link from WOL has ceased that shows me updates. Anyway, thanks Martin; yes you're right.

Thank you James glad you liked it.

and for the likes Tony, Kevin, Brian Jordyn and Stephen.

Ray

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:07

Thanks Jennifer. You describe it well !

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:06

Nearly missed you Jennifer sorry. Yes, it's a bit like entering a maze and going round and round. Thanks for your trouble!

Ray

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:03

Sorry Greg I missed your icing on the cake comment! I nearly gave up after that, but thanks to zoom all is well.

Ray

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:01

Sorry for the delay - I thought it had vaporized.

Thanks Stephen and Lisa for looking in.

Thanks Brian - the answer is that George Orwell's real name was Eric Blair , nor relation of Tony. Although history will remember Tony Eric was more left wing than him.

Stephen, as you say we are watched but mainly by those with commercial interests, paying reduced taxes . If Orwell could see the TV reality series he would probably turn in his grave.

Ray

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<Deleted User> (17799)

Tue 9th Feb 2021 16:58

Very relatable.

I often try to make my “outlook” “be bright” on my birthday despite not looking forward to celebrating.

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 9th Feb 2021 16:46

Yes. It's a while since I wrote any, but I might have to have a little surge...

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 16:45

A good and well rhymed poem which portrays a dark period in our history. I particularly enjoyed the pen ultimate stanza.

Thank you for this

Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 16:40

Ray,
A poem which restores those images stored in some cerebral cavity which lets us see ourselves as we once were. My memories are of a motorbike and sidecar, caravan parks, paddling in rock pools and eating packed lunches. Halcyon days indeed of which the present generation know little of.

Thank you for this trip down memory lane.
Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Feb 2021 15:16

Trevor - addictive...don't you think? ?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Feb 2021 15:07

My sister over in Brussels would certainly enjoy this and identify with
its sentiment. She''s just mentioned her balcony plants bravely
ensuring colour in the present -10c temperature there.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Feb 2021 15:02

Same here in the UK.. The official agency responsible actually gave
permission for ad. breaks to be increased - as if intent on annoying
us some more! And the change in YouTube has seen its videos
constantly interrupted on an increasingly irritating scale....most
moronic in those experienced in classical music videos when a
work is interrupted even as it draws to a close. Philistines!! ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 9th Feb 2021 13:54

This is very eloquent and seems to capture the mood so well that I wish it would progress to resolve the state reached (and become a meditative poem).

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curiousdud3

Tue 9th Feb 2021 13:25

Hey Nicola, I'm ok..... think my head just went down a darker path than usual. I'm back in the light...... Thanks for checking ❤️ xx

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julie callaghan

Tue 9th Feb 2021 13:03

Thanks Aviva and D Joshi.

Maybe I should have done a before and after the sun came out. I am sure I will be able to take a photo with a cloudy grey backdrop soon.

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