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A Reflection

 

The man in the mirror

No longer looks like me

His best years are behind him

There's nothing more to see 

His daughter is a woman

With family of her own

The years now seem to fade away

Into the bleak unknown

Although I'll keep on dreamin'

Of better things to come

Sometimes I feel like runnin' free

Into the rising sun

A slither of a silhouette 

Against a sea of gold

Off to seek those youthful dreams 

Still nestled in my soul

 

But there's a smile that lights the room

A hand that fits in mine

I know, will always be there

'til the end of our time

 

There's a roof above our heads

And food upon our table

And friends & family visit

Whenever they are able

 

Laughter still frequents the air

Hugs and kisses reign

My daughter's smile still lifts me up

With a love I can't explain

 

So as I watch the sunrise

I no longer want to flee

For all I have, is all I am

And all I am is me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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The Unsettled Man ►

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 11th Feb 2021 18:03

Thank you for the additional likes & comments Brian, Vautaw & Nicola & for the Like Luis Francisco Hernandez Martin (that's a great name, by the way!)

Nicola Beckett

Thu 11th Feb 2021 03:27

Beautiful x

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 11th Feb 2021 01:20

Beautiful poem Stephen. ❤️

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Brian Hodgkinson

Wed 10th Feb 2021 20:47

Great work, Stephen, expressing your perception of life's journey. Yes, you have said it very well.

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 10th Feb 2021 20:15

Thank you Julie, Jordyn, D.J. Keith, & Erika for the lovely comments & Likes. And Hugh, Binte, Stephen, J.D., Holden, & Aviva for reading & tapping the Like button!
I wrote it just the other night, whilst sitting feeling sorry for myself after a crappy day. And then my daughter did the magic facetime thing & it took a different direction!
Thanks again to all ?

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julie callaghan

Wed 10th Feb 2021 06:36

Just beautiful, such a lovely read. Thank you.

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Wed 10th Feb 2021 01:12

I loved this piece ? So beautiful!

-J

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D Joshi

Tue 9th Feb 2021 23:11

This is so beautiful to read. Made me smile ?

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 23:02

A contented man. A good poem. Makes us appreciate what we have.

Thanks
Keith

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Erika Montoya

Tue 9th Feb 2021 22:52

So nice poem!

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