NO ESCAPE

I built my walls of words

constructed some ideas,

multi layered with gravitas

defining weight with leaden wings

that could have flown if I had known

the sky instead of earth alone. 

 

The weight of words that filled my head

could never turn these walls to spires

and so I made myself a prison open to the sky

and never found the way to climb,

no, not such as I. 

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:12

So sorry folks to have missed your comments and likes - glitch on my phone perhaps. I think the link from WOL has ceased that shows me updates. Anyway, thanks Martin; yes you're right.

Thank you James glad you liked it.

and for the likes Tony, Kevin, Brian Jordyn and Stephen.

Ray

James

Sat 2nd Jan 2021 19:54

Deep stuff. Nice.

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Martin Elder

Fri 1st Jan 2021 18:33

Excellent stuff Ray. there are times that we can be both enthused and weighed down by the words that we write.

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