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A Rude Awakening

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 Slumping tweedcapped on his bench

gnarled mottled hands on walkingstick,

far off she wandered, swaying slightly.

Lithe and lovely with slim brown thighs

tantalisingly appearing disappearing

from slits in a flowery gipsy dress,

a cascade of breezeblown dark hair.

 

He saw a gracious gust remove the dress,

another the tiny lacy things, and then a vision!

She came to him open for everything

all of her available for his delight.

 

Suddenly his head dropped brusquely forward

and his eyes opened, seeing her now gone.

A little disappointed, but damply gratified,

serenely he nodded off again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

◄ Deep Dark Eyes

Down to earth ►

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jennifer Malden

Thu 11th Feb 2021 09:25

Thanks to Abdul, Stephen, Aisha and Holden for the likes, and Ray and Dawn for the comments. glad you found something in it. Great to hear from you again, Ray!
Jennifer

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raypool

Wed 10th Feb 2021 22:30

A very sensual episode mixed with a little fantasy perhaps, and ultimately a lifting of the spirits. Thanks, a lovely read Jennifer.

Ray

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Dawn

Tue 9th Feb 2021 18:41

I really like this. opened up a bit of soul

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