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John Marks

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 18:53

Yes Keith you can and you have! Islam /ˈɪslɑːm/ Arabic: اَلْإِسْلَامُ‎ does not mean 'peace' it means 'complete submission', 'total surrender'.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 18:51

Thanks very much for the comment, Laura, appreciated. And Glad you enjoyed the torture ☺️
And thanks for the like Mr Hobo. ?

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Telboy

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 18:50

Difficult period of office with Brexit, Covid, Afghan. And for all their faults they are more popular with the public as a whole than Labour still under Corbyn's shadow.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 18:47

Just as well we've got hyperbolics, Laura, seems as though they've severed every penis! ?
Good one

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John Coopey

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 17:30

Thanks, Stephen. It owes a lot to Conn Iggledun who has one of his characters say something much the similar in one of his Chingis Khan books.
And thanks for the Likes, Stephen A, Holden and Pete.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 17:17

A profound last line, John.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 17:14

A gem of a poem. Thanks.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 17:11

And thanks to Jennifer for the like.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 17:09

And thanks to New Shoes for liking as well.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 17:07

My pleasure. Shooting Star was great.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 17:06

Captain's log, star date......

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 17:02

Thanks to John, Tom, Stephen A., Holden and Pete for liking this poem and to M.C. for the very kind comments.

Needless to say, the poem was about no one in particular but concerned someone in general. Who that someone is I don't know and perhaps don't really want to, for fear that it would spoil the illusion (or delusion?).

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 13:27

Having moved many times In my younger days, I saw each new place as an acquaintance; some dearer to me than others. The
essence of what a home can mean if known for long enough to
engender real affection is well caught here.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 13:10

An engaging pen-portrait of an all-too believable scenario.
I think the last line is perfect to end this literary "visit".

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 13:00

To each his own. In my 78th year, I take a more sanguine view of
life and embrace its sensible companion in later years - adaptability. ?

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Laura Taylor

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 12:18

Hahaa! Great original piece, love it!

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Tom

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 10:04

This is beautiful Mike.

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keith jeffries

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 09:45

A deeply moving poem in which a life is exposed. Despite suffering beauty is also present in a form of its own.

Thank you for this

Keith

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keith jeffries

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 09:41

John,
Thank you for this solemn lament which conjures up such tragedy. I often meditate on the fate of Byzantium and question the efficacy of an Inter Faith Dialogue. Dare I say this?
Thank you

Keith

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d.knape

Thu 2nd Sep 2021 03:33

If you wish to leave a comment
you must log in-
If you just want to sleep
bring several logs to saw!
?

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 1st Sep 2021 22:55

Nothing like a poet getting eaten to cheer us up Julie ?. Glad you liked it

And Stephen, don't look behind you. The better the poet, the hungrier it gets...

And thanks for the likes Aisha, John & Holden . Munch munch

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John Marks

Wed 1st Sep 2021 22:15



Happy is the man who has broken the chains which hurt the mind, and has given up worrying once and for all.
Be patient and tough; one day this pain will be useful to you.

Ovid, Metamorphoses

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 1st Sep 2021 17:22

Grim but good.

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julie callaghan

Wed 1st Sep 2021 17:21

Yes I agree Stephen G. Couldn’t fit meteorological into the line? and you are correct, i will soon be writing about the beautiful autumn colours. Thank you.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 1st Sep 2021 17:20

Wow! I get worried by a doormouse. No hope for me!

Good one.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 1st Sep 2021 17:16

This is lovely. Best wishes to you

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 1st Sep 2021 17:14

I prefer to think of 21st September as the start of autumn, Julie. This can be a great month for weather and then there are the lovely colours of autumn leaves to look forward to. So things can only get better.

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julie callaghan

Wed 1st Sep 2021 13:41

Thank you MC, I’ll give it a go. Thank you Stephen A. Hoping for a brighter write tomorrow ?. The kettle is on.
Thanks for the likes.

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julie callaghan

Wed 1st Sep 2021 13:38

Oh no, please tell me it isn’t so!! I’m in mourning?
Thank you, cheered me right up?

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 1st Sep 2021 13:17

Title: The Fire Within...?
Nice poem

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 1st Sep 2021 13:15

We all tend to feel a little down, when leaves turn brown, Julie. But there'll always be brighter days! Nice cuppa tea & a sneaky bit cake ?

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 1st Sep 2021 12:31

HRH is in the awkward position of combining his own very
public opinions about matters that affect the world at large with
his awareness of his future as King and the remoteness that comes with that role. He seems to do a pretty good job of
performing that balancing act with so many obligations and
expectations to meet and satisfy.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 1st Sep 2021 12:22

Try to remain optimistic as the year turns. Read Binyon's "The Burning of the Leaves". It's a wonderful antidote for any "down"
feelings.around this time. As for me, I merely say -
Let us help refuel
Nature's renewal! ?

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julie callaghan

Wed 1st Sep 2021 07:45

Thanks for the like Stephen A

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Dreamer

Wed 1st Sep 2021 03:00

This is beautiful. I wish it was longer!!

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Dreamer

Wed 1st Sep 2021 02:55

I love this. Beautifully written!?

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Nigel Astell

Wed 1st Sep 2021 00:38

Cheers Andy
I know the American Pie film you mean
will keep it in mind for another poem x rated of course!

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 31st Aug 2021 22:41

Thank you Stephen, for your comment on A Shooting Star, I was aiming for a children's poem that adults may also appreciate, so much appreciated as always!

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 31st Aug 2021 15:02

Good piece Greg. What a shame he couldn't have gone to the PL's shed. It would have made him more real. Why do royalty always keep the world at arms length?

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Tom

Tue 31st Aug 2021 11:52

Beautiful and heartbreaking.

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John Coopey

Tue 31st Aug 2021 11:33

That was God’s fault, Kevin, not mine.

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Robert Neest

Tue 31st Aug 2021 10:21

I think the simple things give people strength to follow their higher aspirations.

Thank you, Willow

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kJ Walker

Tue 31st Aug 2021 08:30

Was this before the Sky helicopter filmed you sat in your flooded garden?

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New Shoes

Tue 31st Aug 2021 07:44

"The thinking is the doing" some Philosopher whose name I won't attempt to spell.

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New Shoes

Tue 31st Aug 2021 07:06

Find pleasure in the simple things and we won't be let down.

Thanks for the poem!

Willow

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John Coopey

Mon 30th Aug 2021 22:09

I think “bradawl” has spawned the wonderfully onomatopoeic Yorkshire verb “to broddle”, Stephen. As in “the doctor broddled up my ….” (You get the picture).

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 30th Aug 2021 21:45

So many wonderful images and ideas. Enjoyed this.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 30th Aug 2021 21:39

Thank you for liking this, Brenda.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 30th Aug 2021 21:35

Bradawl is such a good word, and now I know how to spell it! Isn't there a plumber in Under Milk Wood - Jones the cheque, perhaps?

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th Aug 2021 21:30

I am going to go a step further and say this poem is extraordinary and exceptional. A good piece of imaginative writing.
Keith

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