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Greg Freeman

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 15:57

You're right, Laura. I don't suppose the Ukrainians have much time for mindfulness at the moment. You cover a lot of ground in this poem. Well done!

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Rainy Kar

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 15:55

Part 1: The one from where everything starts. The curiosity, strong urge to look into the other world, to find happiness, a journey to love yourself...The journey to the unknown yet desirable destination...

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Rainy Kar

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 15:55

Part 2: The one where you step into a new world of temptations and addiction, which try to lure your innocent soul into a devilish trap. The journey to choose the right path, while struggling to know your desired destination...

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John F Keane

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 15:39

Bolton is truly the hub of popular poetry in the North West. It is an example we can all learn from.

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Thu 3rd Mar 2022 14:49

Hello, Laura. How the devil (other demons are available) are you? Thank you. And you were a big part of it too.

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John Botterill

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 14:40

Wonderfully witty, Adam. I suppose that makes me a philosopher now. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 14:28

Welcome to WOL Jacie,

Reading your profile I completely agree with the idea of using poetry instead of a diary. I do the same albeit for different reasons perhaps. Look forward to reading your work.

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John Botterill

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 13:34

I empathise, John. It's the curse of processed food. I actually thought Spam had been banned by the Food Standards Agency!

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Laura Taylor

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 13:29

I blame the bloody lot of you tbh. And thank you from the bottom of my heart ๐Ÿ˜

Best of luck with it Mr Morgan, sending love from me and himself xx

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John Botterill

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 13:23

Super poem, Stephen. I naively thought we were beyond all this! Sadly it seems we are not!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 12:02

The photo is from the mid-60s - but I'm from 1944 originally. A wartime issue!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 11:30

P.S. I admit to artistic licence - I've actually just said goodbye to
"seventy seven"! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 11:18

Bang on the money. All aggressive warfare should be considered
a crime and held to account. This invasion is intended to obtain
expansion of this Russian government's influence and control.
It has nothing to do with any "threat" from NATO or "The West".
Indeed, the brazen manner in which it has proceeded indicates that no such threat is considered likely, not least the bumptious
boast of putting nuclear arms on "high alert" as an added
bully-boy tactic, clearly mocking in its "do you dare respond in
kind?" challenge..

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Thu 3rd Mar 2022 09:33

This has pleased me so much. A beacon in the darkness.
My own involvement in poetry was very much thanks to Dave who, in a phone conversation, persuaded me to attend John Jelly's little group:
'Bring your poems', Dave said.
'I don't write poetry', I replied.
'Course you do. Everybody writes poetry', he insisted.
So, I took my poems that no one had ever known I had written, read them out to the little group, and got applause (as, I should add, did everyone). Whether it was politeness or encouragement mattered not. I was expressing myself in my own words to people who listened and offered their appreciation.
Having previously worked in various community education settings, Dave and I understood its potential to offer such opportunities more widely. I should add that I acquired some of my most useful such understandings as a result of Dave's influence and mentorship, too, both professionally and as a friend.
So, I blame Dave. God bless him (other deities are available).

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John F Keane

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 09:28

What a great review for a great poet.

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Clare

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 09:26

Thankyou for your kind comments, Robert. I am glad you liked my poem.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 09:00

Thanks for your comments, Steve. And for the Likes, Aisha and Holden.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 08:59

Thanks for your comments, Steve.

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julie callaghan

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 08:40

I agree with every word. Thank you.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 08:40

The BBC was a trusted radio source for many in occupied countries in the second world war. And now it is making available more shortwave radio frequencies for Ukraine, to repeat the vital service it provided back then. But don't worry, Julie, our trusted government - you remember, the one awash with donations from Russians - wants to cut the BBC down to size.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 08:33

Some Russian soldiers agree with you, Steve. Or at least, that is what we are told. Hope it is true.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 08:09

I wrote this poem several years back, about an event that happened almost 40 years ago ... the Argentinian invasion of the Falklands. Ownership of Chelsea football club changed hands on the same day back then ... for ยฃ1. The purchaser was a Mr Ken Bates. By an odd coincidence of war and football the same thing is happening again now ... although this time the Russian oligarch Roman Abramovich, who bought Chelsea from Bates in 2003 for ยฃ140m, wants several billions to sell the club, it is said.

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 08:05

I wouldnโ€™t, cos itโ€™s David Icke.

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 08:02

I was with you all the way until the โ€œgirlie magsโ€, Stephen.

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Robert Shersby

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 06:35

So true. Timeless

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d.knape

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 02:57

Had no idea you were that old,
did you use someone else's photograph?
๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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New Shoes

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 02:45

I found the greatest obstacle was overcoming the fear of letting go of my control and having the faith, that if I let go, there would be the hands of love to point the direction.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 01:29

Ukraine we praise all these brave men
cowards who make fun must hide in shame and slide under Putin as he falls in the fire pit of hell.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 01:13

It worked with the humour trying to bring a sense of light into the dark side of pure madness.

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 00:44

Thank you, Stephen.

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Jacie Jacobs

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 00:00

This is my first poem on Write it loud, and I hope you like it!

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John Botterill

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 21:39

Thanks very much Stephen. Lovely comments.
I think it is a great play with much to say about the human condition but with very little in the way of scenery. A tree! ๐Ÿ˜‚

Thanks for the like, Ursula.

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John Coopey

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 18:49

Thanks for your thoughts Greg and Stephen. I do enjoy stretching the envelope of this delicate pastoral form.

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julie callaghan

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 18:40

Thank you for the kind comment and like Stephen G and for the like Stephen A.

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Robert Shersby

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 18:28

Great poem. Love the imagery of the attic and the sadness the dawning day and of dancing to someone elseโ€™s discordant Tune. So beautiful

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 18:04

I was thinking of mentioning Andrew Motion, but you sort of beat me to it, John. Nice lavatory humour.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 17:59

I had seen this in your book, Greg, and the last line shines out more than ever. The EU is not perfect (what is?) but we need a United Europe more than ever and the unity expressed up to now is very impressive.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 17:49

Timely, I think, Holden.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 17:47

Do not go gently into that brick shithouse, John.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 17:47

A remarkable poem, Leah. So sad. Thank you.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 17:44

A fascinating poem, John. One of the reasons why Waiting for Godot is (arguably) the 20the century's greatest play is because we can all imagine ourselves to be in it. Estragon would have suited me, I think.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 17:33

A tragic situation, Julie. Thanks for this poem.

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John Coopey

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 15:57

I believe even the queen had an annus horribilis once, MC.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 15:56

The EU's total countries comprise of a considerably greater land
mass and absorbent capability for large numbers of people than
these islands which - in hectares - France alone exceeds by
"X 3" !. I remain unsurprised that similar views emanate from
those with certain European "connections".

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 15:36

All too true as i say goodbye to seventy eight..
I'm inclined to recline!
Mind and body combine
To produce a design
That suits seventy nine!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 15:09

Hard to stomach!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
And it reminds me all too clearly of the time a "bad" buy from a
certain fast food chain saw me head home rather urgently
from my "local" after barely a pint, only to have to turn around rapidly and return to a thankfully vacant pub loo - just in time!!
I break into a cold sweat even now just thinking of how close I
came to literally s......g myself in public. Liquidity took on a
very non-banking meaning THAT evening!

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Robert Shersby

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 15:07

Thanks John, yeah following conversation decided to try out an unstructured one.
Hence why confidence I thought was a poignant theme ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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John Coopey

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 14:55

I like the image of the dandelion clock and the way it flits in and out of rhyme. Good to see a more unstructured piece than โ€œsee meโ€.

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Robert Shersby

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 14:22

Thank you so much Ursula, John, Clare, Stephen, Holden for the likes, I really appreciate it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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John Botterill

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 11:44

Thanks for the comments, Greg. Really enlightening and valuable. Much appreciated ๐Ÿ˜€

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