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Stephen Gospage

Fri 25th Mar 2022 07:30

Lovely poem, Stephen.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Fri 25th Mar 2022 00:51

Sissar a suckhole ~

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Fri 25th Mar 2022 00:46

Sissar a suckhole ~

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Fri 25th Mar 2022 00:41

sissay = traitor

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Thu 24th Mar 2022 23:44

Well written, Clare. Every single person on this planet is responsible for their own actions, good or bad. However, there are none so blind as those who refuse to see. I don't waste energy on folk who will always blame someone else, regardless of how many people they may hurt or offend.
The truth will catch up with them sometime. Karma is a powerful thing,
Blessings!

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Thu 24th Mar 2022 22:55

Armatige's first stanza is all about his being a poet.

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Thu 24th Mar 2022 22:45

Indeed K, unless otherwise stated all images are of my own volition.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Thu 24th Mar 2022 22:32

Thanks Keith for your comments on 'Wheeled luggage.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Thu 24th Mar 2022 22:20

cheers Brenda your like that contains "context"😌

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 24th Mar 2022 22:20

Must have missed this, Tom. Book me in the next time you go to one of these poetry events! 😄. Superb as always

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 24th Mar 2022 22:12

A nicely constructed, beautifully
written piece. 🌷

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 24th Mar 2022 22:08

😄 Nice one Mike...if a bit too familiar 😪

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 24th Mar 2022 22:06

Lovely stuff Brenda. 🌈

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Thu 24th Mar 2022 19:34

Oh...That's just beautiful, Brenda. Love it. 💗Blessings!

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Bindu Trigunayak

Thu 24th Mar 2022 18:43

Motivational and Inspirational...wonderful thoughts :)

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 24th Mar 2022 14:44

I'm grateful for the level-headed responses seen here.
There are historical references; a couple mentioned previously,
plus of course, a certain Imelda Marcos and Marie "Let them
eat cake" Antoinette. It has been held as a truth that women
provide a restraining civilising influence on men and this was in
mind when I began considering the theme of my poem. in the
context of this Russian president's behaviour.

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Tom

Thu 24th Mar 2022 11:36

Ah thank you Nicola! Your comment brightened my morning. And thanks Jordyn for the extra like too 😀

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Greg Freeman

Thu 24th Mar 2022 10:33

A masterly summary of where we are, Julie, and all those things that happened in between. But I fear that we're not quite at the end yet ... seems to me it's rife out there right now https://www.theguardian.com/world/2022/mar/23/nhs-under-pressure-from-new-covid-wave-across-england-says-chris-whitty

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John Coopey

Thu 24th Mar 2022 10:32

Good though they are, I think neither is quite as effective without the other, Greg. Although, having said that, we made it to the CL Final a couple of years ago without Kane.

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 24th Mar 2022 09:54

Great start to yourWOL adventure

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Greg Freeman

Thu 24th Mar 2022 09:13

Thanks for your very detailed response to the concerns raised, Jed. You have obviously thought long and hard about all this. I apologise if my own response was intemperate. It's just that when you realise we have another fascist, genocidal dictator on the loose in Europe, it's hard to keep passions in check. Russia's war hero status is well and truly over. For the Great Patriotic War of 1941-45, read Putin's Great Genocidal War of 2022 ...

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John Botterill

Thu 24th Mar 2022 08:55

As usual, Ghazala, you express a wonderfully positive philosophy! 😊

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Greg Freeman

Thu 24th Mar 2022 08:30

Cats are special creatures, to those that love them, Kelly. This is a beautifully composed poem of mourning. You never lose control. Lovely last few lines.

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Martin Elder

Thu 24th Mar 2022 08:28

Extra strong mints. What luxury. We had to make do with a polo mint and at Christmas a jelly baby and maybe a lump of coal.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 24th Mar 2022 08:27

Irreplaceable when injured, eh, JC?

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John Botterill

Thu 24th Mar 2022 07:36

Beautiful poem, Stephen. 😊

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John Coopey

Thu 24th Mar 2022 07:30

Thanks, MC. I tried to capture a sense of “reversibilty” in the relationship.
And thanks for the Like, Holden.

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Sunshine

Thu 24th Mar 2022 04:14

Yes Nigel. I'm glad you got that.....I'm happy, really happy😊

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Candice Reineke

Thu 24th Mar 2022 02:07

Thanks for your kind words, Russell 🙏🏽

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Jed

Thu 24th Mar 2022 00:29

you get me wrong I'm saying what I'm saying precisely not the baggage you may assume to associate with it. I appreciate that there are some circumstances where you can't help but take sides (good vs evil)but I cant help but look with what clarity I can at the last mechanism that led to war and I am baffled that the war was not averted by a concessionary agreement as it would have been by far the lesser of two evils but to pretend it would have been the same as kneeling to Hitler is obscuring thought with a two dimensional caricature. Although how the Ukraines are now fighting righteously for their homeland is obviously comparable.
I don’t have meticulous understanding of international politics so I would appreciate it if someone would delineate how Ukraine being controlled by Russia would be worse for the people in Ukraine than it would be with full blown warfare, as I don’t see or read much of this particular exact question being addressed in the papers or on TV. Please don’t base the answer or esoteric freedom, I mean in real manifest terms.

It’s easier to ask “what would be so bad for Russia and the average Russian if they didn’t invade?” If both countries suffered the woes of both these now hypothetical situations the harrowing would be barely noticeable compared to what is happening now. So what is the point in looking back to would have been possibilities? Because it is in variations of these scenarios that peace will eventually be found or wider possibly nuclear war will ensue.

It’s the difference between tolerance even when extreme hate and anger is involved) and something worse. In Columbia when a peace deal was possible to end the war between FARC and the government the agreement being starting positions, the forgiving of brutal murder on both sides, many affluent citizens in the city who were mostly personably removed from first hand experience of this conflict voted not to have peace as they could not forgive these crimes. Whereas most of the rural folk who experienced this conflict voted to end the pursuit of justice in order to have peace.

In the west we seem to assume that democracy is the greatest of things to bow down before in a secular society, but though democracy is needed, took thousands of years to achieve and hundreds more years to get half right it is not always the one thing to held above all others: in a town that is 20% Jews and 60% Nazis is democracy right to implement? It would have been better if Ukraine were raging for its right to join NATO for more independence deserving it and not yet getting it than this predicted barbaric invasion. What would be so bad for the average Ukrainian in real manifest terms if Russia had political oversight for a while? Please tell me.

As stated it is easier to ask what would have been so bad for Russia if they had let Ukraine be. What they now face, what will that be? Surely if they could go back they would have preferred to find a way to avoid the invasion and save face. Wars and mistakes happen because we forget to remind ourselves what the apex of the argument is and also what that is for. What is the reality of the invasion and what is the ideal that the invasion is supposed to be for? We must address the philosophy of intent to stop the evil that it engendered to ensue. To always paint the enemy as a 2d caricature only reducible to basest qualities doesn’t help when we need to recognise reality. To recognise it to improve it. The apex of their argument is the necessity to maintain and imbue a political cultural societal balance in this world to counter ways of doing things in the west. To have a balanced better world. Not to laugh wickedly thinking ha ha ha more power more glutinous control. We must look of the apex of the intention behind the disaster. Or follow what seems like the only plan: to keep fighting and see what happens.



In the90s the American sanctions on Iraq killed half a million children. Madeleine Albright was asked live on TV if these sanctions were worth it, she replied it was a tough decision but yes it was worth it. What was gained? Nothing, not a thing. Sadam did not suffer from those sanctions, his strangle hold on the people was worse and he kept his luxuries. What is the point of these sanctions on Russia? What is the difference between what the sanctions intend and what they actually do? There it is the big Question none of us like to answer because we have the wind of righteousness in our sails.The difference between what an action intends and what it does. To hurt Putin to show he is wrong and to starve people in Bangladesh. To put sanctions on Sadam because he is evil and to kill half a million Iraqi children. To counter American hegemony western new world order and to invade an independent nation causing mayhem and death.

Only by genuinely trying to understand the best of your enemy’s intentions can any prospect of peace be found. If you understand your enemy’s most valid posture better than they do then you have probably already won half the battle. If in your mind you obfuscate it or refuse to consider what it really is then the lessons to learn may be hard. And it was oh so easy too. The peace deal that was available back then compared to what is feasible in the future.

In the future what with the rise of China and all it would have been good for the globe if Russia had been closer to the best it can be. It meant to do a lot of good things in the future, but now this is what its become.



There is a question that I haven’t seen or heard asked before that I believe is of importance. I tried asking this question to the foreign office in a series of correspondences but they always avoided answering the question specifically as it seems answering it would elucidate a deep failure in British Foreign policy. Around ten years ago on the BBC program Hard Talk General Robert Moody announced that the war in Syria would end with Assad as the victor. The interviewer acted surprised and said what with Saddam and Gaddafi being toppled most people expected the same to happen with Assad in Syria, how would the British take this? General Moody responded saying that anyone in position already knew this to be so and the public would have to gradually get used to it. So my naturally occurring question was “Why support the opposition prolonging the war If you know they will lose, when we should aid ending the war guarantying protection for those that rose up against Assad?”

The foreign Office responded by telling me things like “Assad cannot be trusted” and that “Assad is a tyrant”. I had already taken these arguments into account and they made no difference to my point of question. Syria wouldn’t be Nazi Germany and nowhere as bad as Afghanistan under Isis. It certainly would have been much better in peace for the last ten years even under Assad than at war. Maybe if there had been ten years of peace some of the expectations of humanitarian progress that the west expects would have been achieved.

So what is the real answer to my question long and short “why perpetuate a war for over a decade when you know who the victor will be? Ultimately what would this answer elucidate?

So back to Ukraine. It seems that we are so confident that we are on side and right and that the cause is right that our actions may inadvertently engender more chaos. I watched on the BBC in one breath the reporter said "The UK has supplied weapons to the Ukraine, this will of course force the Russians to use heavier weapons and artillery themselves". I'm asking if this is right. As for sides there is ending the war to achieve peace and good living or the other side being all that apposes that..
As for writing bad poetry I have no defence but at least its brief.

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Nigel Astell

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 23:41

living your dream
your soul dances
to daylight dawn.

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Nigel Astell

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 23:30

A heart of gold
for all to see
living free
moonlight poetry.

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Clare

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 21:57

Moonlight, I think you are missing the point of my words. I am glad your relatives are still alive. I am not for one moment suggesting that all women will die at the hands of men - there would be none of us left! The fact is it is happening throughout the world everyday, and there are still some (a great many who seem to think that women are responsible for the choices that men make. Thankyou for your comment. I am very happily married to a wonderful man, and I wish the same for you - should that be what you choose.

Graham Sherwood, Je suis d'accord avec toi. Merci pour votre commentaire. I agree! Thankyou for your comments.

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Sunshine

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 21:46

Yes, carry on
Cos life still goes on

Sentimental write🌷

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 21:44

An incredibly strong piece Clare. One cannot dispute the dreadful statistics. Some men’s idea of love is difficult to comprehend indeed. Well done!

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Sunshine

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 21:44

Scary, but I'll still take a chance😉

Not all men are the same. Not all women are dead. My mom is 75 and alive. My sis is 44 and isn't dead. So women do stand a chance i guess😄

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Sunshine

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 21:37

My present situation is calm, peaceful, blissfully happy.

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Sunshine

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 21:36

Quite an inspiring spiritual story.

Thank you Nigel. 💕

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Sunshine

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 21:35

Thank you Martin.🌷

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julie callaghan

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 20:34

Thanks for the like Stephen. Hope you are feeling much better very soon Greg.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 19:28

I hope you're right, Julie, that 'Covid concerns are fading, those pandemic years in the past.' Anecdotally, it seems that more people are getting it than ever, now that they don't regularly report the figures. Including me and the missus! Take care out there.

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kJ Walker

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 18:32

Extra strong mints... LUXURY.
We used to dream of huddling round an extra strong mint.

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Telboy

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 17:05

Good to see a lively debate as most work on this site doesn't raise the hackles.

I note that the 'cancel culture' raised its head. You can't ban something just because you don't like it.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 16:29

Sadly as with many pieces of work that are contentious, the 'argument' eventually revolves around the commentary and not the work itself.
For most Mr and Mrs Average (me being firmly in that category for the last 51 years)both the male and the female of the species do tend to discuss virtually everything before decisions are made.

Even more sadly, despots, tyrants, megalomaniacs, dictators do not seem to share a similar relationship, ergo discussing any potential 'influence' that their partners might have (and I include both sexes in this as there have ben many prominent female leaders)is somewhat futile and at best hypothetical.

Let's hope whoever eventually manages to 'influence' Putin (male or female) does so quickly for these valiant people of Ukraine!

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 16:23

I have had a good life, thank you. The wish is reciprocated.

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<Deleted User> (32907)

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 16:16

I am so disgusted with this I cannot reply anymore. Have a good life!

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 16:09

Does an impartial enquiring mind never think about what
passes between men and women in such situations? One comment mentions Eva Braun. Is there really no curiosity in
what she might have done or said when with the Fuhrer in
the privacy of their personal lives? I find that hard to believe.
Remove the emotive sexist responses and apply a clear bias-
free mind to a very human question of how power can be a
addressed in purely human terms between people who are
intimately related and influence each other in the closest
ways. It is not a matter of "blame" - as seems to be assumed
so readily in the sense of "outrage" seen here. It is posing a question about human interaction in extremis with the eyes
of the world upon those concerned.
Go back a little in history and check a
certain Eva Peron in Argentina. The
world was fascinated by her.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 15:40

Deserving of being printed in a Spurs football programme.
Clever in its consistency of the to-ing and fro-ing of the lines
finishing the verses....suggestive of the passing of the ball itself.

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<Deleted User> (32907)

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 13:05

'Putin's Women'? Really? Grow up, MC

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Russell Jacklin

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 11:35

Got that picture firmly in my head, great descriptions, especially 'An older woman bends to fix her sock' seen that so many times😀

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