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John Coopey

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 11:21

I must’ve missed this first time round, Stephen. Very vivid. Reminded me of “Old Friends” by Simon and Garfunkel.

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John Coopey

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 10:07

Memories and mysteries.

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Tim Ellis

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 09:49

Really sorry to hear this. I met David a few times when I first started writing poetry 25 years ago and he still lived in Yorkshire. Although I haven’t seen him for years I did exchange messages with him several times via WOL and he always remembered who I am. He will be greatly missed in the poetry community.

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Martin Elder

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 08:30

Thank you Stephen, bless you my friend

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 07:36

Many thanks to both of you, Julie and Stephen, and to Holden and Rudyard for liking the poem.

A change of pace from some of my recent postings.

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John Coopey

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 07:33

Ah, those long ago evenings, Kevin, when we had to huddle round one of Grandad’s extra strong mints to keep warm.

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Holden Moncrieff

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 02:07

😄
Thank you so much for the kind words, Stephen, your encouragement means a lot! 😊

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<Deleted User> (32907)

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 00:52

Clare, I hear you! As a woman I find the tone of this poem offensive, MC should have more respect for the courageous women affected by this war, and remove the poem from the site..
The title 'Putin's women' is so patronising. The women in these countries are trying to survive, like the other people there. Never mind trying to influence their men.
The Ukrainians are the most courageous people I have ever witnessed. The women there are ready to fight beside the men to defend their country. Mothers are giving birth amid bombs and bullets,. The women of Russia are also courageous, and doing their best. Have a little respect and remove the poem.
I am disgusted too, Clare.

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John Marks

Wed 23rd Mar 2022 00:39

Thought I'd read this somewhere before. Facebook. Good as gold Ray. Once knew a guy who worked on a sewage farm. Always got served first in the pub.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 23:07

Clare, the admins (as you term us) do look at all work added to the blog section together with any associated comments. Whilst I understand your indignation concerning the central sentiment of this piece (which I feel at best is a very clumsily explained, ‘behind every good man, there is a better woman’ analogy) I feel that MCN’s question is a valid one. The fact that the analogy is benign in the case of dictators etc, is no bad reflection on women per se.
Personally, where Putin is concerned, I don’t think he takes heed of what ANYONE says, let alone what any female influencers he may have (are there any?) deign to pass to him.
I hope this goes in some small way to assuage your disgust and disappointment with us.

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John Marks

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 22:41

Cheers Stephen. So do I. Just.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 22:35

Poetic toilet humour at its finest 😄💩

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 22:30

I have to reach for a dictionary every time I read your writes, Holden 😆 The wordsmith in full flow. Great stuff! 👏

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 22:23

Nice one Martin. Some great lines.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 22:19

Lovely moments...until they poo on your arm...Nice one though!

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 22:13

Wonderful use of words, Julie

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 22:11

Thanks to Stephen and John for liking
and thanks to Holden for your comments. Those are also the lines I like most.
Cheers
M

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 22:10

Beautifully succinct!

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kJ Walker

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 22:06

I don't remember this one at all.
Not because I'm not old enough, but we never had a telly back then.
Sounds like I've missed a good in.

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John Coopey

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 20:25

Thanks for your thoughts, Graham and Stephen.
BTW Graham, any ideas why the accompanying pic and audio aren't sticking?

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Clare

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 20:23

I think this is nothing more than misogynistic bile. It is not welcome on this site and you should be ashamed of yourself. I am absolutely disgusted that admin has not challenged this.
'what fails the women in his life' Are you for real!

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 20:19

A lovely poem. Thank you.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 20:12

I remember this episode, John. A top poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 20:10

Great one, Ray. The browning version is priceless, if not odourless.

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julie callaghan

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 20:08

Love this. Thank you

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 20:05

I remember this, John, and was subsequently surprised to see a younger Richard Basehart in Fellini films (La Strada etc). Quite a career.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 19:54

Brilliant, Stephen.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 18:38

Thank you so much for your kind comments, Holden, Tom, Julie & Martin. They might give me a bit inspiration to get something down again!
And Thanks for the Likes Ursula & Russel 🌷🌷

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<Deleted User> (32907)

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 18:17

No offence, but what the hell can they do? I suppose you could ask why didn't Eva Braun do her bit with old Hitler? Of course, we could also blame good old Dennis for Margerate Thatcher's policies? ? Or maybe not. He was a man, after all. Just don't follow your logic, sorry!

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<Deleted User> (13740)

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 16:32

I'm sick too got covid. Know how this feels too. X

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<Deleted User> (13740)

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 16:30

I know how this feels.. I'm old too but my nephews are young. I sometimes wonder what will become of me I've made so many mistakes. 😓

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<Deleted User> (13740)

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 16:25

Wonderful poetry ❤

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Holden Moncrieff

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 15:10

A really powerful poem, Martin! I loved the lines
"In the morning will be gone by half past sorrow
Disappearing under the song of another jealous night" 🌷

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Holden Moncrieff

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 15:00

Thank you for the kind comment, Martin, I really appreciate it! 😊

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Pardonable Eternity

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 14:24

Thanks martin for liking it
Am not much of a poet yet learning still don't know till when

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 14:22

Thanks Greg, I'm sickened by it all 😞 thanks Martin great to see you at Stockport mate 😃

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John Marks

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 14:07

Thanks Martin. I'm very trying.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 13:03

Worst of all Eliot Ness was 2nd in command!

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John Coopey

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 12:51

We must be a couple of old gits, Martin.😀
And thanks for the Likes, Holden, Aviva and Stephen.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 10:47

I am merely posing the question about what influence they might bring to bear upon the men in their lives when bad things occur. What comes up in conversation at such times is, for example,
surely a matter for legitimate speculation, not to mention basic human curiosity.

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 10:05

This is fabulous Stephen. One of your best in a long time. I particularly love the line
'On the easel of God'
love it

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 10:03

Excellent Jeff. I particularly like the last line. Love it.

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 10:01

I remember it well. It was totally out there but great fun.

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 09:57

Fabulous Ray. I love it

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 09:56

What a great line
'In a flat that stunk of slaughter'
Wonderful poem bringing things up to date. Love it

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 09:54

I love the rhythm and flow of the is piece. It's fab

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 09:52

There are some great lines here. I think the stanza that begins with I'm a chef of love is my favourite.
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 09:50

Its that's last line that seals the deal. very good

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julie callaghan

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 09:49

I love it. One of my favourites. I was the same, tweaked Poet Tree to bring it up to date.

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Russell Jacklin

Tue 22nd Mar 2022 09:34

Is this Ganda as in to have a look, or should it be Panda as in Pandering,
If Churchill had taken the knee back in 1940 then A. the world would be in two halves, communist and Nazi backed non-communists ready to blow each other up other than the diverse community we are now in, B, there would be no Jews, possibly no Christians, No Muslims all of which add to our rich tapestry, just look at the diversity on this site and the wonderful words that diversity brings. and importantly, C you would not be writing poetry and be able to put your viewpoint across, you would have one viewpoint, the states.
It is directly because Churchill didn't take the knee that you have that freedom and people with freedom should support others wanting it, that includes those unfortunate souls inside Russia, Putin excepted.
I do like the line ' When he lit the refuse' a good bit of wordplay.

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