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jennifer Malden

Mon 5th Dec 2022 15:26

Jawohl John! Nice one. Under Alles this time.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 5th Dec 2022 15:25

Really loved this one! Hope you get the 9 points in your football boots! Liked the song too.

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Dawn

Mon 5th Dec 2022 15:24

I like the ending... leaves a little suspense

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John Coopey

Mon 5th Dec 2022 15:21

A unique and curious take on it, MC.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 5th Dec 2022 15:06

Following up on UIC's points: The thing I find inexplicable (unless there was an agenda in her behaviour) is why Ngozi
Fulani of the black women only charity "Sistah Space" should
use an assumed name and apparel that declared oriigins from
elsewhere than England or even the wider UK, yet seemed
unwilling to put her enquirer's mind at rest by the simple
expedient of some polite and helpful elaboration. E.G. "I was
born here in the UK but my ancestry/family origins lie in... ."
and at this point -
she could have mentioned these to help explain her mode of
dress and adopted name>. As it was, she seemed to have
been intentionally obtuse and Lady Hussey took the baited
hook. The question now is who was the real victim here? 😗

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 5th Dec 2022 14:50

psithurism
Just looked it up.

Word of the
day
week
month?

and "Chronos' quicksand," Love it!🎓

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Russell Jacklin

Mon 5th Dec 2022 12:18

Thank you, Uilleam.
John, I have a copy of Pilgrims progress and I have visited the House Beautiful so the connection between that and my piece of work is appreciated

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John Coopey

Mon 5th Dec 2022 11:51

And that’s the point, Uilleam. Anyone might ask where someone is from. But to refuse to accept the answer betrays the innate racism of “You can’t be; you’re black”.

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raypool

Mon 5th Dec 2022 10:59

Thanks for the likes Stephen x2 and Jennifer..

Yes Graham, where will it all end? never of course.

An interesting take Uilleam. It was always very macho spearheaded by the Hollywood machine. Schools don't seem to be havens of security any more so probably not! By the way I used to love the smell of the spent caps!

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raypool

Mon 5th Dec 2022 10:52

Hi Jennifer, hope you're well. A strange coincidence you posting on this, as the dishwasher was repaired and now some while later it's broken down again - this could be the moment for a re-assessment a la poeme ! Glad it made sense,I was happy to think of Excalibur.

Ray x

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Jennifer Cooperider

Mon 5th Dec 2022 10:02

These are great. KEEP PASSING ALONG THE PEACE LOVE AND TIE DYE

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keith jeffries

Mon 5th Dec 2022 09:22

A poem which clearly speaks of accountability before God at the end of life. We are all given a variety of gifts to enrich the lives of others. If we ignore this then we enrich only our own lives to the detriment of others. Hypocrisy abounds amongst the wealthy and powerful and they will go to no ends to keep their ill gotten gains and power. Politicians wield power supposedly on the behalf of the people but in reality feather their own nests. This brings anger and resentment but rest assured they will all be held to account. As with the Pharaohs of Egypt as they lie in their tombs bedecked with wealth, they took nothing with them when their time came only their misdeeds.
An excellent poem.
Thank you for this
Keith

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John Coopey

Mon 5th Dec 2022 08:59

Never a problem buying for Our Gert, Uilleam. It’s a formula - WinTobGin. Wine, Toblerone and Gin.
Never fails
And thanks for the Like, Frederick.

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John Botterill

Mon 5th Dec 2022 08:56

Thanks so much for your lovely comment Jennifer. 😀The rectangular pencils were for drawing lines on wood ready for sawing. I tried to capture a time when workmen were valued and crafted original furniture. He was a good man, my father!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 5th Dec 2022 07:59

The Serenity Prayer

God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change,
courage to change the things I can,
and wisdom to know the difference.

Toblerone it is then....😉
9 points.......?

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K. Lynn

Mon 5th Dec 2022 03:51

Thank you, everyone, for your thoughtful comments and for reading this poem.

And thank you, Write Out Loud, for giving us the space to read and write.

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Holden Moncrieff

Mon 5th Dec 2022 02:15

Such a beautiful poem of wise guidance, Hélène! 🌷

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Holden Moncrieff

Mon 5th Dec 2022 02:12

Thank you so much, John! 😊 I do apologize for the presaging of a terrible event! 😬

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 5th Dec 2022 01:14

Thanks Keith and Telboy and Uilleam! Something about sound that increases the breadth and depth of experience. 🌷

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Sun 4th Dec 2022 22:50

So beautiful Jennifer. Thank you.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 4th Dec 2022 22:46

Thanks for your likes and comments.
Bloody well appreciated.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 4th Dec 2022 22:31

the song of the wind

I like that.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 4th Dec 2022 22:18

"learn to walk in another’s steps".

Well said.

That other may be an angel in disguise.💓

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Dec 2022 21:51

A poem of a few words which in essence says a great deal about an evil man.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Dec 2022 21:48

A poem which is topical and speaks of the misfortunes of today's world. The second stanza stands out with a clear message to the reader.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Dec 2022 21:45

A chance encounter well described.
Good poem
Thanks
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Dec 2022 21:44

A poem which uses to the full a descriptive quality which will entrance any reader.
Well done. A good poem
Thanks
Keith

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jennifer Malden

Sun 4th Dec 2022 21:33

The awful thing is that they have left so many of the dead Russian soldiers to rot by the wayside. Apparently the mothers don't get a pension or other compensation if the soldier son is just registered as missing, not pronounced dead.

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jennifer Malden

Sun 4th Dec 2022 21:27

Enjoyed this one Ray! Only you could write a poem about washing up! As bright as Excalibur indeed! Actually once over it is a satisfaction, or perhaps just a relief? Why do the white goods always go wrong on Friday evening, when you have had friends to a meal?.

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jennifer Malden

Sun 4th Dec 2022 21:01

Lovely! I can remember people putting a pencil behind their ear too. Knew a person like this who could put his hand to anything. The result was always decent and sometimes brilliant.

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jennifer Malden

Sun 4th Dec 2022 20:58

Frightening, as it brings back memories of hard times many thought were behind us. Great writing as always, Keith.

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jennifer Malden

Sun 4th Dec 2022 20:50

Absolutely!!!!! Well said.

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Jason Phillips

Sun 4th Dec 2022 19:42

Hi Stephen,

I appreciate your words of praise. This poem came to me in a way I can't quite explain. It's like a feeling of something you've done by yourself so often, but wanted to share with another. Those moments when you are most alone, and while not uncomfortable, you still find yourself wanting company. Thank you again for your comment. Words like yours and some of the lovely people on this website help me with the confidence to share.

Thank you
Jason

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John Botterill

Sun 4th Dec 2022 17:57

Sublime poetry. The triumph of good over bad. A modern 'pilgrims progress'
Bravo JD. 💪

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John Botterill

Sun 4th Dec 2022 17:52

Lovely. Next you'll be saying "cup your hands around a candle to keep warm" haha 😂

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John Botterill

Sun 4th Dec 2022 17:44

Wonderful poem, Clare

"She pushed away the night's long slumber
She usurped the fading moon... "

Perfection 😎

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John Botterill

Sun 4th Dec 2022 17:41

Extremely profound, Holden. A poem which presage some terrible event... 😫

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John Marks

Sun 4th Dec 2022 17:23

Thank you Uilleam & Jennifer, I do not imply that you or I have a personal responsibility for what has happened to the Christians of the Middle East. But I do think that as members of society we do have a responsibility to educate ourselves and put pressure on our governments to act in defence of a persecuted people.

The genocidal persecution of Assyrian Christians has a long history. As non-Muslims (kafirs) they were treated (at best) as inferiors who paid jizyah (a special tax on non-Muslims). There were often sporadic massacres of Assyrians which culminated in the Ottoman empire's genocide of all (estimated at 4.5 million) non-Muslims (Greeks, Armenians, and Assyrians). The persecution of the few remaining Assyrians intensified again with the rise of Daesh (ISIS). Soon, all non-Muslims will have been killed or driven out. And the west does nothing. PS I am not a Christian.

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John Botterill

Sun 4th Dec 2022 17:13

Said with passion. Too true, Uilleam! 😀

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 4th Dec 2022 17:09

It isn’t asking the question which demonstrates the racism; it’s the refusal to accept the answer.

That was my initial view on the matter, John, however I await developments with interest.

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indicates someone wearing a helmet and long cloak
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indicates someone waving a sword-like-weapon about
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no its not prime ministers question time!!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 4th Dec 2022 16:53

Thank you, John.I do appreciate your praise for this poem. It is based on (perhaps half-remembered) experiences of younger days, although the fans dangling from tower blocks is completely authentic (from an FA cup replay against Hereford United in 1972).

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Hélène

Sun 4th Dec 2022 16:52

A really wonderful poem...I felt the clouds, the stray cat, the wind...the poet. Beautiful.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 4th Dec 2022 16:49

I'd just like to mention that no sausages were injured in the making of my last comment...being a very thick-skinned lot as they are.💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 4th Dec 2022 16:46

A good poem, Stuart. I think Bernard Levin once said "What is important is to be enthusiastic." And he was!

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John Botterill

Sun 4th Dec 2022 16:45

Fabulous poem. Captivating and atmospheric. I love the falling cadance and the fading dreams of the last line. Bravo! 💪😎

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 4th Dec 2022 16:43

Thanks Telboy-will do.

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John Botterill

Sun 4th Dec 2022 16:39

Thanks KJ and Stephen.
You are so right, Stephen . Dads, in my experience, could turn their hands to anything diy. Where did they acquire the knowledge? And why didn't we? 😀😂

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 4th Dec 2022 16:38

EEEH, aw that fuss ooer a bag o' wind!😊

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