That's an excellent point, Ray. It's true that a safe distance in terms of time and space makes what one is describing seem more interesting. There but for the grace of God - I feel that every day!
And thanks once again to all the likers.
Comment is about Mile End (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Your poems are always an event, Ray. This climaxes in the 'silly face of the speedo'. This conjures up so many things.
Do we need to travel, or is there something deeper which complels us to try it?
Comment is about TRAVEL (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Fri 9th Dec 2022 04:47
Really powerful, and written with great sensitivity, Stephen! 🌷
Comment is about Woodchip (blog)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
<Deleted User> (34685)
Fri 9th Dec 2022 00:08
Mike j( with respect) join one of the dozens of fantastic community groups unless that is this is just a poem for poems sake. Nothing worse than being alone especially at Xmas
all the best my friend and hope you get sorted 👍
LS
Comment is about Grip (blog)
Original item by Mike Bartram
<Deleted User> (34685)
Thu 8th Dec 2022 23:16
A poem which took me back to the nature rambles we enjoyed at school which took place irrespective of weather conditions.
Keith
Comment is about Heptonstall School (blog)
Original item by John Botterill
A poem to prove that in the depths of winter beauty can still be found.
Thanks
Keith
Comment is about Dreamy Picture (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Thanks for the like, Julie 👍
Comment is about Heptonstall School (blog)
Original item by John Botterill
I enjoy your focus on the sky, Julie. It helps us when we connect with Nature 😀
Comment is about Dreamy Picture (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
A poem, although brief speaks of contentment in the face of endless ambition and futile aspirations
Thanks
Keith
Comment is about Yet we seek more (blog)
Original item by Daryn DeMoss
Daryn,
Welcome to Write out Loud. I have been a member since 2017 and have enjoyed submitting my poems and commenting on the poems of others. I hope you find the site a good home for your work.
Keith
Comment is about Daryn DeMoss (poet profile)
Original item by Daryn DeMoss
That photo' says it all - what would Nanny say?
Well written and well said Uilleam.
Comment is about Etonian Gaslighters (blog)
My praise for your excellent poem would be to observe how that the more dire a subject and well described it is the more uplifting it can be, by sheer ability transporting us into a zone of there but for the grace of God go I ; one reason could be that you and me revel in the less than salubrious and consequently fascinating interplay of the charmless areas we have experienced!! I have certain memories of 70s Walthamstow, pre gentrification.
Ray
Comment is about Mile End (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
<Deleted User> (9882)
Thu 8th Dec 2022 18:10
Maybe last of the heroes M.C ? God bless em all the long the short and the tall 🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖
Rose 💋
Comment is about SQDN. LDR. GEORGE "JOHNNY" JOHNSON DFC MBE - R.I.P. (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
<Deleted User> (9882)
Thu 8th Dec 2022 18:02
I totally agree with Beth Helene-beautiful and then some!
Rose 💋
Comment is about Prayer for Wisdom (blog)
Original item by Hélène
<Deleted User> (9882)
Thu 8th Dec 2022 17:59
A definite nail smack bang on the head poem Uilleam but what a bloody shambles this country that SHOULD be OURS is in the hands of arseholes-god help us!
Rose 💋
Comment is about Etonian Gaslighters (blog)
Quite, MC. And thanks for the Like, Stephen G.
Comment is about "FOR WHOM THE BELL TOLLS" (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thanks for the kind comments and likes
Comment is about Christmas Time (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Thanks, John. I probably do, although a damp morning at Bank underground is a tough test. Or perhaps not....all that proximity in crowded trains.
And thanks to everyone liked this.
Comment is about Mile End (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Thanks for the kind comments and likes
Comment is about Warm And Cosy (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Stirring stuff, Uilleam. The comment on the Smogg is perfect.
Comment is about Etonian Gaslighters (blog)
I love the rhythm of this, Flyntland.
Comment is about OUT OF FOCUS (blog)
Original item by Flyntland
Johnny Johnson and those like him were truly courageous, not that whining couple currently on Netflix.
Comment is about SQDN. LDR. GEORGE "JOHNNY" JOHNSON DFC MBE - R.I.P. (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Really powerful. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment is about Alcoholic (blog)
Original item by Daryn DeMoss
Beautiful in its simplicity & sentiment. Thank you for sharing this. It picked my day up!
Comment is about Kindness and Love (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Thanks Bethany. So appreciate the encouragement on poetry & just making it through this crazy life. 💞
Comment is about Prayer for Wisdom (blog)
Original item by Hélène
Timely in its timeless reminder of the importance of kindness and
charity in our lives.
Comment is about Kindness and Love (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
If H. had written "The Sun Also Rises" today, some would have
thought it was going to be about life and work in the newspaper
business!
Comment is about "FOR WHOM THE BELL TOLLS" (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thank you Leon and Helene for your kind comments and to Stephen for reading and for your like,
Comment is about OUT OF FOCUS (blog)
Original item by Flyntland
Thankyou, Leon. And for the Likes, Bethany and Stephen A.
Comment is about "FOR WHOM THE BELL TOLLS" (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (33540)
Thu 8th Dec 2022 11:12
I am with you all the way on this very beautiful poem Helene.
Comment is about Prayer for Wisdom (blog)
Original item by Hélène
<Deleted User> (33540)
Thu 8th Dec 2022 11:12
I am with you all the way on this very beautiful poem Helene.
Comment is about Prayer for Wisdom (blog)
Original item by Hélène
<Deleted User> (34685)
Thu 8th Dec 2022 10:53
a reet nayce bit o scribing by heck JC ba gum
LS
Comment is about "FOR WHOM THE BELL TOLLS" (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (34685)
Thu 8th Dec 2022 10:50
clever clever clever! you clever BASTARD! 😈
LS
Comment is about Etonian Gaslighters (blog)
Ho Ho Ho
I am admittedly a bit of a Humbugger, but fortunately (for the family) my wife is the anti-dote.
A fine balance
Thanks for taking the time to look over and comment on Ebenezer
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Greg - I gather the original title was
Oo’s tha ring-gin that thee-er bell fo’?
Comment is about "FOR WHOM THE BELL TOLLS" (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
A refreshingly new take on that Spanish Civil War tome, John! And you're right. If it wasn't for the dialogue, maybe it would have been as good as A Farewell to Arms ...
Comment is about "FOR WHOM THE BELL TOLLS" (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Marvelous snapshots of your yesteryears, Stephen. But I think you underestimate the resilience of amorous intentions.
Comment is about Mile End (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
You corner the market in these songs, MC. Bring on the audio.
Comment is about CHRISTMAS SNOW - an annual seasonal song (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
This resonates with our family's experience of my mother-in-law, Stephen, whose brain is rapidly emptying with dementia. (Her, that is, not you!)
Comment is about Woodchip (blog)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
As Avicii say, "Wake me up when it's all over".
Comment is about Ebenezer (blog)
Original item by Stephen Mellor
<Deleted User> (34685)
Wed 7th Dec 2022 20:41
such a fabulous and fabulously flowing poem Flyntland 👍
LS
Comment is about OUT OF FOCUS (blog)
Original item by Flyntland
I can understand the temptation to be a Seasonal stooge -
When everything seems on the scrounge - and emulate,
Ebenezer Scrooge? 😉
Comment is about Ebenezer (blog)
Original item by Stephen Mellor
Ah...some welcome positivity as the Festive Season approaches.
I like the concept be being grateful for what was there to be enjoyed and appreciated in the past.
Comment is about Christmas Time (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
So many thanks for taking the time to read and pass comment on Ebenezer.
Fortunately my wife is the counter-balance to my humbuggedness
Comment is about Stephen W Atkinson (poet profile)
Original item by Stephen W Atkinson
Beautiful and atmospheric, Jennifer! 😀
Comment is about A Mellow Yellow High (blog)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
John Botterill
Fri 9th Dec 2022 08:00
Thanks Keith. No, they didn't mollie coddle us in those days, did they haha😂 Thanks for the like too, Holden.
Comment is about Heptonstall School (blog)
Original item by John Botterill