I am sorry to tell you mr Coady... you have failed your driving test.

Comment is about Car Crash Blowjob (blog)

Original item by Kealan Coady

This is a great piece Ann. One meaning of 'Ghazal' is the dying cries of the gazelle as you may well know so that ties things together nicely. Clever to how you have incorporated the different words for this type of animal in the first line of 6 shers, maybe they could be placed more evenly in the ghazal? liked. Win x

Comment is about gazelle ghazal (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Hi Emma, lovely to see this on here. It was a great and loving rendition at the white lion. great also to see the painting which inspired it. Win x

Comment is about The hares (blog)

Original item by Emma Decent

Aw, C'mon Laura - surely HalfManHalfBiscuit have done summat appropriate ?? :D
[car crash blowjob - Kealan]

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

Original item by Laura Taylor

Aw, C'mon Laura - surely HalfManHalfBiscuit have done summat appropriate ?? :D

Comment is about Car Crash Blowjob (blog)

Original item by Kealan Coady

@Jules: Thank you J.
@Laura: I see the link- eek! also 'hahaha' ;o)
@Ray: Thank you Ray, Boccioni's 'Football player' a favorite of mine and I 'tagged' to give authorship. :o)
@Cynthia: Thank you for your previous! lol

Comment is about Funny Boned #2 (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Yes... And if it is any consolation - I have been waiting too ; )
I like the intimate way you express your thoughts.

Comment is about Still Waiting (blog)

Original item by Tom

..thanks Laura..no style really, it's just the way I fingerpick the mandolin..some more of my songs if you google 'stepmoth', (on 'myspace')...cheers ..chris.

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

Original item by Laura Taylor

I agree with the words of Larisa and Stefan especially - liked your poem - a lament of your times x

Comment is about My generation (blog)

brill poem mate

Comment is about Poetry Vandle (blog)

Original item by Burns

I am so touched...very funny especially in the loo ha ha keep marriage alive!!!

Comment is about It's so very touching (blog)

Mmm...nice,bleak imagery in this Kenny! Gruesome,tactile language.Well done,matey!

Comment is about Flotsam (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

cool mix of shakespearean language and the ever popular jezza kyle show x

Comment is about Was it for thee (blog)

Original item by christine yates

I haven't spotted the revisions precisely. My comments of great enjoyment still stand.

Comment is about Funny Boned #2 (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

This is a fine lament, steeped in classical 'hopelessness', the enjoyment of unrequited love. You have a deft feel for the ageless romance of this theme.

Comment is about Still Waiting (blog)

Original item by Tom

Thom, try googling StirredWomen if you haven't already. She is definitely associated with that poetry group. I hope you find her.

Comment is about Themed Poetry Competition (blog)

Original item by Tom

My sincere thanks for all comments. IF I ever had a favourite work of my own, this MIGHT be the one. The girl was/is me, already then a 'physical woman', so early. This is the only admission to autobiographical content that I will ever concede. Children make their own 'happiness' far more inventively than adults do. I have always felt blessed by the Celtic genes from my Irish forebears, a spiritual bond with nature that could never be out-doctrinated by religious influence.

Comment is about The Dream-footer (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Why have you got Boccioni football player tagged to this. Is it a joke?
Is it the punchline to the next poem?

Comment is about Funny Boned #2 (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Liked this, especially the first verse. I think it's skedaddled. Talking of punchlines, whenever I see the name Tommy Carroll I think Stand-up Comedian. Funny that.

Comment is about Funny Boned #2 (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Thanks to all, you are very kind :-)

Comment is about For the Good Times (blog)

Good performance piece this in my opinion Chris. Very topical and i love how you manage to portray 'the same old story' theme using old fashioned language then bringing it up to date using Jeremy Kyle.
I detest that show! ;-)

Comment is about Was it for thee (blog)

Original item by christine yates

Excellent. Harder than it looks.

Comment is about gazelle ghazal (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

I really enjoy reading this form and yours is just super with a lovely story and imagery. Very enjoyable :-)

Comment is about gazelle ghazal (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

i like this...i ll leave poetry on the bill for your next meal and watch you work out its percentage charge
ill write it on your mirror in lipstick, in words red and bold and large...write it in your comments where you think that it is all about you, and write it on on your tv screen so you cant watch any of the programmes that youre used to...
it can go on ;)
vandallous.

Comment is about Poetry Vandle (blog)

Original item by Burns

I didn't read this first time around cos I thought it might be 'sloppy', well duh me!

Cold cruel ending there - very 70s Alice Cooper!

Comment is about Valentine (blog)

Original item by Steven Kenny

Ever heard that Cramps song, Bend Over I'll Drive? I think you'd like that.

Comment is about Car Crash Blowjob (blog)

Original item by Kealan Coady

Aye, sweetly poignant this Janet - but if I get Manic Monday stuck in my head for the day after this, I'll be bloody haunting YOU! ;p

Comment is about For the Good Times (blog)

Thank you Ann x

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

thanks Andy :-)

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

Original item by Andy N

Ahhh sly bugger, you did! :D Ace

Comment is about Poetry Vandle (blog)

Original item by Burns

Nope Tommy - I can still see Middle East, to the bottom right of this poem, there's a hyperlink to it

Like this much more now that you've edited, btw :)

Comment is about Funny Boned #2 (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

whoops theres my vandalism, on me own poems lol Thanks for you comment

Comment is about Poetry Vandle (blog)

Original item by Burns

Ha,ha - I like it.Course, you've forgotten the sonnet on the dusty car-bonnet.

Comment is about Poetry Vandle (blog)

Original item by Burns

Thanks for your comments and Rachel well it was a dream well a day dream and regards to me spelling im a creative writer not a educated one its one thing i need to sort out well thats why i prefer slaming then writing but thanks for your comment love your work and love to hear more ;)

Comment is about Dream (blog)

Original item by Burns

Hey Melanie the poet who didnt know it ;) Thanks for your comment its good to know when people can get lost in my dream, keep in touch
Peace

Comment is about Melanie Coady (poet profile)

Original item by Melanie Coady

Hehe - had me chuckling this, bet it's great read out loud.

Did you mean to misspell the title btw?

Comment is about Poetry Vandle (blog)

Original item by Burns

Have you managed to sort it now?
Paul explains it better than I - and also all the other changes WOL has recently implemented -

http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/newsgroupview.php?NewsThreadsID=1068&NewsGroupsID=26

Cx

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Hi there

WOL chat has a few little foibles that can make conversation challenging. I'm guessing from the long silence that you navigated away (there's no turning back sadly)and I was talking to myself (cut & pasted below)... hope it was of some help. You can message me (or any of the admin. team) if you're still having problems

Cx

'a few changes on site yes -

if you got to your profile

on the right hand side you will see your last few poems - you can access any one by clicking on it

the way blogs display has changed

so only your latest blog will show up - but the others are all there

if you go in to your latest blog

you will see underneath

all your previous blogs for the month in blue

we were trying to find a compromise that would suit those who were finding the many blogs difficult to navigate but at the same time not restrict those who like to write more

oh - and chat on here is hopeless so if you've navigated away from this page ... you can't get back and i am now talking to myself'

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Yes very good, I like poems about life and death.

Comment is about That is all (blog)

Original item by David Mac

Love is lijke that, a mixture of hate and desire.

Comment is about I Love You, I Love You Not (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Very meaningful as usual

Comment is about My generation (blog)

Nice and dreamy

Comment is about Funny Boned #2 (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Hi Chris!
Thank you for the comment on 'Funny Boned' I could not view it and now that I have re-submitted it (slight edit) the submission 'Middle East' has disappeared! Has there been a change in the 'format'?

Comment is about Funny Boned #2 (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Sorry about this folks, this poem (slight edit) was unavailable for me to view and I tried to access it to no avail, however Chris WAS able to view it. I do not know what is going on here. :o/

Comment is about Funny Boned #2 (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Superb.
Cx

Comment is about Funny boned (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Hi Elaine I'm glad you liked the poem.

Comment is about Elaine (poet profile)

Original item by Elaine

Nice one Kath again - particular liked the first two lines... good stuff xx

Comment is about Dreamer (blog)

Original item by Kath Hewitt

love it, janet.. one of my favourites of yours so far and it's also defo one to be read / performed i think owning to the beat with it... top one!! xx

Comment is about For the Good Times (blog)