sweet & nicely woven. reminds me of the sadness of keats.

Comment is about Stars Would Gladly Cast Their Gleam (blog)

Original item by Dave Dunn

nice, lyrical & tough.

Comment is about Untitled (blog)

nice poem and lovely title Dave-best regards.

Comment is about Stars Would Gladly Cast Their Gleam (blog)

Original item by Dave Dunn

only just caught up with this and would like to join the chorus of appreciation. Great stuff

Comment is about warningwolverine (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Yes writing this was so much fun
Once I had found me specs
I enjoyed it just as much
As I used to enjoy . . . crochet :)

Comment is about warningwolverine (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Of course I did it on purpose! Honestly - what are you all like!! That's why the writing is a delicate shade of pink :)

Comment is about warningwolverine (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

BTW - I was assuming that you'd done the WOL/LOL and Bits/Nerves (no tits) on purpose ??
so am I (like)an effin ijit or are you a poetry-like Goddess ? Hmm?

Comment is about warningwolverine (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

marvellous ! - you had fun here didn't you ?? xx B

Comment is about warningwolverine (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Thanks A.E.! Very kind words...

Comment is about Nagasaki Shadows (blog)

Original item by Nash

Thanks for your comments on the Uncertain Narcissist-very spiffing : )

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

Thanks for your comments Francine and Isobel-when I have performed this poem in public there are usually a few titters and gasps, but what the hey : )

Comment is about THE UNCERTAIN NARCISSIST (blog)

Original item by Gareth Writer-Davies

wow!!

Comment is about Afternoon Novena (blog)

Original item by Tom Harding

absolutly loved it darlin xx

Comment is about The Big Society (blog)

Original item by Jack Pascoe

Hi David. Yes, thanks very much for your recent comments on the Betjeman poem and Touch Wood. Fair enough, if he's not your cup of tea. I was quite taken aback by the amount of affection he engenders. Of course, I feel a great bond because of his love of trains. Sometimes I find it difficult to write about anything else but railways!

Comment is about David Cooke (poet profile)

Original item by David Cooke

I've just been catching up with your recent poems. (All very good and hope you've seen my posts.) I was inspired to put my latest on after reading your recent railway poems.

Comment is about Greg Freeman (poet profile)

Original item by Greg Freeman

A 'stew' of words, all simmering together, each 'ingredient' keeping its individual taste but contributing to the final flavour of the 'dish'.

Are you calling this style experimental? It is interesting, for sure; needs a lot of discipline in word connotation/associative idea manipulation.

Comment is about Health (blog)

Original item by Kealan Coady

Like the way you bring us to the scene and depart again and leave it for us to remember our own similar experiences as motorists - it dwells in the mind though these shocks and we keep going back to the same event in most cases - talking/writing about these experiences certainly helps and as you so rightly put it 'makes you think'

Comment is about Routine is death; Death is routine (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

Re: Jacob's Ladder as you so correctly infer is the link between this world and the next as well as a colloquial term for the rope ladder on the side of a ship - your comments always appreciated kind sir.

Comment is about Greg Freeman (poet profile)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Hi Nash,

Admired the way you came at these tragic events from a different angle, and without overt sentimentality. Great cross-referencing and an understatedly humanitarian conclusion.

Excellent,

regsards,
A.E.

Comment is about Nagasaki Shadows (blog)

Original item by Nash

Hi Terry.a beautifully heartfelt poem.enjoyed reading.best regards.

Comment is about Untitled (blog)

All photos for Butterflies Gigs Bar, Bolton Write out Loud taken by Rachel Bond.

Comment is about Gemma and Chris Lees at Butterflies Gigs bar, Bolton Write Out Loud Mar 2011 (photo)

All photos for Studio Poetry The Studio Liverpool Mar 2011 taken by Rachel Bond, with exception of this one, taken by Rebecca Audra Smith.

Comment is about Rachel Bond Studio Poetry The Studio Liverpool Mar 2011 (photo)

Oh yes now i see. Please excuse, i had the wrong specs on. How the heck did you get up there?
...and is that as a young person with...is that red hair i see?
and how big is that mug? :-)

Where was it taken? I've never seen that chair before.

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

I love this one Gareth. It is good to see bi-sexuality/homosexuality explored so subtly. As others have remarked, the poem has good flow and imagery.

Comment is about THE UNCERTAIN NARCISSIST (blog)

Original item by Gareth Writer-Davies

Thanks Francine,
I was a but iffy about the title, will play with it, until it sits right :)

Comment is about Abstract Notions (blog)

You must know my views on catharsis by now Anthony…
I do write the occasional autobiographically inspired piece – though my pride would stop me from going to the outer limits. I think women are more inclined to give vent to their emotions in this way and I don’t see it as a bad thing. Catharsis only gets a bad name when the needle gets stuck and we fail to look beyond ourselves. Our own blood and tears are but a drop in the ocean when you take a look around.

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

I really like the feeling and images this evokes, even though the last half is a bit of a downer. I personally would give it another title though...
'Abstract Notions'

Like the lines:
'Existence was not enough to tame us'
'We mix strife and strain with acid rain'

Comment is about Abstract Notions (blog)

This is really good, Ann - so creative and fun!

Comment is about warningwolverine (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

I love the title!
This flows along nicely, and like Cynthia, I find those last lines reflect well what you are saying.

Comment is about THE UNCERTAIN NARCISSIST (blog)

Original item by Gareth Writer-Davies

OK, I'll 'fess up! If there wasn't that "little bit" of "us" in our writing it would all be much the same I suspect. That doesn't mean though that we write all our "characters" and scenarios from first-hand experience. Isn't that what imagination's for? ( although I wouldn't have minded being George Best for a while!)

" . . . a heart, a strong mind and a very sensitive soul."

I nearly fell off my "big chair"! Does The Pope know this- I should be in for Sainthood!

;)

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

Who was it who wrote that all writing is autobiographical, in that through our writing we reveal ourselves?

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

Thank you boys! xxxx

Comment is about warningwolverine (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Well, I'll go to't foot of our stairs, I will. Michael has actually offered a comment, after years of his words being the raft on which all of ours float.
See what wonders your poetry can evoke, Ann?

Comment is about warningwolverine (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Thanks for paying me a visit Anthony - what doesn't kill us certainly makes us stronger :) Am working hard on doing more performance/funny stuff - though I fear my latest may be too blue to post on WOL. Co-incidentally, it also bigs up Wigan - the best place to perform in the whole North West, from my experience. We don't take ourselves 'too' seriously up here, which makes for an entertaining evening. You will have to revisit your roots one day. xx

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

I loved this one too. Not a clue what it was about but the first line hooked me in and the rest held me there to the end.

Comment is about Summerset (blog)

another beauty Rachael : ) sorry i'm late, been away and just trying to catch up. This reminds me of a story I used to read to my son when he was little about a mouse who collected colour during the summer and wove it into stories to tell to the other mice in winter to keep them going when all the food had run out. deb xx

Comment is about Collecting light (blog)

I agree, beautiful Rachael, Deb xx

Comment is about The edges of sadness (blog)

hiya Andy :)
thankyou for your comment on 'driftwood faces' much appreciated!
catch you later
Rach x

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

Original item by Andy N

thanks lynn for your lovely comment on The edges of sadness :)
ive been having a break its nice to come back and post :) x

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

Original item by Lynn Dye

You don't spare us much here, Ray. But lines such as "eyes drawn forth and back / to the oxygen tap, weighing the minutes,/ rehearsing the ritual of mouth to mask" reveal someone who has witnessed these pain-filled moments, kept vigil. "This sliver of inheritance, my slice of the takings" has a rueful edge to it; someone who can't quite be comforted by the knowledge that he has fulfilled his duty, kept faith and even shown love, by being there.

Comment is about Ken (blog)

Really enjoyed this Joshua :) to quote dorothy there really is no place like home ,a charming read and full of contentment and warmth.
good stuff
Rachael x

Comment is about Home (blog)

Original item by Joshua Van-Cook

Thanks for the comments.
Elaine. How did you know he was an uncle?

Steve. I posted it on PG a while back. Do you still go on there? I'm an infrequent visitor these days. I ought to stop completely, it's depressing.First glance I read "You should be punished" which is probably nearer the mark!

Comment is about Ken (blog)

nice structure and balance throughout the piece, rach... love the first stanza and carrying effervescent cargo in particular.. top one x

Comment is about Driftwood faces (blog)

lot not said here, Terry and stronger for that, I think... very interesting - possibly the prologue to a series or sequence.. enjoyed it - andy n

Comment is about Summerset (blog)

Wooo, MJ, I am indeed honoured! (And this site is soooo brill!)xx

Comment is about warningwolverine (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Thanks for commenting everyone, it's much appreciated, especially sorting out the spelling. The last couple of lines are deliberately enigmatic, and can be taken whichever way the reader wants. Some of the guesses about what was in my mind were close but how important is that?

Comment is about Our secrets (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

Hi,
I am one of the two lead developers of WOL jointly leading a team of two (me and him). And in all my years I have never had a poem written about a bug, for this I thank you. In the five years of WOL I have never contributed to the content of the site but when someone cares enough to write a poem like this I feel move.
M
P.S. This box is too small I will make it bigger.

Comment is about warningwolverine (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Wise guy huh?
I suppose you think that's funny?
Typical from a North-South divided male! :-)

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

Hi Isobel,

Thanks for looking in on "alpha et omega", and, as always, for your comments - never drivel! As always it is in no way autobiographical; you should know by now that I seldom do that kind of stuff.You are right in that it's "generic"; hopefully anyway. Most, if not all, have been in "those" situations, and I wanted to write something universal. There was no conscious link between the first and second "couples", although I can see how it might seem that way. I'm pleased you found your own interpretation. I did try to shift the focus by using second-person he/she in alpha, and third person they in omega. Not sure if that worked.

I'm glad your compering stint went well; the challenges we set for ourselves make us stronger and more confident, and it looks like you were appreciated.

So, now you're "a performance poet living in Wigan" - don't sell yourself short! ;-)

Regards,
A.E.

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

He was not a great leader (wrong dog, wrong hair) but was I believe a great orator, speaking from the heart - all dead now leaving only a string of puppets being cast out of the same moulds to lead us - David

Comment is about Farewell Michael Foot (blog)

Original item by Julian Jordon