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I drown in your whispers
they cut me inside,
I remember the only best day
in this unwanted life.
It was a lovely sunny blue day,
and I believed your lie.
That's not a good way to treat a man,
and you do it all the time.

If I say I'm leaving Sunday,
by Tuesday I'll be gone,
Friday I'll have another fallen angel
that I call home.
By Monday morning you'll be on the phone,
but you'll never find your lover,
I'll have moved on.

◄ Summerset

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Tom Harding

Thu 24th Mar 2011 20:04

nice, lyrical & tough.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Thu 24th Mar 2011 09:08

Hi Terry.a beautifully heartfelt poem.enjoyed reading.best regards.

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