Hi Andy changed my posting, will work better , i have some work on my profile and will post some more.

Comment is about My book Air of Fall (blog)

Original item by Chris Lawrence

I agree with Anthony here Chris. Worth looking at the link as it was a bit fiddly getting it to work, and that will put people off.

Samples I always think are important on things like lulu.com.

Good luck.. A

Comment is about My book Air of Fall (blog)

Original item by Chris Lawrence

thank you Dave xx

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

Original item by Dave Bradley

thank you Anthony. just a brief return for now I think because of this ‘story.’ I’m somewhat caught up in it and others like it right now and needed to express some part of it all. thank you for your kind words. I hope you are well: )

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

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Thanks Anthony - any words from the master much appreciated. B

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

Beautifully put together John.

Comment is about I Dreamt You Were Little Again (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Hello Greg. Thanks for the tip re correct way to allow dead goldfish to mature prior to consuming. I shall certainly bear it in mind for next time.

Comment is about Greg Freeman (poet profile)

Original item by Greg Freeman

I will post two pieces from the book that appeared in Troubador21 magazine, thanks for looking Anthony

Comment is about My book Air of Fall (blog)

Original item by Chris Lawrence

Hi Janet,

I don't think this needs any tinkering with. You're having us on! It works well for me, the line breaks being effective punctuation. Don't chuck it away again!

Regards,
A.E.

Comment is about The One That Got Away (blog)

Hi Dave,

Now we all know who knows! Nicely thought out and constructed. I guess you could take the last line a few ways. So, what's your secret?

Regards,
A.E.

Comment is about Our secrets (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

Hi Ann,

I always admire those who dare write about their dreams. Yours seem very well defined and vivid. Do you have a hankering for the Harem?

Do you believe that dreams have meaning - or are they jusy our brains doing their "filing" while we sleep? Loved "whale thick sea."
The only dreams I ever seem to be able to remember are the recurring ones ; especially those where I have the ability to fly. I never want to wake up from those.

Regards,
A.E.

Comment is about on waking (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Hi Alan

Welcome to WOL . Looking forward to seeing your samples.

Winston

Comment is about Alan Gillott (poet profile)

Original item by Alan Gillott

Hi Chris,

Just to let you know that your link isn't working - you need to include the "lawrencejoefish" in the link. I did take a look at the site/book after some tinkering, but was disappointed to find that there were no samples of your work. Why not post some here?

Regards,
A.E.

Comment is about My book Air of Fall (blog)

Original item by Chris Lawrence

Mornin chuck

Re cycle haiku - there's a question mark because although we've got to the end of the poem, we haven't got to the end of the cycle. It questions the notion of being complete, because the cycle cannot be so :)

You weirdo, having a clean teen bedroom ;p

Comment is about Shoeless Carole (poet profile)

Original item by Shoeless Carole

Arthur Haynes, eh?
I knew him before he wrote all them manuals.

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

A great poetic call to conscience to all those who have held, and continue to hold, the foolish and evil belief in human autonomy that has damaged the world so badly over the past few decades.

Particularly good lines...

'Fellow-prisoners know, but not mates

The barmaid knows, but not dates.

They're soaked in the walls of houses,

but kept from the ears of spouses.'

Big cheers for contemporary gnostics.

Comment is about Our secrets (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

Mr Pew ?(pugh)... I dunno - you young 'uns - no proper education. Hmph ! (clue - Charlie Drake)

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

ah - dylan Thomas - I see - you're way ahead of me there. Seriously - I've nothing against the Welsh - just a bit of a laugh :D
and churches - I'm not mad keen, but pretty ones like Cartmel Priory are a revelaton. I much prefer old mosques & minarets for some indefinable reason - I dont really know why, as I have no particular like or dislike of islam

Comment is about Shoeless Carole (poet profile)

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you crack me up Ann- whaddya mean you dont know what's going on ?it's just me, in church, behind two old biddies gossiping & putting the world to rights - that's all. xx B

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

ps I love the new profile piccie - one can really see the likeness!

Comment is about FLOUNDERING (blog)

This is a bit of a change in style for you John. Don't recall you ever writing anything so dark or serious. Your poem is simple and stark - you express yourself well. x

Comment is about FLOUNDERING (blog)

Wonderful crafting. I love the title and the generic nature of the relationships - (does that word work in this scenario?. What I am trying to say is that the women involved are not necessarily the same - though I have the feeling it is the same man. I got the feeling that something had been sacrificed in the beginning and the loss of innocence is what could have led up to the failed second relationship.
The poem would also work if it were the same woman in both situations. I love the way that it is open to interpretation. All a bit sad and Casa Blanca - but you do it so well.
Better hit the 'add comment' and see what a load of drivel, I've just posted :)x

Comment is about alpha et omega (blog)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

Graham, I don't have lizards in my bedroom in Cornwall in March - or any other time. What are you like? :)

Comment is about on waking (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

I'm only pulling your leg - I know you are a big sweetie really. I presumed you must be quite familiar with Ann, to speak so bluntly. It must make funny reading for newbies though! x

Comment is about on waking (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

I just wrote this this morning as soon as I got up, describing my dream. I might have expected a bit of psychoanalysis but not character assasination Graham ;-) Give a gal a break!

Comment is about on waking (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Sorry Isobel. I hope Ann knows I'm a big fan and looking back I should have sounded less demanding, but I am always critical of Ann's speed to publish, perhaps because I'm a tortoise.

Comment is about on waking (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

We all seem to have posted comments at the same time.

Comment is about on waking (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Ann its the journey thing and the hankering for past things (schoolfriends etc) I'm sorry I thought you'd woken up to see the lizard. Perhaps the dream contents deserve a bit more considering. Aren't they supposed to be allegorical?

Comment is about on waking (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Ahh - Dear Old Dicky - not an actor, of course, but an actorrrr!
I can t take it seriously (sorry) puts me too much in mind of the tellings by William J. MacGoonigal (fast fwd to 2.00 )
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=etSGpgXyrPg

Comment is about Shoeless Carole (poet profile)

Original item by Shoeless Carole

So that told you Ann! LOL And I'm wondering what Graham might do if you don't sort it...

Graham has a point about the microscopic - though I didn't give it thought until he did.

The poem has an absurd, surreal feel to it - the one you would get from dreams that don't mean anything, I suppose.

You have some odd line breaks going on in here also. I've got a bee in my bonnet about line breaks since Anthony's thread - I'm starting to really notice them. Perhaps you wanted a disjointed feel.
An interesting poem. I've never written about dreams before - I feel inspired...

Comment is about on waking (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Hmmm . . . you are right about the word microscopic regarding the way it sounds, but I would query the fact that you could not see it if it was in a dream. Surely you can do anything in a dream? You can fly, so surely you can see something that is microscopic. Similarly, why do people suddenly appear in dreams, when you haven't seen them in forty years? I don't know. The images of the sea were the strongest ones in my dream, you are right there. And I am always missing buses in my dreams. In fact buses are a reccurring theme! I have no idea why.

Comment is about on waking (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Microscopic is a nasty word in poetry and is not correct, as you wouldn't be able to see it.
I think you should re-write this and change it around to accentuate the whale thick sea and the mountainous waves, the drama of the perilous cliff edges and why did this friend suddenly appear. There is a lot of potential intrigue here. Sort it out.

Comment is about on waking (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

hi Greg.new one on me re Dr.Winston'
o'Boogie(top name!)ta.

Comment is about Greg Freeman (poet profile)

Original item by Greg Freeman

good poem , i was uber wierd and had an L shaped room the bit by the door was horrendous so that folks wouldnt enter , the rest was beautiful , clean calm , sweet smelling and welcoming. with marc bolan on the dansette :)

Comment is about Teenage Kicks (blog)

Original item by Laura Taylor

i like the poem , why do you need the final question mark , what are you asking ?

Comment is about Cycle Haiku (blog)

Original item by Laura Taylor

A beautifully crafted evocation of people, time, place and relationship.

Comment is about alpha et omega (blog)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

A really wonderfull poem Anthony.

Comment is about alpha et omega (blog)

Original item by Anthony Emmerson

Hi David - many thanks for your supportive comments on Reliquary, I'm pleased it worked for you at least.

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

Original item by Dave Bradley

Hi Ann - many thanks for both of your supportive comments on Reliquary - I'm pleased it worked for you at least. x

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Hi Isobel - re: Reliquary - do appreciate your commenting. x

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

i thought maybe Dave was meaning the guy upstairs and wasn't counting himself(no doubt all will be revealed b4 long in this instance) but personally i think psychologists and counsellors know more secrets because himself 'up there' could be like Homer Simpson on a busy day and all the new stuff(everyday more secrets, requests,prayers,etc) might push out all the old stuff, so he'll forget things,whereas the professionals have to write them down incase we go completely doolally. but on the other score I felt compelled to investigate;
Confidants; plural of confidant
Noun: A person with whom one shares a secret or private matter, trusting them not to repeat it. Merriam-Webster.
Confidante;
A woman to whom secrets or private matters are disclosed.
1.A woman character in a drama or fiction, such as a trusted friend or servant, who serves as a device for revealing the inner thoughts or intentions of a main character.
[French confidente, feminine of confident, confidant.
http://www.answers.com/topic/confidante
ok, i'll go away now..way too much thinking for a Sunday morning..

Comment is about Our secrets (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

Love it Terry - Class !

Comment is about A Single Night (blog)

well, there's you & the guy upstairs (for a religious type like you ?) so isn't that two?
BTW (an error in a Dave Bradley poem - horrors !) but it's confidantes, innit ? :D B

Comment is about Our secrets (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

Hi Laura

Thanks for commenting on No Point; Point. I hope all is well over there

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

Original item by Laura Taylor

Intriguing. Teases differently on each reading.

Thanks for commenting on No Point; Point, Cynthia. You really are one of the best commenters on WOL

Comment is about the perfect word (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thanks for your comment on BITCH. I use the term bitch because I think sometimes when women act the way they choose instead of conforming to what's expected they are labelled a bitch and basically if that makes me a bitch then yeah well thats what I am. However thats other peoples perception of the word not mine! Hope that helps.

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thanks for comments :-)

Steve - yeah, i see what you mean :-)

Isobel - They used to teach punctuation when i was at school too. It's mostly those flippin' colons and semi-colons that confuse me. I'm proud to say i got 96% in English language and 97% in English lit in my GCSE's but that was a very long time ago :-)

Comment is about The One That Got Away (blog)

Quaint? How dare you! ;) (Thanks Francine!xx)

Comment is about museum diary part 2 (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Thank you, Steve. :)

Comment is about Half Closed (blog)

Thank you, Cynthia. My dream journal entries are my poems, and some dreams fade fast while others remain strong. Where I am in life now is at a crossroads, but if I can change, then I can change for the better. And I hope so.

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