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And I pray you never see me
for what I am,
because years can change that.
And I'm older now,
so much for being older now.
And in that thick black smoke of Summerset
you'll never be able to see me.
I'm not born again,
but I'm free.
And I'm stronger now,
so much stronger somehow,
since that filthy black wind witch
lost another lover to the rain.
lot not said here, Terry and stronger for that, I think... very interesting - possibly the prologue to a series or sequence.. enjoyed it - andy n
<Deleted User> (8943)
Tue 22nd Mar 2011 15:40
I like this, it's underscored with things unsaid; there's a story here and you're not telling, just nodding wisely...
Philipos
Mon 21st Mar 2011 23:23
I agree with Francine - elusive but compelling at the same time and richer for the mystery
I like the elusive quality of this... very intriguing.
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alisonsmiles68@gmail.com
Wed 23rd Mar 2011 14:17
I loved this one too. Not a clue what it was about but the first line hooked me in and the rest held me there to the end.