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Melanie Coady

Updated: Wed, 20 Jul 2016 06:14 pm

melanie coady

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im not a poet,i wouldnt say that anyway,its a place for me to spatter the thoughts in my brain that i cant keep in there...


Oh davey dave,i found you lurking in a cave Mandolin on your knee and a lark like song on your lips Jealous bitter friends,disguised as angry bats Feelings buried deep as slippery subterranean salamanders How i wish i was that mandolin,being strummed so beautifully How i wish i was those lyrics on your lips,a fluid filled orgasm of recipricated love Don't mind this dark murky cave I'll bring the light in baby Don't mind the bats I brought my cats

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Wed 11th Jan 2012 16:45

"Dont mind the bats, Ill bring my cats" so innocent, yet so obscure... loved the poem, great roll to it!!!

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Mick Waring

Sun 11th Sep 2011 21:23

Hello Melanie. Glad Kizzy made you go 'Ahh..'

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Andy N

Fri 9th Sep 2011 11:33

Hi Melanie - thanks for the comment over 'End of Summer II' I'm glad you like it, - pretty well sums the weather up round at the moment - lol xx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:38

hey-angel eyes!
muchas gracias re-frustration.

have a peaceful night.



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Andy N

Wed 6th Apr 2011 08:16

thanks for the comment over 'Up on the Roof', Melanie... Glad you like it... It's one of those pieces I must admit that I wasn't sure how everybody would react to it, but pleased you like it... Thanks - Andy N x

<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 1st Apr 2011 14:31

belated thanks Mel for comments on 'Tynonidae'-just back from hols-to discover I had left a line out(listens intensely)doh! ta lots.xx

<Deleted User> (7212)

Wed 30th Mar 2011 22:12

thanks - That's on Rhodes, that is :)

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John Coopey

Wed 30th Mar 2011 22:04

I'm afraid the man in the pic is not me.
By the way, are you a vegetarian?

<Deleted User> (8951)

Wed 30th Mar 2011 21:35

Hi Melanie,
thanks for your comment on Don't live in shadows cast, They mean a lot and inspire me to keep on writing THANHS. Ian..

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Wed 30th Mar 2011 10:07

Thanks for visiting, reading and responding to my poems Melanie. You are most appreciated.

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Wed 30th Mar 2011 02:32

Hi Melanie, thanks for your comments on 'No Jobs For A Man' - and my apologies once again for the tears! Hugs, Dave

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John Coopey

Wed 30th Mar 2011 00:38

Glad you liked Ken Dodd....

<Deleted User> (9186)

Tue 29th Mar 2011 20:57

Thanks for the comment - Dave

Terry White

Tue 29th Mar 2011 13:46

Thank you for the many comments and appreciation!

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Rachel McGladdery

Tue 29th Mar 2011 13:41

Thanks Melanie :) x

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Jack Pascoe

Mon 28th Mar 2011 22:15

p.s just put another one up if you're interested

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Jack Pascoe

Mon 28th Mar 2011 22:10

Thanks for all the kind comments Melanie. You're fast becoming my biggest fan on here :).

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Andy N

Mon 28th Mar 2011 21:40

thanks for the comment on 'Spring is coming' Melanie.. It's one of those pieces this one that was a little interlude between longer, heavier stuff shall we say but I had great fun writing it

let's hope it a good un this year! A

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 26th Mar 2011 23:01

ta Kool Koadys Kid for comments on 'Late revelations.mucho appreciated.x

<Deleted User> (7212)

Sat 26th Mar 2011 17:45

Thanks !
(I have no idea what the offside rule is :D )


Fri 25th Mar 2011 22:25

Hi Melanie - glad you enjoyed When Man Has Gone - thanks for taking the time to read it x

<Deleted User> (9215)

Tue 22nd Mar 2011 15:42

Hi Melanie
Thanks so much for taking time to read the poems I've posted so far, you're very kind.
I'm really glad you liked them.
Amy x

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Jack Pascoe

Fri 18th Mar 2011 18:16

Thank you Melanie. I'm glad it was good reading for ya. I just put up a link to my site if you wanna see me reading them on video. Got some new poems on the profile too. Ain't really been paying attention to this site for ages. I got the notification of your comment by e-mail and now my relationship with it is rekindled. Thanks for that :)

P.S Loved 'Bastards'. I know how you feel on that one. It's nice to use poetry as therapy.


Wed 16th Mar 2011 21:17

Hi Melanie - glad you were able to comment on The Colours - thank you x

Pete Crompton

Wed 16th Mar 2011 19:51

The subterranean salamanders could be a band!

thanks for your comment on 'Silence'


Tue 15th Mar 2011 10:40

Hi Melanie - thanks for taking the time and trouble to comment on Psalms x

<Deleted User> (8951)

Mon 14th Mar 2011 21:03

hi Melanie

thanks for comments on The Devine curse. I'm really grateful for your feed back and all your comments, they are fuelling my passion for writing more than ever. Never thought i'd get so much out of a web site that i only singed up for to shut my mate up . I'm really glad i did. Thanks xxx


Sun 13th Mar 2011 17:40

Thank you for commenting on 'Jehovah' Melanie and 'The Colours' - do appreciate your taking the time xx

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melanie coady

Sun 13th Mar 2011 11:33

no wrys yer works xx

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David Mac

Sun 13th Mar 2011 11:28

baby, baby, baby,
thank you,
thank you,
thank you!

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